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Reviews for Because You Loved Me--Even If I Didn't Want You To

By : KamirineGoddess
  • From ANON - Tairra on January 18, 2006
    This isn't an actual review so let me apologize from the start. It's more of a plea and rant. =-_-+=

    1. I'm one of your many readers that got hooked onto your Teen Titans story, but you haven't updated in months. At first I thought you just weren't writing anymore, considering that fact you hadn't updated any of your other stories really. But it pains me to see that you're so frequently updating this story when you won't make a new chapter for a really great piece of work you've already written. Since you more than likely read these reviews, I decided to post my plea here instead: could you please update and maybe even finish Evolution? It didn't even get to the fun part with Slade and what you have so far is agonizingly good and it deserves some attention as well.

    2. Do you do request for fanfictions? If so, then I'd like to request one. I can be a one-shot or short story, but would you mind doing a Castlevania story for me? And please, not for Symphony of the Night: That's overly done already. Actually, I'd like it to be about the Castlevania 3 cast or set in the time of Castlevania 3. I've always loved that particular game and I'd love to see a good fanfiction artist write about it. If you don't know what Castlevania is, I'll be more than happy to provide a link to information or even recommend the game to play first hand.

    If you say yes, then I'll email you. Thanks for you time.
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  • From ANON - Xiander_s on January 18, 2006
    Oh now you're just making me spiral into another dimension of pissed off. Damn it, why is Sonic being a total bastard this chapter? I don't care about the way he treats Amy but damn it, there better be a hawt make up scene between Sonic and Shadow to make up for that Maria comment. It was a Maria insult right? At the end there? What the hell is the point of that ring? To turn Sonic psycho or piss all the shadon fans off because it's playing a factor at keeping them apart?

    I gotta eat golden grahams to calm down now. Damn it.
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  • From ANON - Demi's Shadow on January 18, 2006
    Thanks for the link, it was quite funny. It made the image of Sonic dancing that much more enjoyable.

    Now to review the new chapter: You have a bad nack for writing the unexpected. Again, I loved the Knuckles moments in this chapter. Amy caring about Rouge and Shadow in turn saving Amy was a nice touch. Your Sonic at the end creeped me out a bit though. I'm beginning to get an idea of what that ring is for and remembering your warnings in the first chapter, it worries me a bit. Though I am slightly confused on what Eggman will do with it and Sonic once he's gotten all seven emeralds in it. How will he get the three Tail's has into the collar? And where's the final emerald?

    And how will everyone react to each other now that the fight is over? Sonic hurt a lot of feelings by the end there and I doubt any of them forgot what Rouge did. Though Shadow's rant at th end was great. The only problem I found with the chapter was Shadow not being able to get away from Knuckles or Tails. I really though he would have been able to but I suppose you didn't want Sonic or Shadow to pyshcially fight this chapter.

    I'm curious to see what the next chapter will be like. This story has a lot of emotion and drama in it so far and it will be interesting to continue to watch it unfold.
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  • From ANON - Maddi_Chan on January 17, 2006
    About time for an update Kamirine. I'm losing patience.
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  • From ANON - Xiander_s on January 16, 2006
    Rouge. Is a bitch. A total freakin bitch. What the hell man! She better leave Tails alone! And what the hell is she doing hooking up Shadow and Amy? Using Tails? They're gonna kill him! That's not fair! And you should use Cream more and focus on Tails and Cream. That's pretty cute, but don't make them have sex or anything. That would be freaky. And not the good freaky like Shadow and Sonic hawt sex. Speaking of which they should make out again. Or have sex cause this fighting sucks ass.
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  • From ANON - Xiander_s on January 16, 2006
    Holy shit dude, what the fuck? How could you have Sonic get pissed like that at Shadow? Why can't he tell that Shadow likes him? He really thinks he's in love with Amy? Damn it, why do you play with my emotions like this? And what the hell is Rouge doing helping that thought along? What is the point of her plan? Gotta read more chapters. Damn this to hell, Shadow better end up with Sonic.
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  • From ANON - Draconis on January 16, 2006
    Where's the update? What's taking so long?
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  • From ANON - Katina_san on January 15, 2006
    wow! all i can say is that you have a great way of writing fics! i've read all the chapters, and i would like to say that im officially hooked on this story! keep up the great work! ^-^ cant wait for the future chapters that are coming up;)
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  • From ANON - Xiander_s on January 14, 2006
    Holy shit dude. That was cruel, stopping the sex before it got depth. You have to be a real part between them in the story. They need to sleep together like, pronto. Just don't make Sonic a total wuss. Keep him just the way you have him when it comes to Shadow and you'll be fine. Don't make this Sonic and Amy please. It's done too much alreaady. But a threesome would be fine.
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  • From ANON - Xiander_s on January 14, 2006
    Whao. The incediant was hawt. I thought Shadow was going to hump Sonic. I would have. And that kiss was great but Sonic should have been awake for it so he could make out back. Feel kinda bad for Amy though. Maybe this could be a threesome.
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  • From ANON - Xiander_s on January 14, 2006
    Wow, nice chapter. I rather like the beginning so far. Very interesting. Keep writing!
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  • From on January 14, 2006
    Incredible. I didn't think you'd be able to pull that chapter off with all the confusion Rouge created but I'm pleasantly surprised to see that you did.

    Again, wonderful potrayel of everyone. Knuckles was definately dead on in this episode, rash and quick judgement. The reactions to Rouge's plot, or what they've learned so far, was exactly what I expected, if not better. The surprise fight at the end with Shadow and Sonic was great and I was a bit irrated that Eggman interrupted it--though the way that he did was actually quite funny. I also liked how no one paid any attention to the fight Tails and Eggman had.

    Now I'd like to see what's going to happen: obviously Sonic's reaction to the secret kiss wasn't a good one and I want to know where that's going to lead in their relationship, considering it's adding more stress to Sonic's emotions for Shadow anyway. Then there's Amy in this chapter, who deserves a little symapthy this chapter. She was really hurt by the kiss ane Sonic actually seemed to feel bad about it--what's going on there? Now that Knuckles knows that Rouge tricked him, where will they go from here? Will he be upset with her too or forgive her due to the circumstances? And will everyone hate her now? What happened to Cream and Tails? And what does that collar do? Or what else does it do, other than hurt Sonic? What's Eggman going to do now?

    So many questions with such a rude cliffhanger. You must let the story progress so we know what will happen next. I demand it.

    You're such a gifted, talented fanfiction writer. I patiently--or not so--await the next chapter.

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  • From ANON - Rashella on January 13, 2006
    Very nice, original story so far. It really peeks the interest and has a reader begging for more. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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  • From ANON - Demi's Shadow on January 13, 2006
    You didn't post the link--but thanks for the gesture!

    As for you chapter, it really was great. It was like the climax of a soap opera drama, only more enjoyable. I love the way Knuckles confessed and then Shadow's little outburst followed by everyone ganging up on Rouge. Fantastic. Eggman's interruption wasn't what I excepted, which is why I loved it so much. And I love how you describe the effect the ring has on Sonic, espically with the eyes. It was very easy to picture in my head and now I'm excited to know exactly what it does.

    Your story is so much fun to read and I really enjoy it. Please update very soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2006
    Wow. You gotta update, this is really great and I wanna know what happens to Sonic!
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