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Reviews for Mansion Challenge 1

By : FallenRealms
  • From RogueHippie on December 05, 2010
    I really like the idea behind this story (mainly because it reminds me of a sim date game I've played), but I am dissapointed in the lack of updates for this potentially fantastic fic.

    The one thing that doesn't make sense to me is that Aaron decides to do the list in order. Why does it matter what order he fucks them in as long as he fucks them?
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  • From ANON - FallenRealms on October 19, 2006
    Actually, this isn't a self-insert. Aaron is just a character I made up. I would NEVER put my own name into a fan fiction, lol!
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  • From ANON - Pitiful Irony on September 26, 2006
    This makes me kind of sad.

    It's written fairly well(though it does need some work), but the idea behind it kinda sucks for a fanfic. Especially because you refer to yourself by name; had you left 'I' anonymous, it would've worked out semi-well.

    Self-insertions are a pet peeve of mine though, so maybe I'm being a little biased.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on August 31, 2006
    Seriously dude, you have to get another chapter in. If you have time to edit the thing, I think you have time to write another chapter.
    And P.S. You didn't really have to edit it that much, this is adultfanfic, you can't really go too extreme in here.
    P.P.S. Ignore the guy above me, it also doesn't really matter settings either, you should see the shit people write about(hey, maybe you probably have).
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  • From ANON - NG on July 19, 2006
    umm...

    Soul Calibur? In a modern setting? I don't think it's a good idea...
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  • From ANON - saqhra on June 25, 2006
    Pleaseeeeeeeee! Continue!

    I wanna see to Ivy.
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  • From ANON - ChrisDawg88 on January 26, 2006
    Great so far. Update.
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  • From ANON - loslomo on January 25, 2006
    good start. please write more
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  • From ANON - Deamon on January 23, 2006
    Nice intro. This has potential to be a great story just keep at it. I'll keep an eye out for the update.
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