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Reviews for Because You Loved Me--Even If I Didn't Want You To

By : KamirineGoddess

From ANON - Anon on December 13, 2005
Update! I wanna know what happens next!

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From ANON - Azul Kitty on December 13, 2005
I love the way you write this!!! It's so fantastic!! I can't wait for the next chapter!

I'll be checking daily!
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From ANON - Popcorn Oracle on December 12, 2005
Man, no matter what someone does, I just can't like Amy. I realize she's mostly been created in the Sonic games for comic relief somehow back in Sonic CD where she first showed up. Just the little girl who chases you around, gets captured by Mecha Sonic, Sonic saves her, but runs away before she can chase after him. The kinda freaky thing is that in the new games they seem to infer that she's older now? But she still acts like a little kid o_o;. So I can't help but look at sonic-Amy as sort of pedofilic, and like, I can't see a way he'd be interested in her ;. She's sorta clingy, and dependent... and sonic for the most part is fast, independent, I just don't think he'd want someone weighing him down, you know? Anyway, on to the fic. I'm really liking how your focusing on the real areas of Sonic and Shadow's relationships that really count, or the stuff that I just saw as chemistry between them. The race scenes mostly, and the rivalry and stuff, very cute! My favorite charactarization I've seen of Shadow, and I'm not even/wasnt even a big fan of him, hell I'm Sonic-Knuckles primary
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From on December 11, 2005
Ah, I've see you've updated.

I love how you write your story. Your last chapter was very interesting indeed and didn't at all go the way I thought after reading chapter three. Personally, I figured Shadow would stop Amy or Sonic would wake up, find out what happened and possibly go after her. I also like how you portray Shadow's love for Sonic. He's not overly fluffy and lovey dovey but rather reluctant and even somewhat confused. I think you nailed that aspect perfectly. You left quite a few cliffhangers and I'm rather anxious to see how it will all pan out.

I can't wait to see chapters that focus on Knuckles, I adore how your write him and other than Cream, he's the only person who's thoughts we haven't gotten to hear yet. So I do look forward to this chapter.

Otherwise, happy posting and keep up the fun chapters.
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From ANON - MaddiChan on December 11, 2005
OMG, I will hit you Kamirine! Don't DO this to me! Damn you Kamirine! DAMN YOOOOOOOOOOU!

Okay I'll stop but you seriously better update this and I mean ASAP. You can't just stop RIGHT there! That's not fair! I want to know what's up with the last part! And I really want to know what happens with Amy and Shadow! Please update like soon, PLEASE!!!!!

And lmao! Another great and funny chapter!

Now UPDATE!

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From ANON - Popcorn_oracle on December 11, 2005
Oh, good lord, this is easily the best sonic-shadow fic I've ever read. Honestly from the one mispelling in the summary of this fic I wasnt expecting much, and there arent other problems "abound" like one of the reviewers said(though perhaps it was editted). But just, wow. These characterizations are amazing, everyone has a rational reason for their decisions and they explain them clearly. No "omg lol, I'm in love with you, rawr I hate everyone who likes you" kind of crap, or the fluffy sensitive Shadow people write. You've honestly written it really convincing/realistically too. It seems like a primarily strait pairing fic... since it really focused on Amy at start, and every other pairing in it is. So I really fear your gonna turn this, the best Sonadow representation I've read, into Amy and sonic somehow ^^;. Or this could be one of those rare fics were you just like to focus on something from an unusual point of view (
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From ANON - Azul Kitty on December 10, 2005
HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!

This story is just amazing! It has kept me on the edge of my seat!!!

This has got to be the best god damn fic I've read on this site.

I'm gonna keep my eye on this one...
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From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2005
AMY AND SONC!!!!!!1111 PLEAZE MAKE IT AMY AND SONIC CUZ THAT WUD SUK IF ITZ SHADOW SONIC CUZ THAT GROSS!
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From ANON - Demi's Shadow on December 08, 2005
I'll write you a nice, long one so sit back and relax.

