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Reviews for Zelda and Malon in quicksand 'fighting over Link'

By : TBoneTony
  • From ANON - Amun-Ra on November 23, 2006
    It was... um, interesting? I have to say that you are the first person to write a quicksand story like this. I guess it is better than tentacles, though.

    And yes, Raquel, he can write a fic with with none of that stuff, but it would not go far here because this is "ADULT" fanfiction.net, as in sex in the story.

    And be appreciative that someone makes a story that is not Link/Dark Link, that seems really common.
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  • From ANON - Loren Kimsey on September 12, 2006
    What is it with you and quick sand?
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  • From ANON - Raquel on August 07, 2006
    Tell me, do you have a girlfriend? Probably not, if this is the way you think of women. As a feminist AND author, I object strongly to this entire story---it's atrocious. You think you are being "deep" and "insightful" by writing about Zelda and Malon's inner feelings, but I can say with certainty that your views on women's emotions are warped beyond belief. The scenario at the end particularly irked me---you made Link out to be a playboy and the girls to be shameless little sluts. Bad spelling and grammar all around---God, what ISN'T to hate about this story?

    I think you are a horrid writer. But, please, prove me wrong: I challenge you to write a fic that has nothing to do with quicksand---or snakes or slime or any other of your demented fetishes---and features no sex. None. Not even a hint of sexual tones. Because, quite frankly, I don't think you can do it. You are so fixated around your own bizarre, idiosyncratic libido that you obviously write just to get off. That's not what writing is about. Shape up or ship out, honey.
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  • From ANON - Mr. E on January 26, 2006
    It was a good story, but I expected an actual sex scene between the 3 of them.
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  • From ANON - pheonix on January 19, 2006
    Again great work. (3-4 Stars)

    LOL, that was awesome@funny!

    Don't worry on this site you can't be modded by just having someone dislke your storys. *I know many dislike a few of mine*

    grw spelling errors, but nothing too hard to understand. (in other words great job on that)

    can't wait to see more of your work.

    BTW (FF.net is a shallow place from hell!, I still haven't posted my fics for fear of some idiots causing me to be banned.)
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  • From ANON - Adam on January 17, 2006
    Cat fight? Check. Lesbian action? Check. Three way? Check. Good Story? Definitely.
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  • From ANON - link fan on January 15, 2006
    that was AUSOME it had love it had sadness it had anger all the great parts of a good story :) hope u make another chapter

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  • From ANON - Anonymous on January 14, 2006
    OMG! this was just so cool!
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