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Reviews for Brotherly love

By : Ayeshagirl
  • From momopeach on July 23, 2007
    This story is really confusing. I can't figure out what the hell is going on half the time. The characters are really OOC as well... @_@;;
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  • From on July 22, 2007
    yoshhhhhhhh >.< that made me kinda sad...can't wait to see the next!
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  • From PasuterEnogu on March 18, 2007
    Update, please. ^-^
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  • From Veggiefan2 on March 08, 2007
    Alright, here goes....what is with the POV? You CAN'T have two people's POV in the same POV! What are you doing? It's seriousy throwing me off. I hope in later chapters (only on ch.2) that you fix that, please. I'm confused and whiel the story is very cute, I don't know how to discern POV's to well, and it's making me lose interest. If you want, you should have someone either beta this, or do it yourself and fix the POV's. I will comment on the later chapters, so Ja'ne.
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  • From Cave on February 26, 2007
    *read halfway into chapter 2*

    wha.

    This story makes no sense. wtf. If Sora walks in one Tidus and Riku doing it; then you have to actually say that he walks in.
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  • From ANON - PuppyLove on December 31, 2006
    Awww How sweet please continue and update more. :D
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  • From ANON - naoko144 on November 11, 2006
    ooooh!! I want the next chapie!!! I sooo totaly like it x3 (woot soraXsquall stuff, it's rare, and one of my fav couple with that^^but there is so little of there out here...)
    so, telling that you'r doing a really great job on this and I wanna read more of it!! PLz conitnue x3
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  • From ANON - NeonTokyo on October 29, 2006
    Awwwwee!! This is so cute! I can't wait so see what happens next! ^____^ You rock!
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  • From ANON - Minza on October 28, 2006
    Very good storie keep up And PLEASE update as soon as possible this sorie is real good. :D
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  • From ANON - senku on October 27, 2006
    hello i love your story i hope u continue it soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 28, 2006
    Oddly enough I find this story interesting and wanting to read more o.O Though I hope Leon makes up with Cloud and also has some fun with sora before he goes for riku lol :P
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  • From ANON - Oni-san on July 19, 2006
    Wow, this story is really good!!! I like the way you really made Riku a playboy. You're the first that I've seen change him like that but you're also the best ^_^ Plz continue!
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  • From ANON - Anon. on June 25, 2006
    Awwwwwww...... You make Sora sooo cute... Adorable. Your writing is also very good, too good. The way you foreshadow about what's going to happan make me want to read more. So please keep writing this.
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  • From ANON - Raenilah on January 31, 2006
    Aww, that's soooo adorable. It's like...SQUEE! I lurve it.
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  • From ANON - FRAN on January 17, 2006
    this story is very interesting but i LOVE IT !!! update soon. sora is so cute!!
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