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Reviews for Choke

By : ktatters
  • From ANON - projphilanthropy on October 08, 2008
    Okay...don't quit reading just cuz of my first sentence, alright? :V

    Now, quite frankly, not to be rude, I think Liquid/Otacon is incredibly weird and gross (and nonsensical, but not so much, after I read this). I'm very very picky with fanfiction and slash, not that I read tons in the first place.

    That said, this fic is really amazing. You characterized Liquid and Snake incredibly well, and Otacon too, especially considering the plot. I really love love love how it fits in with Shadow Moses; it shows how much effort you put into this. It's just really the first Metal Gear fanfic I've read that I've actually enjoyed. So I want to thank you for that, sir or madame.

    Lots of love, and keep writing,
    projphilanthropy.
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  • From Angstreunion on March 28, 2008
    I really like this story!

    Its well written, the characters are believable and very much as you would expect them in this senario.

    Top Marks! Love It!
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  • From vivarose on July 25, 2007
    xD secret hand shake! I love it! a very well done piece, you captured the mind set with frightening accuracy!
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  • From ANON - SeijiroMakabe (Lazzzeh) on February 10, 2006
    Yey! That update was better n.n although I think it could be further written, but I don't want to pressure you Cause your work as it is is perfect. ^_^ please continue!!!
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  • From ANON - That Guy on January 14, 2006
    Your summary doesn't even begin to do your story justice. What it fails to describe is a surprisingly deep, pathos-ridden story with an actual plot. I don't even like homoeroticism and I'm loving every word. Kudos, my man.
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  • From ANON - Neko Otacon on November 22, 2005
    Oh for the love of all thing cute and fluffy, FINISH THIS FANFIC!!!! O_O
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  • From ANON - SeijiroMakabe(too lazy to log in) on November 14, 2005
    No xD Not a cliff hanger, now I have to use my imagination.. Which is somewhere stored in thousands of boxes. But this story it was exellent honestly o_o you keep getting better and better when if comes to these. ^_^ Hehe you should get persmission some how and publsh them >> but thats just me of course, I am not the smart
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