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Reviews for Back again?

By : KaySan666
  • From ANON - wild rose on June 24, 2006
    interesting
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  • From kidavi on December 19, 2005
    good start, Kay! ^_^ minor crits: beware the excessive use of capitals. perhaps it was to emphasize certain aspects, but it gets a little distracting. i think you're a bit OC (over-lovey teenage twins always make me cringe a little), but that's just my personal preference, it doesn't reflect anything on the quality of your writing. beware of fragmented sentences and a few spelling errors (simple things that a good beta-reading would take care of). otherwise, nice start, i'll be keeping an eye on this!
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  • From KaySan666 on December 18, 2005
    Ah... well i try to update the 3rd chapter soon. ^^,
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  • From ANON - Blue on December 18, 2005
    Wah...
    Too short... ._.

    Please go on with that!
    I want more, more, more *hrhrhr*

    sorry, I know my english has become quite bad... ^^"
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  • From ANON - Celesta on December 16, 2005
    I like it write more please.
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  • From ANON - Blue on December 16, 2005
    WOW!!!
    That's Amazing....

    Please go on with it...
    I Love this Story...
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  • From ANON - Jade Tokier on December 15, 2005
    Well for the most part it is correct. However, there is only one problem, some of your words don't have an 's' on the end. Like "month"...
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  • From ANON - Silver Wolf on December 15, 2005
    It's okay. More to come?
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  • From ANON - Whacko dante! on December 15, 2005
    HEY YOU LIL LADY! Beautiful work! Don't take it off yet, ok? I'll do my best to beta it some more. ^^
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  • From ANON - Carrie on December 15, 2005
    oooh very good chapter and well written. I cant wait for the next chapter. I have my trusty Mundus at my side ready to sic on you if i dont see an update soon hehe. xXx
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