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Reviews for Because You Loved Me--Even If I Didn't Want You To

By : KamirineGoddess

From ANON - The Dark Chao on January 05, 2006
wow this is like one of the first times I reveiwed someone other then harley.. anyway its an awsome story. I love how all the characters seem to fall into there respective personalitys... im sure i probably should say more but i can never really seem to think of anything beyond my inital ispiration to revei wo this will have to do.. keep it up im looking forward to reading this.
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From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2006
Another great chappie. I'm hating that Sonic and Shadow are having a hard time right now though. I really want those two to stay together. Amy's sweet and all but please let Shadow win. And for the love of god if you put Shadow with Rouge...grrrrrrrr!

YOU NEED TO UPDATE ALREADY!
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From ANON - Demi's Shadow on January 04, 2006
Wow, I haven't been here in a while. I'll have to add you to my favorites list so I can keep up with this story.

You've update a lot since I last read so I must say, it was a pleasent surprise for me.

To be honest now, I don't know what to think of your story anymore. You're very good at keeping a read on their toes because I just can't tell where this is going anymore. Not that this is a bad thing, but now I know not to jump to any more conclusions. You're also starting to focus on other charcters, which is something I've enjoyed in your latest chapter.

Though if you don't mind: could you please post of a link of the Peanut Butter Jelly thing? I'd really like to see it, if you do not mind.

I look forward to your next update, more over because I'd really like to see exactly how Rouge will fight Shadow into her plans.

Please update very soon!
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From ANON - MaddiChan on January 04, 2006
Happy you finally updated! Hope you're feelin better too.

Another great chapter, though now you've raised more questions than answers. But then again, you like to play with our minds don't you? And you better NOT be making this a Sonic/Amy fanfiction, so help me! It's Shadow/Sonic all the way baby, ALL THE WAY!

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From ANON - Draconis on January 04, 2006
This is late but, whateva.

Me lovey chappie! Rouge was great, I loved how she compared love to chess. So what is she gonna do next? What does she have in plan for Shadow? How is she gonna use Sonic? When is the next sex scene?????????????

I want more! Update!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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From on January 03, 2006
It's been a while friend. I'll start first by saying I hope you're feeling better and that you get completely well soon.

Now onward to reviewing your latest chapter.

I find that it was interesting for many different reasons. There wasn't as much humor as previous chapters for starters. I also noticed that Shadow was not present this chapter. This made me quite sad, as I've found that I rather look forward to Shadow in your story. As a budding Shadow/Sonic fan, I also noticed your attempts at placing more context clues towards the Amy/Sonic pairing. While the moments were cute, I must say that I was quite alarmed, as I'm really looking forward to this being a Shadow/Sonic story. The interaction between the two is always fun to read about and I'd hate to see it go sour.

After the last chapter, I was half excecting Amy to protest when Rouge offered to let Shadow join them in the fun towards the end and I must say, I was rather happy to see she did not. It gives me the further belief that you weren't trying to go out of character with Amy at all.

As for Rouge, this has sparked a new interest in reading your story. I partially understand what she's attempting to do--and in a since, I can't figure out exactly what it is that she will do. Or how exactly Sonic could possibly fit into it anymore. I also noticed that mentioned an upcoming reencouter with Eggman, so maybe we'll find out what exactly his plans are? I'm still curious about that. I also loved that this was told from Rouge point of view. You haven't completely made her to be the cliche' bitch like in other fanfictions but I can tell she's going down the road to doing something the characters may or may not regret. I look foward to seeing exactly what she's going to do.

I'm sure the Amy/Sonic fans will be happy with the development in this chapter but I for one, hope you continue with Shadow and Sonic. You actually did the odd task of making the ship believable without having to take either chapter completely out of charater or going the cliche' path of so many stories involving the pairing and I'd really like to see it work itself out.

All and all, another great chapter, though the Amy/Sonic and lack of humor does scare me. I look forward to reading more.

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From ANON - Draconis on January 03, 2006
About time! LMAO, now let me just go read it...
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From ANON - MaddiChan on December 21, 2005
Jeez, just how long is the chapter Kamirine? We need an update!
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From ANON - Draconis on December 20, 2005
Remember me?

Ah, I see you deleted your Harry Potter story. Sadness has filled my heart because I liked it. But I decided to start reading this one to pass the time and I gotta say, it's really great! Love it so far but:

Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.

Where's the update? As in, you know, RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!11 Cause I've noting you haven't updated in a while. And you know, you should.

