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Reviews for Black and White

By : AngelofTwilight
  • From CanzetYote on March 17, 2022

    "Tears of pain and pleasure rolled down his muzzle as he felt his tormentor play with his body like he was some toy."

    I have some questions about that scene:

    1. When Delta cried, did his tears specifically roll down:
    A: The bridge of his muzzle and off the tip of his nose as he hung his head
    or
    B: The side of his muzzle diagonally and off his lower jaw and chin

    2. Exactly how would Delta react and what would he say to me if I hugged him, rubbed his back and licked those tears rolling down his muzzle with my tongue during the scene where he cried? Because every time I read that, I fantasize licking every last tear from Delta's muzzle.

    3. Dumb question but on a scale from 1 to 10 with 10 being the saltiest, how salty would Delta's tears taste on my tongue if I licked them directly from his muzzle?

    4. On a scale from 1 to 10 with 1 being freezing cold and 10 being scalding hot, how warm were those tears rolling down Delta's muzzle?

    I know these questions sound weird but please please PLEASE reply back!


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  • From ANON - SilverYaoi on January 23, 2006
    Ohhh!! I read this story on Mediaminer! I LOOOOVVVEEE it so much! Cried rivers when I saw that you never finished the sequel though :(
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  • From ANON - YamiKaiyoh on January 22, 2006
    Eee! I'm so happy you started writing this again.I liked the old version too but this one's promising to be a good one.
    I do have one teensy-weensy little thing though.I don't know much Japenese.I know you're trying to keep to the context but I think it would help to put the meaning of words and sentences at the bottom.
    But other than that,I am VERY happy with this chapter and I'm looking fowards to more.You sure caught my attention with this one!
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