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Reviews for Persona Non Grata

By : rAiNwAtEr
  • From Aeris on June 19, 2007
    Ooo, fun. when's the next chapter?
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  • From ANON - Kitty on September 19, 2006
    I really enjoyed your fic! It really captivated me, especially in the begining with your discription of Riku. Please update soon, i look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Meifu on August 21, 2006
    Oh... my... god... ^__^ I absolutely love your story! It has such a good storyline to it, and it's just so... interesting and unique =D Oh yeah, that part about the guy shitting on his neighbor's lawn reminds me of the movie "Me, myself and Irene" ^^ Well, keep up the great work! And update soon please!!!
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  • From ANON - CannibalisticKitty on August 13, 2006
    Very nice so far. I like this AUA setting. It's intresting that you have Sora in a choice silence. I don't think I've ever seen that approach. Your conversation/argument between Dr. Dick and Riku made me laugh. (I really don't think Riku wants to hear the true answer to the 'do I look' comment.*L*)

    One thing, I don't know if it was intentional or just a mistake, "Tiffa" only has one F. Not a critism at all, just thought you'd like to know if ye didn't. ^.^
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  • From ANON - Dark Light on August 13, 2006
    I forgot to mention! There's a part in chapter 2 where Sora says something before getting beat up or something... You've gotta fix that, soon.
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  • From Toushikku on August 12, 2006
    Write more! I can't wait to see what Riku does!
    please, please, please?
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  • From ANON - Crystori on August 09, 2006
    on chapter 1

    "Sora turned around and was shocked to see the boy who jumped him last night. "I got you in trouble? You guys should be in jail for what you tried to do! If it wasn't for this school being so fucking homophobic, you would have been." Sora was feed up with these assholes. Today was not his day." ^^; I happened to catch this, and you said that Sora did not speak(or in his oppinion could not) buuuut I like the story so far. It's a little odd to see the characters used but not in their usual storyline, but none the less the story is good. *salute* I shall read more!

    oh also I wanted to say that I managed to snort my tea at riku's behavior in the coffee shop. my god can I relate!
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  • From ANON - Jacie on June 23, 2006
    This story is the best I've read, EVER.
    You must continue it for my sanity. I literally twitched at the end of Ch. 2 because there was no Ch. 3
    Sad eh?
    Please continue it, and I hope you get enough reviews! If it helps, this is the first time I've ever reviewed anyones story.
    Please finish! =D
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  • From ANON - shade on February 12, 2006
    Oh god , Ple-ase update it! I really like where this story is going so far and I just can't wait for the next chapter so please hurry and update...
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  • From ANON - Kyuuen-kun on January 21, 2006
    Great story!!

    Plenty of description, and the characters all seem real. And Riku reminds me of Gregory House, from "House" maybe that's why I like him so much in this story. XD

    Hope you continue it, it's a really good story so far.
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  • From ANON - Phoebechan on January 12, 2006
    Oooh! I absolutly love this fic!!
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  • From ANON - CrimsomAngel on January 08, 2006
    Extremely entertained by Riku's attitude and lovin the sexy doctors! Falling in love at first sight a little cliche but from you writing I'm positive you can pull it off.
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  • From ANON - kbug on December 26, 2005
    Will Sora start talking? Will Riku stop being a jerk? *squeal* Write more!
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  • From ANON - Vampyre Hybrid on December 21, 2005
    go on! for the love of god continue! (damn i'm bossy) ur story's reeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaallllllllyyyyy good so far.
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  • From ANON - brassmonkey2079 on December 17, 2005
    I love it!!!! keep it up :D
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