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Reviews for The Traitor

By : ErieDragon
  • From ANON - kyriem on April 23, 2014
    This story is wicked awesome. I love the descriptions and how she's not the typical wishy washy idiot heroine. I really hope she ends up with Lo'jar :)
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  • From Ashtaar on July 06, 2007
    Oh, this can't be it! You have to continue, please! *begs on her knees* Please don't stop here! And what's up with Morla? I thought she was only mute, but it looks like she is also blind... what's wrong? I mean Lo'Jar is a pure awesomness! How could she care about that pathetic human??? I say drop the human! Human is not cool, nit cool at all! I really hope she'll see the right things and comes back to the one and only Lo'Jar :( *is very sad*

    Though now that she got something on with Clef... I like Clef too, and I like Lo'Jar.... Looks like a tough choice... Hmm.. but i suppose i still like Lo'Jar more, oh please, you can't just break his heart like that! And my hear too! Please continue, I beg you! Do not abandon this story!

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  • From ANON - Church on October 15, 2006
    Even though I havent read this in awhile started all the way from one to 15 man. This is grea t it sparked a big interest with me and the scene with Clef and Morla was awesome i wish to see more of it too. I cant wait till the nextime you update. I wonder though...is by chance Loren gonna come aorund again or anything because he seems cool but i didnt like it when he went with Morla for awhile. I liked the morla/clef pairing since the childhood like theme is very original and cuteness plus its sexy. SEXY FOR THE PEOPLE!!!
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  • From AzureBonds on July 06, 2006
    I love this story. It inspired me to write one of my own :)
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  • From ANON - Kamisori (not logged in) on June 26, 2006
    Another chapter in this wonderful story
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  • From ANON - ... on January 31, 2006
    Heh, just now realized that this is a companion piece to Providence. Was thinking Lo'jar's real name and his history sounded familiar. Emotion bringing story. Kinda wanted to cry when Lo'jar was left behind. Can I keep him instead?
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  • From ANON - Koneko on January 22, 2006
    omg poor Lo'jar that is so mean! im starting to hate Morla, she is becoming quite the B. update soon! plz
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  • From ANON - Mistah Eleganza on January 22, 2006
    Oh my. What a depressing chapter! I felt so awful while reading Morla and Lo'jar's spat. The old saying is true, though; you hurt the ones you love the most. Despite my sadness, this was a wonderfully crafted chapter. Your characters are all so vibrant and real; thats how you can invoke such a feeling from your readers. I love them all, and I hate to read about them getting hurt. I do hope you plan on letting them repair their relationship in the future. I like Lo'jar quite a bit.

    I eagerly await the next chapter! Good luck!
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  • From ANON - Mistah Eleganza on January 21, 2006
    Ah, an excellent set of additions to this already great story! I am particularly happy that Lo'jar has taken a more central role. I was very much hoping that Morla and Lo'jar would become involved; might I also say you presented a touching and tasteful scene of them together. I think the line where Morla was realizing that he was "not just a friend, but THE friend" resonated so well. Wonderful work.

    I am very intrigued by what kind of being or force that Morla is connected to. I look forward to reading more!
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  • From BrightShadow on January 18, 2006
    *bows down before the greatness* Okay, I am officially jealous. This is just... woah. It certainly seems things for Morla are about to get a whole lot more complicated than they already were, not to mention what Clef's reaction will be if/when he finds out. Angry Tauren=ouchies.
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  • From Raechan on January 15, 2006
    Excellent. I can't wait to keep reading. :3
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  • From ANON - lightofshadow on January 14, 2006
    nice story and i understand about the pause because your playing wow(i play also >:)
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  • From ANON - WinterWolf on January 12, 2006
    This is great so far. I have one question though, how the fuck can a half troll half night elf be related to a tauren?
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  • From ANON - Tenshi Koneko on January 11, 2006
    yay Lo'jar! *smiles* love the chapter, can't wait for the next!
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  • From ANON - AuroraEarth on January 09, 2006
    I LOVE your stories! And this one is no exception! It's a shame that you get so many hits, and not enough reviews... I'm wondering if Morla and Clef's relationship would bloom.. I'll just have to wait and see, don't i? hehe. gl
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