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Reviews for A Lesson in Obedience

By : maiafay376
  • From ANON - ZombieDuke(too tired to login) on November 28, 2005
    Two things: I cannot play RE4 without thinking of everybody humping Leon (Of course Leon dressed as a 40's Gangster doesn't help, lol). And second, have I mentioned recenently that I love you? Damnit I WORSHIP your writing skills!!! There should be alters in your name! Mostly because you draw people in and keep people sucked in there! Poor Village people, DAMNIT! Now the image of Salazar, Saddler, Mendez, Luis, Leon and Krauser singing 'In the Navy' is stuck in my head! ARRGH! But netherless! This is a GREAT story! Fanatastic! *clicks to re-read story*
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  • From ANON - summer on November 27, 2005
    Another excellent job.
    Summer
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  • From ANON - Shadows_Corpse on November 26, 2005
    Good so far, keep writing.
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  • From ANON - summer on November 22, 2005
    This was another fantastic job. I can't wait to learn more. I like how he ran into Mendez again instead of the villagers.
    Summer
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  • From on November 21, 2005
    I have to say this... You are awesome! I cannot wait to see the *Cough* Sex scene *Cough*, I think I'm coming down with something ;)

    Can't wait to read more,

    -A.E.
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  • From ANON - striker on November 17, 2005
    Wow, yet another great story from you (even though it's in the same universe as "Rare Side Effects")...

    Nevertheless, there's nothing I can really say constructive crit wise... it's so well done... O_O

    Keep up the great work! ^_^
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  • From ANON - ZombieDuke(Not logged in) on November 17, 2005
    O_O EEEEEEEEEEIIIII!!!!! XD I was wondering when someone would do these two! Just the scene of Leon laying on the ground(in the bedroom) with the chief standing between his legs pointed to all aspects of yaoifulness!
    I look forward to the sex scene! *pauses, turns red and coughs* Ah-I mean the plot! Yes! More plot please! Lotsa and Lotsa plot! *nods*
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