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Reviews for Because You Loved Me--Even If I Didn't Want You To

By : KamirineGoddess

From ANON - Marcus Dudley on January 12, 2006
Okay, I'll be honest with you. It took me some time to get over some of the more "mature" content of this story thus far, but after reading more of the chapters from that point and seeing as how you were developing character motivation so well, I now realize that the "slash" was most essential. I'm impressed! Most people wouldn't have gone as far as you did with the theme and still manage to maintain character integrity AND tell an inthralling tale simultaeously (which would explain why I don't read most fan fiction). I'm not done reading it yet, but I'm sure that I'll be satisfied with the content.
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From ANON - Maddi Chan on January 11, 2006
It's about time we saw some focus on Knuckles. Another great chapter, as you probably already know. It was funny that none of them paid attention to Eggman as he crash, though what happened to Tails? And I'd really like to know what the collar does now. I also want to know when the non-con is coming into the story and why, because it doesn't seem like it would.

Update soon, we're curious on this side of the globe.

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From ANON - Draconis on January 11, 2006
Whoa, intense chapter there. Knuckles rocks this chapter!!!!!!1111 He was totally tryin to kick Shadow's butt though I think Shadow would have won if Sonic didn't break it up but it was funny to see them all gang up on Rouge. What's wrong with Sonic cause he was really sick at the end thanks to Robotnic and stuff. Is Shadow still gonna be mad at him or is Sonic gonna be mad at Shadow and stuff.

You gotta update!
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From ANON - Anon on January 09, 2006
Don't put him with Amy. Leave it Shadon. More fun to read.
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From ANON - Shooting Star on January 09, 2006
What a long story this is. Not that I'm complaining but I find it unusual that a fanfiction writer puts so much detail and length to their chapters. Nice touch. Though be weary of having your chapters too long, or people might loose the will to read them halfway through. While it had a slow start, staying with it was well worth it but some people may not realize it and give up.

I'm enjoying it so far. It's been very funny as a whole and the portrayel of the characters are shockingly head on despite the relationships that are explored in the story. It's rather sad when I can picture the entire story happening in my head or wishing it was a comic book.

You even managed to make certain characters I don't like tolerable. (I mean Cream and Shadow.)

I see you like to end the majority of your chapters in cliffhangers. I'll be weary of that in the future as I must admit: your last one is good.

It's rotten what you're doing to Amy though. I felt so sorry for her in the last chapter. I think I would bawl too. I just can't understand how so many people here want this to be Shadon story. I'm Sonamy all the way and have been since Sonic CD? when she first appeared. I really hope you give her a break in the up coming chapters because I can't imagin Sonic actually wanting to be with Shadow over her. He's got to realize by now that those feelings are real--damn Rouge for making him second guess them!

Knuckles is officially my hero now, thanks alot. I barely liked him before and now you've made him the champion of hurt woman everywhere. I hate to say it but I got rather excited when he admitted his feelings for Rouge. I felt like his Amen corner screaming "You tell her Knuckles, preach!" at the computer screen. Laughable but shameful, I admit.

And thank you for not having Sonic run into Shadow's arms in fluff style fashion as they admit their love for one another. As a matter of fact, I was slightly surprised by the fight at the end. I didn't think Sonic would get so upset about the unknown kiss but then after having his nightmares and already being shaken and disturbed, it's understandable.

I suppose I don't have to tell you you should update with a hurry.

If you don't mind, here's my email address: azareeSakura@msn.com Please email me when you update your story next time, I want to keep up with this one.

One more thing: you didn't post that link in your last chapter.
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From ANON - MaddiChan on January 09, 2006
::Hugs you until you faint:: God Kamerine I love you! I was so afraid that Sonic and Amy would end up the bridge and finally kiss, I was practically in tears. But then they turned into tears of joy when I realized it was Shadow/Sonic.

So much to look forward to in the next chapter. You can't wait for like, four days to update this time, you have to update ASAP. You're killing us with this cliffhanger!

But in short: Your story is the shiznite!
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From on January 09, 2006
Well goodness. That had to be the longest set up for a kiss I've seen in fanfiction to date. That was fabulous.

We can begin with Knuckles this chapter. Again, the play on words were great this chapter and her plot became clear as I read this part. Rouge is playing with fire however, espically if Shadow finds out, we won't go into everyone else.

Tails was brillant in this chapter. I was actually surprised once he told Sonic and Amy to go to the wrong places--but that just made me excited for the final part (to be honest, I was cursing if you decided to cliff hang once it got to that part--I thought you would be mean and go to Cream). And now we know that Eggman and Tails will be interrupting the next chapter at some point, though in what fashion has me curious.

And alas, the final scene. Beautiful. I almost keeped from my seat when I realized they were going to kiss--and Sonic wouldn't be asleep or dreaming this time. And Knuckles catching them at the end and it appearing to turn out (for Rouge) better than even she expected? Priceless writing there.

I really do anticipate your next chapter. I can not wait to see how all of the will react and if they find out exactly what Rouge did. This should be a very interesting chapter to read in deed.

I really love your story. It's one of the best Sonic fanfictions I've read, and you do so much to put a reader on the edge of their seat. And the fact that they're such detailed and long chapters---

Please, do update soon.
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From on January 09, 2006
Ah, the return of Eggman in Part 2.

