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Reviews for A Taste of Bliss

By : DrkLazarus
  • From McDohl on July 03, 2006
    I love this story it's grade A prime beef, it's a very convincing story as for the incest theme it shouldn't be a problem for people because incest was common in royalty in real life. As for the age thing that also shouldn't be a problem for three reasons.#1 Lym is not real person she's a game character, #2 in real life back in the olden time it was common place for young girls to be married off also in the game Lym got married.#3 Lym is the one that is actively pursuing the relationship. keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 03, 2006
    I love it. This should be a continuing series keep them coming.
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  • From Fire37 on June 29, 2006
    I enjoyed this story a lot, even though the Princess's age is a little bit uncomfortable. Still, you are a very good writer and I like your style. Just the contrast between your first paragraph and my story's first paragraph... just good writing! Anyway, definitely keep it up. I enjoyed the bit about Miakis. I'd like to see something with Arshtat and I wonder about Lyon?
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  • From ANON - Blind Lemon Pie on June 10, 2006
    Not bad. I'm ashamed to say I would have liked it more if it was a bit more racy, but this was definately a classy take on the subject. Personally I'd like to see the prince go through most of the females in the game, or vice-versa. Actually, I think the latter would definately make for a more entertaining read than the former. The fellow really doesn't seem to be the type of guy that'd deliberately go out looking for it.

    Please, continue writing the story.
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  • From ANON - bansheeblue13 on May 21, 2006
    That was great...a little weird that it was incestuous, but interesting none the less.
    Ok...I'll admit it!
    I really liked it and the fact that incest was involved gives it a forbidden fruit kind of feeling.
    Bravo!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 14, 2006
    Great stuff, please continue! I want to see more Prince/Lym!
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  • From ANON - \"Olga\" on May 08, 2006
    Told you I'd get around to reviewing this! But where's the second chapter? I thought you said you added another, and I don't see it... Anyway, like I said before, you've got real writing talent! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - LathainZeal on April 18, 2006
    Yeah, thanks for your kind words. I've always wondered why some authors will hold a chapter "hostage" for reviews. Now I know. It's a great feeling when someone likes your work. You've motivated me to write another installment.

    As for your Miakis/Lym concerns, it wasn't going to go *too* far. :p I won't say how far now, because I'll ruin it for later. And the Prince and Lym will definetly be seeing more of each other. I may have to step away from game canon in terms of timeline to give myself more room for encounters between the characters I'll be working with. I wanted to work Lyon in there somewhere, matter of fact, now that I think of it, I know exacly *where* I want to work her in...

    Hey, maybe the Godwins can fall by the wayside for a while. Gizel's not so impatient that he won't delay his plans for a while, given the right impetus. :p

    I'm also considering a yuri lemon, maybe Luserina/Viki/Lyon. Thoughts? E-mail me then!

    ~LZ
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  • From ANON - Lym on April 18, 2006
    Wow, this was great. A little intense (as I'm not used to incest), but still great.

    I could definitely see some incesterous undertones in the game concerning these two, so I was hoping/planning to see something like this emerge from it. Miakis and Lym is a little harder to believe, but I can still somewhat see it, seeing as how Miakis teases the Princess all the time (nothing beyond "teasing" her clit, though). I also pictured Lymsleia being 12 as opposed to 10, but it's pretty hard to tell what would be more accurate with her.

    But again, great first fanfic! I really hope you'll write a sequel or spinoff - I want to see them get even farther (actual intercourse, perhaps? She may be young, but she still is a future (and very soon-to-be) Queen). Either way, I'll be sure to read what ever you come up with next!
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