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Reviews for Tu Fui, Ego Eris

By : HazardousRaptor
  • From VampiricOddBall on April 12, 2021

    I know I am many years late, but Haunting Ground has caught my attention again after all these years (I've replayed the game so many times.) so I looked for some fanfics, especially ones with Riccardo he's my favorite Stalker, and I have to say, I wish there was more of this story, or a continuation of it. I will forever keep returning to, and rereading this. :)


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  • From ANON - Anon on November 13, 2019

    Just reading this now (after a second playthrough of Haunting Ground). This is very well written. I like how you fleshed out the characters and gave them more background. Good job incorporating the game play into the story. Thank you for not romancing the violence and questionable consent situations. I look forward to reading more. Cheers!


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  • From rogueMeiko on August 21, 2014
    You are really good at writing, I swear if you ever sell a novel I will be one of the first people to buy it! Little errors here and there, but nothing major. Please keep up the amazing work!
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  • From WithinReason on September 12, 2013
    This fiction is the best I have ever read. You're a pure genius! I couldn't take my eyes off of this fic for even a second. I spent days and nights reading it. I even made an account so I could comment. Very well done. What you had written explained a lot of things to me, weather they really happened in the plot or not. Your soup explanation made me go "Wow, that's probably really what happened". Thank you so much for writing this! It explained a ton to me and I now have a better understanding for this incredible game.
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  • From Nexides on August 02, 2013
    Aw, that's it? Maybe if you hadn't brought up the mysterious man who found the car, it wouldn't be so bad, having this unfinished. But you've got me curious about him now.

    I do hope you finish this some day.
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  • From ANON - Tsunoba on July 06, 2013
    I admit, I only started reading this out of desperation. Only six fics here, and two of them involve bestiality. And the summary of yours gave me the impression that Fiona would give in quickly and they'd have a happy life together. I kinda skimmed through the author's notes at the beginning, and rolled my eyes when I saw some mention of Riccardo going shopping. But I went and decided to try anyway, figuring that maybe there's be some good stuff before things got too bad.

    So, I must admit that this has exceeded all my expectations so far. "Riccardo going shopping" is creepy, his love for her is entirely twisted, and she's frightened and completely disgusted by him. Even better, she doesn't go, "Oh, I'm wet just thinking about him, maybe he's not so bad after all." She's still creeped out by her body's reaction!

    And now that he's saved her life, it's set up perfectly so that people can either interpret future feelings toward him as actual love if they want to, or have them be a result of Stockholm Syndrome. Both kinds of readers win.

    And I want to read more, but it's almost 4 AM. I just wanted to thank you for the good story thus far.

    (Also, I noticed some misspellings. You have a habit of using "brake" instead of "break," which is, unfortunately, one of those misspellings that spellcheckers won't catch, and have to be found manually.)
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  • From ANON - Alicia Jewel on March 12, 2012
    “...and at that point realized he was retarded.”

    I think it was that line that finally made me review this story. I've very much enjoyed it thus far, even if the chapters are a lot longer than I'm used to. xD This is Stockholm Syndrome at its finest, and I congratulate you on not having Fiona pounce all over Riccardo when he saved her life and making her more hesitant about the whole thing instead. Your depiction of even the most ordinary actions is well-executed, and I love the bits of background information you’ve added to the story. And your characterization—even of Hewie!—is very good, as well.

    As for the sexy bits (because that is what this site mostly is, after all)... well, there haven’t been very many of them up until now, but what there has been has been very nice, to put it one way. ;) I’m really looking forward to the moment when Riccardo finally “beds” Fiona. (Oh, I just love his old-fashioned language!)

    My only gripes about this story are that the grammar needs work, and some of the details seem repetitive or could be moved. Otherwise, I shall continue to read this eagerly!
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  • From ANON - evilneko on February 13, 2012
    Wow, I love this story and very interested in what happens next. You're very talented in writing, a few spelling mistakes here and there but none that are distracting enough to keep me from reading. I haven't played the game myself but I've seen videos of it and very intrigued by it. :) The story is old, I know for sure, but I hope one day you still finish it. :)
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  • From JessiCosmic on August 22, 2011
    This was fantastic! I am in love with this. You did such a great job with it and I thank you for it!
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  • From LoveKagoYasha on February 12, 2007
    Okay, considering the amount of satisfaction I get every time I push Riccardo off the roof, (I mean the bastard shot my dog!) I have to admit I am very intriged by the idea of Riccardo being redeemed and actually finding love with Fiona. I will most definetly be reading this story.
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  • From ANON - Jen on July 28, 2006
    I LOVE your Haunting Ground fics! Please continue when you can :)


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  • From ANON - Silver_Slumber on July 27, 2006
    Oh and sorry I forgot my email too. Mine is: Tigernut684@hotmail.com talk to me when you want. Hope you update soon, but take your time, can't rush perfection I always say.
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  • From ANON - Silver_Slumber on July 27, 2006
    *Is silent for a few moments*...Ok, I just have to say...That was awesome! Fantastic job my friend. I was hooked from the very start. You indeed have writting skills. Your description of things makes it like I'm really there. And what you said in the beginning, on how some people hate it when you go into detail, like Riccardos boots or Fionas ankle geeting hurt. Well god damnit, who cares about those people. I love how you go into all that detail. I also love how you go through the cutscenes of the story and give the possible thoughts and feelings of what was going on. Hell I wonder if you're an undercover Capcom worker. I mean jesus you had every single character down so right. I don't know just how the hell you did that, but it was freakin great! Please continue. I really want to see what happens. I imagine it must take a while to update since each of your chapters are so long, and not to mention you have to edit them. But please, please, keep going. This is my fav story on here. You did a great job, and really really good fantastic job. Well done.

    Silver_slumber
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  • From ANON - Hariah on May 02, 2006
    Sorry, it hid my email. My email is hariah@sbcglobal.net and my AIM name is Princess Azula if you want to chat. I don't want to seem like I just reviewed and ran off like a weenie...wonderful story, again!

    ~Hariah
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  • From ANON - Hariah on May 02, 2006
    This is a wonderful story, and you are a very talented writer, but there are a few things that you should know. Anything can be put on this site, of course, but most people who come here to read are extremely horny and looking for a lot of senseless, hardcore porn. This story is too good to be senseless, hardcore porn...and in appoximately sixty pages, or more, there has been no sex so far, and I would rate this pg-13. The worst thing that has happened has been a gyn exam, and trust me, there is NOTHING sexy about those. I HATE having to get the damned things; just thinking about them makes all women a bit ill. My advice would be for you to put this on fanfiction.net with a rating of M (mature) or R, whatever they happen to be calling it this week. You'll get a lot more readers, and a lot more attention, and I think that it will be in a more appropriate place then. Honey, you're too good for this place. This story is too good to be locked in a porn cesspool, and I'm sure that people on fanfiction.net would absolutely adore it.

    ~Hariah
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