That was probably my favorite part of the entire chapter because it was written so well. I love how you captured the essences of him, complete with the light relflections. I know sorry, the little things impress me. It made excite raise in my chest, as now I want to know exactly what that ring is for. I have a few guesses, it's just I have no idea how he could possibly use it.

Rouge conversation with Tails was priceless. I couldn't help but laugh and feel sorry for poor Tails, it seemed as though she confused him (and the readers) until he just agreed to help her by clinging to the things he could understand in the conversation. I also loved how she played Amy and Sonic this chapter, though that raised a new question--just exactly why does she want Amy and Shadow on the bridge?

The conversation between Shadow and Tails was good as well. I rather like how everyone is pushing Shadow to admit his feelings without out and out saying "Admit your feelings to Sonic".

I have to commend you for your play on words in general in a lot of this plot. It's very easy to see why there will be a misunderstanding between the chapters and I love how each of them (involved in the plot, rather unknowingly or not) omit important key details in their conversations.

But getting to read the Eggman seen (I live for bad guy dialogue) was enough to make me like the chapter reguardless. Now I must read part three...
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From ANON - diamon_princess2006 on January 08, 2006
must kill rouge now... arrrrrrrg she's making everything so complicated !!!!!! btw i love how the fic is turning out this is my first sonic fanfic and i'm really enjoying it i hope to see more soon !
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From ANON - Demi's Shadow on January 08, 2006
I can honestly say you've got me anxious to see what's about to happen. This is the part I've been waiting for: when Shadow and Sonic would kiss or either Sonic would realize that Shadow likes him. I honestly can not wait to see what will happen now, there are so many things to look forward to the next chapter. What Eggman's plan is with that ring. How Sonic will react to Shadow's feelings. The aftermath of Rouge's plot. Will Rouge get what she wants. Will poor Tails catch the bullet for his role. And what about Amy?

My god, this is like a soap opera comedy that you just can't wait to see what happens next. What a horrible cliffhanger this was. I can honestly say you have composed one of my favorite fanfictions, let alone Sonic fanfictions. And reading Rouge's plot unfold was hilarious. I can't believe I actually got what she was doing but part 2. It really was complicated but at the same time, a joy to read because you wanted to know what she was doing and understand it. This was one of the more brillant setups to relationships I've read.

Though I'm really looking foward to how Sonic and Knuckles will react, because those are two that are the most emotionally involved in the plot. Shadow as well, but I can truely see things are about to go South. I can already guess that Eggman will cut in eventually, but I really can't wait for the next chapter. You really rock Kamirine.

The only way you could disappoint me, is to decide not to finish this story.

(And PLEASE, can you post the link to the Peanut Butter Jelly Dance?)
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From ANON - Anon on January 08, 2006
And now we've gotten back on track. To keep from writing a very long review, I'll just review each chapter was I read them.

Part 1-
I find Rouge malipulations skills quite humorous in this chapter. I really enjoyed it to be honest, as she didn't come off as the evil vindictive bitch like she usually would, but slightly vindictive and quite selfish. Shadow made a comback in this chapter. I hate to admit it, but I serverally missed him in your last chapter and I was pleased to see him again. I really like reading your portrayal of Shadow in your story.
I rather like the conversation between Rouge and Shadow at the beginning. Besides the fact that Rouge was doing it for her own selfish reasons, I had to agree with everything she told him and I was rather happy she did, as I was hoping Shadow wouldn't keep ignoring his feelings. So it's nice she's giving him a push in the right direction.
The brief confrontation with Amy and Shadow was a nice touch as well. I also liked the conversation with Sonic and Knuckles. Actually, it was one of my favorite parts of the chapter. I'm rather fond of Knuckles and it was nice to see him having that type of conversation with Sonic of all people.
I'm looking forward to reading the next part to see exactly what Rouge has in store for Tails. He's played a pretty small in the story so far so it will be nice to see him getting her bigger part.

Overall, it was another great addition to the story. It's pretty late so I'll have to review the others tomorrow when I read them.
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From ANON - The Dark Chao on January 07, 2006
Well.. I Cant wait. suspencfull for sure. but Whatever ends up happaning is going to be interrupted by eggman and tails anyway.heh.. I cant wait.
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From ANON - Draconis on January 07, 2006
=o.0=

Wow, that was a lot to read there. A very nice surprise indeed. My goodness, where to begin. I'm not really sure what to say! lmao! I mean...just wow. From Rouge's seriously mad plot to the kiss at the end. Just wow. And you put Eggman in a chapter--and omg now Sonic knows about Shadow's feelings and he was awake for it and then there's the whole Knuckles thing just--damn!

I can't wait for the next chapter! I HAAAAAAAAAAVE to know what happens now!!!!!!!!!111111111
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From ANON - Shadow's Bane on January 07, 2006
Great chapter but we need an update because I really need to know that this won't be Amy/Sonic.
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From ANON - The Dark Chao on January 06, 2006
Oh and something else I want to say after reading the reviews thus far... I absolutly Love to peices how this fic feels like sonic could go eather direction (namely: to amy or shadow) and it actualy kinda makes me sad how that has to end eventually and sonic is going to go to one or the other. he seemes to be paying more attention to amy this chapter but that could easily change.. to me personally though it felt like that between the lines sonic was thinking of shadow but that could be just me.
I personally wouldent give a squid weather he went to eather or considering I dont favour any pairing at all but most people reveiwing seem to favor shadow/sonic so for purely balancing resons I put my support for amy. hopefully ill be able to revewi again shortly after the next update.
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