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Reviews for Melinda's pet

By : Kundrat1280
  • From Redmaple on September 10, 2009
    Made me cry and feel better at the same time. I had been having a horrid day until this. Thanks. One of those few stories I can reread and just enjoy.
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  • From drizzt13 on July 18, 2008
    oo last passage is rather depressing. skillfully written though, and its not common that you get to see the end of the mayfly romance(romance between an immmortal and da mortal).
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  • From Ashtaar on June 08, 2007
    A beautiful storry, it is so ful of pation, love and raw emotions! I was fully captivated by it and red it all in a single breath.

    What had captivated me the most is the ending however. As much as i hate sad endings, I have to give it to you it was beautifuly put. I cried myself along with Melinda at Horu's death as if I lost someone dear to me. I still have tears in my eyes.

    It was a brave desision on your part to end it this way instead of cutting it of on the usual "they lived happily ever after". And it is a truthful and inevitable ending for all such unusual romances involving one mortal and one immortal or rather long-lived being. Cudos on making this desision in your story. Hopefully one day they WILL meet again, to be together forever at last. :)
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  • From ash1980 on June 04, 2007
    aww the story is so sad, plz update im curious to know if she finally gets to be with horu again.
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  • From natiow59 on April 13, 2007
    Phenomenal story, truly. It wasn't just about the sex, although those parts were well and mostly tastefully written. The bond between Horu and Melinda was profound. Over the course of the story, I really became attached to the two characters. In fact, I nearly cried when Horu died. Great job integrating story line from the game, as well as lore and jobs. I loved it, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - yusaritakio on December 28, 2006
    You damn motherfucker! The end made me cry!
    But serious now. I think this story is good, BUT you really should show the relationship development between Horu and Melinda and how Melinda developed such a dominating, possesive disoder. You should rewrite this and expand it.
    The ending ruled btw. XD
    What server do you play on?
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  • From ANON - Scott Slessor on September 15, 2006
    this was seriously one of the most wonderfull stories i have read in a verry long time, it was incredibly touching and i absolutely loved it, your writeing is fanominal and i probably spelled that word wrong but i dont care just absolutely mind blowing i LOVE your story
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  • From ANON - The PD on September 01, 2006
    Yes! Return of Rodrick for one sentence!

    Excelent story! Also, for one who hates slave things, i loved it. That's all i can say! You are the master of disaster!
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  • From ANON - dgaadsgsgsgdvcbdf on August 23, 2006
    Holy shit sad ending :(

    I really enjoyed this story...it was well written and of couse, hot as hell. For some reason, I am really entrigued by the shaman character that showed up for a short while. Whatever happened to him? Regardless, great ending to a great story.
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  • From ANON - tank on July 25, 2006
    this is easily one of the best fics for WoW i've had the pleasure of reading! Its beatiful how they warm up to each other and they both take care of each other, the last chapter was very sad but the ending was extremely heart warming. Its a shame that Horu got old but I like how you incorporate his mother into it so thats a good piece of closure :) Congrats on a great fic!
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  • From ANON - Rick on July 18, 2006
    What a beautiful story. You made something incredible and you should be very proud.
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  • From ANON - Hope Darkeheart on July 08, 2006
    Awesome story...just...awesome.
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  • From AzureBonds on July 06, 2006
    Loved this story. the ending was great. Sad, but great. When is Melinda going to take a new pet? ;)
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  • From ANON - Raizari on June 16, 2006
    The ending was sad :( I had to take a few moments after to cry a little. Even if it was just a story, just got to me. Thanks for the privilige to read this. :D
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  • From ANON - Choppasama on May 04, 2006
    Amazing.....your writing style is beautiful. And I've read my fair share of everything!
    You were able to capture every emotion, and brought life into your characters, which is no small feat.
    Honestly, you made me SO SAD (I cried....which doesn't happen a lot) with this story, yet so very happy at the same time. It felt like i was experiencing the events and growing old myself.
    Please continue your writing for years to come, and thank ou for your time well spent.
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