Okay bye!
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From ANON - Anon on December 15, 2005
Yet another great addition to this wonderful story. Now to review the chapter:
I was very pleased with your Amy considering after the last chapter I was a little concerned about the chapter title and exactly what you meant. I rather liked how she hit Sonic with her mallet as in this situation, I could very well see that happening. As for the little discussion between Amy and Shadow: bravo. I rather liked that Shadow kept his head (like he normally does) but still got irrated while Amy let him know what was what. Very believable.

Rouge and Knuckles forcing Tails and Cream to spy was very funny. I loved the ending. Rouge and Knuckles are so cute together. I really can't wait to read more on them, they're so interesting to read in your story.

And nice scene. Could have been longer but I suppose you didn't want a real Slash scene too soon.

Update soon please.

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From ANON - Popcorn Oracle on December 15, 2005
Evil! Your so evil @@;;. This chapter totally had equal share of Sonadow and Amy stuff; ;. Especially that little kiss thingie in the bedroom x.x. It seems like Sonic is at least physically attracted to Shadow for sure. I dunno, he seems very uncertain about Amy, and has much more reason to go with Shadow. Gahh. Anyway, awesome charatcerizations as always^^v, you seriously make me want to go back and play Sonic Adventure 2 now, and I'm not even that crazy about the new games. Man, cliffy, evil evil ._.;, at least you update fast
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From ANON - MaddiChan on December 15, 2005
I love you. You write Shadon so well that it makes my heart hurt. I look forward to ever chapter you write because they're funny and the characters are, as I'm sure I've already said and you've heard too many times now, are dead on. It would be a CRIME if this wasn't a Shadon fiction. This just can't end up Amy/Sonic.

Though I must congradulate you. You have done well to keep me on the edge of seat to see just who exactly you're going to pair with whom. One minute you think it's going to be Sonic/Amy and the next it's Shadon. I was a bit concerned about Amy the last chapter but after really thinking about it, I've decided you still have her dead on. I could just see her being that way about Sonic because that's something she's very passionate about. She may be nice but I doubt she was just sit back and let someone she thought liked Sonic stand by without some sort of warning or at least trying. As long as she doesn't get vindictive, she'll be fine.

I'm interested to see where Shadow is going. By far, this is my favorite diptiction of him and I'd love to see how he's going to cope now that he knows he likes Sonic but that Amy knows it also and is willing to fight for him. Will he ever officially confront Sonic?

One more thing: Is Sonic jealous of Amy or Shadow? I mean you made it point to know he was jealous but what was he jealous of? Thinking Shadow liked Amy or Amy liking Shadow?

Update soon, I can't wait to read!
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From ANON - Seshennu on December 14, 2005
You know... When I finally got back into the Sonic fandom after eleven years of not following a single thing - comics, cartoons, games... I was hit with about a million new characters and pairings. And I decided right off the bat that I just didn't like certain pairings. Namely, Sonic/Shadow and Knuckles/Rouge. In fact, I publicly announced that I'd never like these pairings, no matter how they were written, drawn, song glorious tales of romance of, etcetera etcetera.

...And ya know, now I'm going to have to take back ALL of that, because of your fanfic. *shakes fist* You write them all very well... Scratch that, EXCELLENTLY. Fact is, I've never decided I liked a pairing after initially disliking it in all my 15+ years of fangirlism. And now... TWO pairings! Two pairings I never liked, I'm liking. O_o;

You write very nicely, and your personal style is great. It all flows so well. Great job!

And, by the way... If you still need a beta reader, I'd love to help out. My e-mail address is Gatochu@aol.com, and my AIM is Gatochu. ...I don't talk too much via IMs, though, simply because I don't know what to say. ^^; (This review's taken about twenty minutes to write so far already..) Anyways, given my relative newness to the fandom once more, I doubt I'd be good at reading through for characterization, mostly just spelling/grammar.

But from what I've read, you don't really need to worry about characterization at all! =)
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From ANON - Wooldoor on December 14, 2005
And I thank you so very much for that chapter but really: did you HAVE to cut it off right THERE? The sex scene? Why are you such a tease? That's not fair.

But the chapter was great. I really love how you do all the characters. But now I wonder: just who is in love with whom now? Did Sonic not look at Shadow because the dream? And what's up with him grabbing Amy's hand? It's obvious she took it the wrong. Or at least I'm hoping. Please tell they stop being silly and Shadow and Sonic end up together.

Update!
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From ANON - margie on December 14, 2005
For someone who doesn't really write slash, it came out really good. I've been lurking, but I do read the chapters. This is just my first time reviewing.

I like it alot. Your slash scene was very nice, and I enjoyed it.

Update soon!
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