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Reviews for Beyond the Light

By : MomoMochi
  • From ANON - Kayu Silver on May 23, 2006
    *waves happy flag* You'll see that flag alot. It pops up in reviews when things I find especially amusing happy. Specifically, I liked the idea of poor Riku finding Axel and Sora all over eachother and Zexion's "I > You" attitude. Mostly, though, this is just fun. Mmhmm.
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  • From ANON - Kayu Silver on May 23, 2006
    Following reviewer's law, when you begged for reviews in Ch. 6 (or was it 7?) it became my solemn duty to go back and review each chapter, so, here I am.

    I liked this. As beginnings go, it was one of the better ones. Definately not cliche'd, which is the trouble with many stories, and actually pretty reasonable. Hell, if it weren't for Riku's emotional attachments, I could even see this having been in the games or something. I'd be more excited about it, but I'll save the bounciness for later...
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  • From ANON - Maddi on May 21, 2006
    I thought Saix was the 'other' Riku. Hmm. I *think* I know who he is now but I'll hold it and see if I'm write. If I am, I'll do the Happy Dance. If I'm not...then well, I suck. lmao!

    Good chapter, though if they run across Sora and Roxas is still in control and he sees Axel...poor Riku. He'll think Sora...::cries::

    Oh! When I said odd, I didn't mean in a bad way, I promise. Just odd as in odd but in a funny way. ^_^* Update ASAP!!
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  • From ANON - stickyfootedtreefrog on May 19, 2006
    ahh, I just want sora and Riku to be happy, so many things are getting in the way! I guess that's true to KH tho, huh? In the end it always works out somehow right? My little silver sephiroth statue from Japan looks so cute right now so I think I'll go read some seph stories until I can read the next chap of your story. :)
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  • From ANON - stickyfootedtreefrog on May 17, 2006
    love you worlds... my friend let me borrow KH and I just finnished it, took me 3 days! Loe your story, hope to see more of it soon.


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  • From ANON - MaddiChan on May 16, 2006
    Overall, this is a nice story. A wee bit odd at times and funny (ZxD) but overall a good story. But I have a feeling that was Riku in the last chapter. Saix did something too him and Roxas probably knows it's not Riku. Poor Sora. And I'm with Roxas: WHERE'S AXEL! lmao!

    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Cannibalistic Kitty on May 05, 2006
    THis certainly is a unique little story. I'm curious to see what direction it will go in.
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  • From ANON - ayarin on May 04, 2006
    Hurray! Thank you for continuing. :3 I love fairy tales too. Zexion/Demyx is cute. =D Please write more!
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  • From ANON - KamirineGoddess on May 03, 2006
    Z/D are actually a cute couple. I already like the pairing in your story already to be honest.

    ::crosses fingers:: But will Axel come try and come to the rescue? (Or is the alt. universe Axel the one from the school?) Actually, is this all the same alt. universe? ( The school, the castle...)
    How many alt. universe versions of the characters are there?

    In any case, I love the new chapter. You definately added one of my favorite characters to the story so I'm thrilled. But I would love to see Axel come in and shake things up for your Prince Charming Riku.

    Oh...and will Ansem show up? (Or was he the principle of that school?)

    Update really soon! I have more cookies!
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  • From ANON - kyoishigame on May 02, 2006
    PLEASE CONTINUE DONT IGNORE ME AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH lol j/p IF NO ONE REVIEWS>>>WELL I AM SO COULD U CONTINUE THE STORY 4 ME PLEASE CONTINUE
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  • From ANON - kyoishigame on May 02, 2006
    PLEASE DONT STOIP WITH THE STORY PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRIGHT A NEW CHAPTER SOON PLEASE
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  • From ANON - ayarin on May 02, 2006
    heh. :x I'm curious. I do want to see Riku save Sora. Please? ^^
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  • From ANON - KamirineGoddess on May 01, 2006
    NO! Don't end the story!!! I like it! I like it alot! I feel so bad for Sora and I want to see if Axel and Riku clash or something trying to save him. It's in a interesting twist on the KH universe and I'd like to see what happens next.

    Pretty please? ::huggles:: Pretty PRETTY please???!!!! ::Temps you with cookies::
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  • From ANON - mikkie on May 01, 2006
    go on T_T theres so lil to read and this story is really interesting.. and I want poor lil cute sora to be happy again T_T ..... its so sad T-T
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