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Reviews for Why did He Take My Wings?

By : Petrez
  • From xMiyux on February 16, 2009
    Nice work! XD I really enjoyed it!! X3
    Please update soon, interesting I thought that Lloyd would've have put a more of a fight, especially what had happened to his wings. Also are you sure Mithos is a girl? I've played the game A LOT and Mithos seem to be a BOY there's no way his a girl the game screams BOY. How can he be a she, you have to be joking about him, right? I'm so confuse now 0.o"
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  • From ANON - HEY! on October 28, 2006
    GREAT STORY. I DON'T KNOW IF YOU STILL NEED IT BUT TO GET KRATO'S JUDGEMENT COSTUME IS EASY. AT THE FLANOIR DOCTOR PART WHEN EVERYONE IS COMING AND ASKING YOU OUT SAY NO. THEN KRATOS WILL COME. AND LATER ON WHEN YOU GO BACK TO THE TOWER OF SALVATION AND GET HIM IN YOU PARTY HE WILL HAVE JUDGEMENT. BUT YOU HAVE TO KILL ZELOS CAN YOU DO IT?
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 24, 2006
    lmao... Fangirls are so stupid. It's so funny how they just deny what is right in front of them, and is a real fact. Especially in the KH section.
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  • From ANON - Anima Sage Kurai (me log in? HAHA!) on August 21, 2006
    Just call me ASK for now. XD Hey, you updated! Yay for Yggy being totally horney! Lloyd! Such a chump! And yay for smut too! Hehe, I like where this is going.

    Too bad for Collet. And WTF, Mithos...is a chick? I hate that boy anyway, Yggy > Mithos. They so aren't the same person. And you all know it.

    Update ASAP!

    ~ASK~
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  • From ANON - Invader Meow (the accountless x_X) on August 18, 2006
    YAY you updated! :hug:! ah yes all that i expected to happen in the last chapter, did indeed happen in this one. i still feel sorry for lloyd though, hard not to.

    but it makes me wonder.. what is that cloth made from o.O'
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 14, 2006
    LMAO

    "Mithos is a girl"

    I haven't heard anything so stupid in my life.
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  • From kourya on August 12, 2006
    Your story is well thought out! It's better than anything I could do, all my stuff is cliché. I haven't published any of it yet. ;+; But still, this chapter was really good, you're a very descriptive writer. Which is a good thing! Watch the typos though. And thanks for updating! *coughfinallycough* You did a good job! Thanks for the cookie! =^^=
    - kourya
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  • From ANON - tenohikari on August 10, 2006
    Yay, you've updated! And wow I love evil (and horny) Yggdrassil... but I can't wait to read more. Why did Kratos give his son away as a gift? Will Lloyd regain his dignity back? But most important... will there be more smut? ::nosebleeds::
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  • From kourya on July 21, 2006
    This story is really sad so far, and I hope you update it soon. I like it and it's very well thought out and put together. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
    ~ kourya
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  • From ANON - HEH on February 13, 2006
    awsome, but seriously if you have zelos killed by not accepting collett, um...that other ninja girl sheena and genis then you will get called out by kratos and he will explain about his past also give him a family pendent won't tell you why anyway once that happens he'll join your party temporaily and then leave but then come back and heres where the sacrafice comes in when you choose to listne to krotos which you don't have a choice once you rejeced the rest you haver to fight zelos in the tower and he will die then when your free kratos will be a perminet memeber of your party till you beat the game.
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  • From ANON - Miori101 on February 04, 2006
    You have to finish the game with 'Kratos' ending. At the Flanoir scene, decline everyone who comes at your door. THen you'll hear Kratos's voice calling you. Sit back and watch the scene and eventually, you'll get the 'Judgement' title.
    Anyway, good story so far. Can't wait for your next update! Wow! That rhymes!!
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  • From ANON - Kaorustalker30 on January 01, 2006
    Ah, you mean his 'Judgment' outfit? (This may contain a few spoilers, and is ridiculously long.) I can't remember for the life of me how I got it, but I think you just have to end the game with him still in your party (but, this option causes some tearful scenes). However, my friend has informed me that you must beat 'Judgment mode' and then when you replay the game, he'll have it in his 'Titles' list. I'm not so sure about that (I don't even remember a 'Judgment mode'), but to be sure make sure you do everything relating to Kratos (like training with him and having an outstanding relationship with him) and you should be able to have both the Judgment outfit and the ability when he rejoins your party - in the same game (but, you have to make sure you sabotage your relationship with Zelos early on). When you replay the game again, make sure to keep the techniques everyone had and you'll be able to enjoy Kratos' sexy baritone saying 'Judgment' without having to wait for the second disc - I loved it so much, I entirely made sure that Colette never uttered the damn spell, but had Kratos do it all the time: "Rain your Judgment upon these evil sinners! JUDGMENT!" - Oh. So. Hot. His wings are a bonus too (absolutely lovely aren't they?) - even though I have to admit, Zelos' were even more beautiful.

    Oh, and may I just mention that it was absolutely horrible when Yggdrasill took Llyod's wings, I was picturing it, and a sobbing Lloyd is just about enough to make me cry. (Just wondering: Why do you hate Genis so much? I thought he was adorable, and even though his Japanese voice drilled into my skull so bad, his English voice was done wonderfully (IMO). I've always thought Colette was the most annoying of the bunch ["I'm sorry" is grating as hell and "I must sacrifice myself for people who couldn't give a rat's ass about me otherwise" is the absolute worse plot ever created - so when a character's personality circulates around both, I find it hard to even *try* to like them]. On the other hand, all children in the Japanese world of anime and video games are annoying, yet adorable, snots. You either get the smart ass brat who really kicks some ass when he needs to; or the ditzy, clumsy twit whose embarassing moments are only outmatched by the amount of monsters she kills throughout her career. However, you do occasionally get the mute child whom falls short of gaining any personality whatsoever throughout the entire game (speaking of 'Magna Carta' here). But yeah, back to the point, why do you hate Genis? Just wondering...)
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  • From ANON - Invader Meow (the accountless x_X) on December 29, 2005
    awwwr! Usually i read Zelos/Lloyd stuff but i wanted to look at this and awwr i feel so sorry for Lloyd! please please update soon! ;-; *pleads* i wanna know what happeeens

    .. and yeah, i thought Yggy was gonna have is way with Lloyd in the second chapter >_> natural instincts when someone says 'turn around' XD; im pathetic
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  • From on December 29, 2005
    Kratos' costume? The Judgement one is the white version he has. It's pretty sexy too! Hehe, Zelos marrying LLoyd? Isn't that just sexy. Anywho, this was a nice chapter. You added YUAN! I love Yuan [after Zelos and Kratos, then Yggy]. This was nice, I really liked it. It was quite interesting, *nods* Yggdrasill is a bastard.
    Hey, as long as you update, I'm happy.
    Oh, and Dorr sucks, Neil is hot. Ooooohhhh-yyyyyeeeaaah.
    Update soon! *grabs cookies*
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  • From ANON - Benji-chan on December 21, 2005
    Keep writing!!!!! x3
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