The only true problem I find is with the grammical/spelling errors. I don't see that many but they are there, just to let you know.

But everything else is perfect in my opinion.

By far, Shadow is my favorite character and I love how you dipict him in your fanfiction. I wasn't really sure, seeing as it was a Shadon story but I am thankful to you that you didn't make Shadow some overly fluff bunny like I've been seeing a lot of. I like that you have him slightly confused about his feelings and not really wanting to admit them to himself first before he actually goes after Sonic.
And having Amy go after Sonic as well and willing to fight for him (at least I hope) only makes the story that much more enjoyable. Because I couldn't see Amy backing down, considering how much she loves Sonic. So bravo so far on the love triangle.

I suppose the minor content that will be in the story must be with Cream and Tails. Simply, an adorable ship. Word of advice: just try to keep in mind that both Tails and Cream are a lot younger, so their *relationship* should be exactly the same: it shouldn't be as complexed as say Shadow and Sonic. Though nothing could be that complexed I suppose. But I believe you understand my advice.

Definately put in more Rouge and Knuckles. I'm thankful you didn't break up the Master Emerald and have them go chasing after the pieces like I've seen overly done in other fictions. But I love the way you dicit their relationship with one another.

I also like the fact that while this is a love story, or so I'm assuming, that you seem to like to give the reading the feeling of the Sonic games themselves. You stick to the group trying to find the chaos emeralds and you even make me wonder exactly what Eggman is planning to do with them. You even managed to put *bosses* in the game, in the way of them fighting Eggman's creations just to get the emeralds. That made me feel warm and fuzzy inside. I miss that in a lot of Sonic fictions. You can tell you're a true fan of the game at the very least.

I don't get the jelly joke but the part was still quite funny. Do you think you could provide a link? If you didn't mind? I'd love to see it.

In all, your story is funny while the characters are dead on. The fight scenes are enjoyable to read and the interaction and relationships between all the characters are enjoyable and believable. Though I'm still leering of Shadon, your story none the less, is a joy to read.

Do you email others to let them know when you update? If so, I'm morgondemi@yahoo.com. I'd love to continue reading your story.
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From ANON - Slimthrowed on December 08, 2005
Quite an interesting read. I'll admit, it took me a while to get over the fact that you had depicted one of my favorite Sonic characters as a closet homosexual; nonetheless, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story (so far). Aside from the abundance of spelling and grammatical errors, I couldn't find anything about this story that was too inappropriate. The way you depict the characters is fairly accurate and the interaction between them is definitely on-point, in my opinion. You even managed to capture the essence of a true "Sonic-esque" environment, something that only a real Sonic fan can do. On many levels I was both impressed and appeased (always like reading a good story). If you think I'm just blowing smoke up your ass, think again. If this story sucked, I'd tell you. I definitely look forward to some exciting resolution in this bit of fan-fiction. Keep me in the loop as far as any updates go.
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From ANON - MaddyChan on December 07, 2005
Since my review got erased:

Awesome fiction! I love that you write long chapters and the way your story is so detailed. Nice Family Guy reference by the way, gotta be one of the funniest moments on the show.

But I have to admit, I feel sorry for Amy now. She's not just going to give up is she? That would suck!

Update soon, this is great.
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From ANON - Anon on December 07, 2005
Peanut Butter, Jelly Time! Love that joke!

Anyway, great story. Lovin the Sonic and Shadow. We need some nice hot sex now though.
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From on December 07, 2005
Your story interests me.

I am looking foward to seeing how this little love triangle will play out between Son/Shad/Amy. I'll root for Amy and her Piko Hammer flying into the back of Shadow's head.

Personally, I'm in favor of Knuckles/Rouge myself and so far, I rather like how you have them in your story.

I find it funny and fun to read. I'll add it to my favorites so I can keep up with it.

Update please!
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