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Reviews for The Chaos Within

By : sonic232
  • From ANON - Gizmo on June 17, 2006
    Fantastic work. The subtle changes each chapter to the "consuming" keep it just as intriguing without seeming like repeating a trick over and over, and the buildup to each is well-crafted indeed. I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - CrazyIvan(notloggedin) on June 07, 2006
    Well that was extremly pointless yet oddly entertaining. I suppose you deserve a treat, Howsa bout a cookie for the little author? Hmm? Does the author wanna cookie? Er herm, sorry, had to do that, anyway, nice job, looking foreward to chapter 8.
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  • From ANON - Funk Man on June 03, 2006
    Interesting story! please finish up! Did I mention it's interesting?
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  • From ANON - Marc on May 25, 2006
    Not bad, not bad at all. It's a personal peeve of mine that people put disclaimers like 'I THOUGHT THIS WAS AN INTERESTING IDEA FOR A FIC OK read&review!' at the end of their first chapter, but overall: nicely done.

    Oh, and linking to the Sonic Sexual fap-mag shouldn't really be kosher - if I recall rightly, the original artist didn't like his work spreading across the Net like that, and as a result stopped selling his art CDs altogether. Can you not just put something along the lines of 'if you know what I am talking about you should know where to find the comic', or something along those lines? Linking to the original comic shouldn't even be necessary if you're 'basing' your story on it.

    Just my two cents :I
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  • From ANON - Vincent on May 25, 2006
    *reads Amy getting absorbed* Yes! *reads Rouge getting absorbed* Yes!! *Vanilla and Cream* Annoying brat, yes! *hears about Robotnik* Dear God NO.

    It is a very good story so far. Can't say I won't be reading the next part without hands over my eyes though...
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  • From Breech_Loader on May 21, 2006
    Yo! (I changed 'Not Real, Really' a little bit. Now you can find out why ??? is doing 'it', so go read it again to find out)

    Now this... you know, this is pretty good. At first I was just reading it as a favour and then I realised it's quite engrossing. You need to edit the apostrophies to make it easier to read, and in places the paragraphs seem a little blocky, but that's all superficial. So far Amy/Chaos has been preying on the weak and helpless. Wonder if it's so easy when she/it tries for the stronger guys?

    Who'd WANT to assimilate Eggman?

    Honestly, how's anybody going to stop her/them?

    Normally I hate fics with possible SonAmy (unless it's a love triangle with Shadow) but this has so little SonAmy I'm actually enjoying it!

    I'm glad you're so far ahead, but don't you dare fall behind! This is cool and I'm glad you prompted me to read it!
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  • From ANON - Dark Angel Murdoc on May 21, 2006
    Hmm, definitely a different take around the Sonic Universe, and with Chaos of all beings to boot. Quick to get into the depth of the story from the very start, it sure is a very interesting read. One in which I hope to see updated soon. Little bits here and there are a bit messy (mostly the apostrophes), but otherwise nicely done ^_^

    One thing does come to mind though, will Tikal come to make trouble or stay out of it all entirely? Heh heh, I'm a huge Sonic series fan, so you will see me around here writing my own work and questioning a lot of outcomes here and there. Either way you take the story, keep it up!

    ~Dark Angel Murdoc
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  • From ANON - Hawk on May 21, 2006
    Not bad. The apostrophes are not showing up on my Firefox, but it also might be aff. Keep up the good work. Also, where can you find the "Sonic Sexual"?
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