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Reviews for Because You Loved Me--Even If I Didn't Want You To

By : KamirineGoddess
  • From ANON - Algorind on January 20, 2006
    A bit long but after I got into it, I stopped minding so much. Overall, a good story though Shadow liking Sonic scares me a bit. So I'll root for Amy just because the other ship is scary.
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  • From ANON - Slimthrowed on January 20, 2006
    Not bad. I'm glad these scenes are getting a little more action-packed. I wasn't sure what to think about Shadow and his interaction with Amy and Sonic (actually, I still don't) but at least you used Rouge to keep things interesting. Haven't read "Jungle Boogie" yet, but I'm sure it'll only confirm my previous statements.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2006
    Good Stuff.
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  • From ANON - Shooting_Star on January 19, 2006
    Could a you write me a SonAmy story? No non-con or anything and it can be like, one-shot. And by no means, abondon this story to write it if that would have to happen. But you know...please? Cause I'd really like a nice, SonAmy story! With no Shadow messing everything up. ;o}

    Keep up the writing.
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  • From ANON - Annie the Anon on January 19, 2006
    Considering I'm not the only person that signs Anon on this story, I'll add a title to mine so you know who I am now. ;o)

    Another great edition to the story, though darker than the other chapters. I like your Eggman too, he's not overly silly like in Sonic X, which I hate. I also like all your chapter titles, espically the subtitles. They're cute and funny sometimes.


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  • From on January 19, 2006
    I have a question before I begin: Why did you name the chapter 'Jungle Boogie'? I'm interested in knowing the answer.

    As for the chapter: Very fun and interesting to read. You rule supreme at surprises. Shadow and Knuckles fighting together, Sonic becoming a jerk of sorts, Eggman willingly giving up Chaos Emeralds for some unknown reason. Cream might have fallen into a lake for all we know. And nothing has been resolved with Sonic/Amy/Shadow. And I love it. You're really keeping the reading on their toes with that--wanting their ship to sail, knowing there is a good possibility it could and just waiting for that special chapter when it's official. But then, your story is just funny and enjoyable to read reguardless. You know you're good when you can make a reader who doesn't like/didn't consider a ship second guess themselves.

    It didn't exactly end on a cliffhanger this time, so I have no clue where you might be going. Which makes the wait for the next chapter all the more painful.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2006
    NOOOO!11111111 SONCI AMY PLEAZE! DUNT MAKE IT SHADOW! HE SUCKS!
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  • From ANON - Maddi_Chan on January 19, 2006
    Psycho Sonic! Able to piss off everyone he knows in a single sentence! Able to make Knuckles punch him with a single smirk.

    No seriously, don't tell me this is the only time he'll be like that in the story. That was great. Put let me just say: the whole small eyed, blood-oil covered Sonic that smiles like a manic? Creepy as hell. Great detail in explaining what he looked like, I could picture it perfectly.

    I hope Sonic gets everything cleared up the next chapter though, because everyone went from being pissed with Rouge to him. The chapter was great, I love when you include fight scenes, they're fun to read.

    Though you had a line that cracked me up for like, five minutes: "I want my success to be a surprise!" "Isn't it always?" Great stuff there, so true.

    I look forward to the next chapter and hope you update really soon!
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  • From ANON - sonic_girl on January 18, 2006
    I love this it is tottaly awseome!! keep updating I love sonadow!!
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  • From ANON - pheonix on January 18, 2006
    Love this fic!

    Can't stop from liking it.

    damn people yaoi fanatics. I mean sheesh someitmes its ok but you reviewers are like ZOMG Amy/Sonic? Please stop!

    ^Thats very dumb since more than 75% of fics made on this site and others is all yaoi enough is enough. (yawn it is ver yannoying everything yaoi after awhile)


    I like Shad/Sonic and Amy/Sonic. Thus leave it the love two some.... (well the other included things such as knuckles/Rouge)

    Keep up the great work love this fic! *Fan now*


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  • From ANON - The DarkChao on January 18, 2006
    mabey you should just make sonic fall in love with eggman! that would solve all our problems! but an actual idea on that whole thing. if you like this story enough mabey once you've finished this story go back and write what would have happend if sonic loved the other. Its just and idea though. anyway loved the battle with the robot andaconda(sp?) it was pretty leathal wasnt it? thanks for the new chapters!
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  • From ANON - Shadow's Bane on January 18, 2006
    Okay stop teasing now. You have to put in some Shadow/Sonic soon or I really will begin to think that you're making this Amy/Sonic. And I need to know this won't be Amy/Sonic.
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  • From ANON - Shooting Star on January 18, 2006
    Sonic better apologize to Amy PERIOD. He had no right to treat her like that when she was only concerned about him and she should have smacked him into oblivion for it. So I expect an apology on Sonic's behalf or I'll send the flying monkeys.

    An unexcepted chapter. Again, long in length and not at all where I was excepting it to go in the ways of characters and writing. Sonic's brief stent into psychosis would have been great if he hadn't snapped at Amy. You just must not like Cream because she's barely in the story and not at all in the chapter. Knuckles seems to be the only one that out right didn't get upset at Rouge for her anticts. I think he at least, should fuss at her. And none of the other characters better not just magically forget because of more pressing matters like Sonic becoming in Shadow's own words: a jackass. Now isn't that calling the kettle black? Ha!

    Stop being mean to Amy and put some Sonamy in the next chapter. Please? I'll make the sad puppy face. You know you can't resist that face!
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  • From ANON - Rashella on January 18, 2006
    Hm, interesting. Your story is changing. It started out as a lighthearted comedy before morphing into a dramatic love soap opera. And now it appears it's morphing into the darkness you promised in your warning in the first chapter, though both the humor and drama still stand. I find that it's odd, but in a good way. Not too much of any one genre that it won't drown a reader that isn't fond of it.

    Though I must ask: how will you accomplish Sonic's feelings? He seems to like both Amy and Shadow and I just wonder which hedgehog he will actually end up with or at least, weigh more of his attention into before he does choose. I think the story will get far more interesting than it already is once that happens.

    I look forward to reading more of your work. I might look into your other fanfictions.
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  • From ANON - Draconis on January 18, 2006
    An update!!!!!!! Okay, it was a fun chapter cause I liked the fighting with the snake and brief intermission with Tails and Knuckles. I like the way you make Eggman evil without having to make him a bastard. He's usually either silly or a bastard, one or the other. Sonic was hiliarous to me in this chapter. He was such a jerk but he made it fun to read. He thought the entire thing was funny and didn't seem to care about what he said or who's feelings it hurt. But that was a mean shot he took at Shadow if he was talking about who I think he was. Really mean. Shadow should have kicked him!!! Does the ring make Sonic mean? Or does it do something else too? Cause I noticed he didn't stop being a jerk until the ring stopped glowing. And what about Rouge? They didn't just forget about her right? Sonic didn't seem to, from his insult and you already reference that Amy is still upset about it. Shadow was just ranting at the end so I wasn't sure.

    You have to update sooner this time! I want to know what's gonig to happen now!
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