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Reviews for A Lesson in Obedience

By : maiafay376
  • From BalthiersGurl on June 21, 2008
    Great story well written and everything. I LOVE Leon!!!
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  • From ANON - Noa on September 27, 2007
    ...Holy hell. Wow.

    Wow...
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  • From Morganite on March 13, 2007
    This is really hot.
    Thank you :D
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  • From ANON - ix-tab on October 21, 2006
    Just me....I'm just re-reading this, as I wait for more of your other fics.

    God I love this. It hits all of kink buttons, so very hard. You write my favourite smut, and my very faourite non-con. Thank you for this! :)
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  • From ANON - Leona on October 19, 2006
    Please keep going. This is one of the best stories ever. Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 13, 2006
    Faaaaaaaaaantastic. An insta-fave if there ever was one. Mendez's cruel sexual sadism and Leon's helplessness and the pure sexiness of the situation make this such an awesome slice of debauchery. >=3 You did good to take advantage of the favorable situation the game gave you (I.E., the whole master bedroom option cutscene), and I loved how you kept them both in-character. Fantastic work! =D Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Blind on September 21, 2006
    I remembered that I had left this fiction without a review and the guilt dragged me back since it's the least I can give for such a arousing read.

    First off, it was very well thought out (your whole RE fiction series is) and not slopped together like a lot of fanfictions I have passed as if they had played, read, viewed these characters for the first moment and assumed they knew their persona and dynamic structure impeccably. Your sentences are wonderful; there is thoughtful detail without needless overkill. And on that note, I really love your description (or I guess the personification) of the soul lost in the Ganado body. It was disturbingly beautiful in my opinion. I think the only thing that irked me (and only because it is a pet peeve of mine) is the convenient bottle of oil. It detours me away from the fiction and I begin to wonder if these people just happen to make plans of raping people around town. Perhaps that's just me. But other than that, I really enjoyed the fiction and couldn't help but giggle sadly at Leon's poor predicament, remembering when I dumbly followed Mendez into the room even AFTER he beat the chocolate out of me and I came back for a second round.

    Anyways, great job and thanks for the wonderful read!
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  • From ANON - Sam on July 18, 2006
    That was wonderful I love your storys your really good at it I love the torture aspect to it as well. I can't wait to read more keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - ix-tab on July 13, 2006
    I love this universe, the strangeness, and the rules that gorven it. You have an amazing imagination.

    This is so hot, and wrong in every way that is right. I love broken Leon, and your charactisation of him always rings true.

    And the sex is mind meltingly awesome, as always.

    Another piece of your work that I have enjoyed reading immensly.
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  • From ANON - Midnight Moon on January 27, 2006
    Its so sick, this is so fucking sick..... I love it. I feel so bad for Leon but I can't deny that this is really hot and just picturing it in my mind it makes me shudder. I swear I'm in love with the way you write. I was biting my nails and my heart was beating fast as if I was Leon. Lol, I hope that made sense. You're a really great writer and I wanna see more chapters soon!
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  • From ANON - Cami on January 05, 2006
    Wow... this was fantastic. I was quite surprised. ... Very thoughtful and, forbid, sexy. One of my favourite RE4 fictions. And very few mistakes. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Arashi on January 03, 2006
    O.O

    ...........

    .....

    HAWT. OMG. MMPH. I love this story. It's isanely titillating how poor Leon tries to escape again and again, poor baby T.T I've never seen such well-written boi-smut before, save for when I read "Rare Side Effects" after this one. (Soul Bond scene, anyone??)

    Please keep writing! My rabid fangirl side demands it!


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  • From on December 13, 2005
    *squeels* I LOVE YOU! Even though Mendez is so... well, let's not get into that.. he creeps me out *shivers* Great fic though, darkly arousing ^^ Non-con rocks, keep up the good work, poor Leon *pets the agent on the head* he's always the victim..
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  • From ANON - sephykoi on December 07, 2005
    Ok, so I kinda just realized that I didn't review yet. *dies* Sorri! 'Course, I LOVE this fic. :D It's so hot and... very intriguing. What was it that Mendez felt about Leon?? *hmms on that* :3

    Good job!
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  • From ANON - puku2x on November 29, 2005
    Wow,this is probably the 3rd fic of this kind of genre that I liked, the 1st and 2nd ones being the other 2 RE fics called: Rare Side Effects and Dark Ashes Of The Phoenix, which you also wrote. hehe.
    I've never really liked any bondage or non-con fics before, but somehow your writings are different, they're hmm..captivating. I'm so much in love with your characterization of Leon, he's such a darlin...*sigh*
    Lookin forward for you future updates.
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