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Reviews for Tales of Bound Girl 1: Colette

By : YamiNoHikari
  • From ANON - Miori101 on September 16, 2006
    If you're getting raped, and you enjoy it, is it still considered rape...?
    Well, anyway, I like this story. Hmm... that sounds weird. The problem is, it's hard to praise a lemon. But this story was uber cool!
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  • From ANON - Shihna on November 25, 2005
    Awesome start! Are you going to do the other girls? Please do one about Sheena! I'm waiting in anticipation! =)
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  • From on November 21, 2005
    (Get ready for a pretty long review, mon ami)
    This fanfic has good points and only a few bad points (that I can see
    any one is free to prove me wrong)

    First, I would like to say, this fic is brillant. Gah, I love the concept, and your OC
    seems hot (don't ask why!!) I actually felt bad for Colette, for like once in my life.
    (Nah, I felt bad when she lost her voice in the game)

    I don't really like Het. pairings, I mainly read Yaoi/Yuri (male/male, female/female). And if I review a het. story
    it's either A) Really good or B) Doesn't have enough reviews. Your's fits in the [A] part.

    Now, for the good parts. I like how you write, it's nice. Everything flows. I also like how you
    started the fic. It was strong at the begining, and it got my attention really fast. (other het. fics
    I read take a while for me to get into) I also love how you ended the story, it makes me wonder 'Did
    Akio have a change of heart?' Or some corny thing I always think!

    Let me get to the bad points, as in almost all fanfics (including mine) there are grammatical/spelling errors.
    Um, what do you call it? In your fic, there was a lot of 'tense' type one. As if I was reading a play. I guess it was the 'Present tense'
    thing. Present tense works in script format or 1st person POV. Anyway, there are a few spelling errors that I spotted.

    So, although not detailed, that was my review! Your story, overall, is nice, it flows, and makes me feel bad for Miss. Brunel over there.
    Hopefully you make more Tales of a bound ___. I would like if you made a Sheena or Raine one. Or Tales of a bound Guy. Hahaha...!

    I give this fic a 4/5. Nice story for a beginer! Please write more!
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