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Reviews for Super Smash Bros Brawl - Newcomers

By : Streti
  • From JackieBlue on April 06, 2009
    CRAB BATTLE! YESS!!! XD
    Pure awesomeness, my friend, pure awesomeness!
    ...A BARREL ROLE?!? WTF??! LMFAO!!!
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  • From ANON - SeventhBase on February 14, 2009
    DO A BARREL ROLL!
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  • From ANON - xrdctfvhyjgbhnkm on February 25, 2008
    That was awesome but I want to see some Bowser/Zelda sex please or better yet Ike/Zelda/Link
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  • From ANON - egg on March 09, 2007
    I nearly died laughing. WTF, dude?! XD
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  • From ANON - Mardukesh on October 03, 2006
    Entertainment value very good, but... what on earth were you smoking?
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  • From ANON - Jackal Man on August 06, 2006
    When I saw the pairing, I was thinking, "Wow, someone capitalized on this already?" I've read your work before, so I was looking forward to a nice, steamy pairing between two hot characters. When I read it through, though, I was a bit distracted by the sheer amount of humor you threw in. It seems like halfway through, you decided that it'd be better off as a parody, and I must say that the resulting package was pretty goofy, but brilliant.

    All the references to MGS and Metroid were great, and the way you explained some of the sexual interactions were nothing short of hilarious. It's like you took the "by the book" approach to writing erotic fanfiction, but you were still under the high of some Mary Jane or something.

    '...and we wouldn't want to neglect her ass, would we?'

    Paraphrased, but great nonetheless.

    -jm
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  • From Streti on June 18, 2006
    Thanks for your comments, everyone, especially MCLBaAAPSADFF. Funny idea, Big Boss.

    It seems that I currently have interest only in these PWP fics of mine. This story especially has little in the way of background, because the setting is from a game that hasn't been released, in a fic geared towards humor. Also, I'm less familiar with Metroid than MGS, which shows in Samus' lesser role, not to mention that Metroid has less exposition overall.

    And hey, Anonymous: /v - is it /b with video games? Nectar from Eden has taken a backseat since my interest in FF8 has dwindled, but I have not forgotten about it.
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  • From ANON - MCLBaAAPSADFF on June 14, 2006
    ...could smell the masculine, sexy smell of smoke from his cigarette? wow, that sounds like something out of the fourties/fifties,
    like what's this? why Mr. Authorperson you're not smoking a smooth and relaxing cigarette at all?

    you fail to bring a real backstory/background into the story, but i can't blame you seing that the super smash games doesn't really have a story... oh well

    you manage to put in a couple of references from MGS and that's good(most people doesn't know about Otacon's relationship with his mother)
    you've got a talent but you should try to make a plot instead of writing a meaningless PWP(in my opinion), and you could try to make the characters a little more into character

    all in all i give this story a strong 3 out of 5, Keep up the good work :)
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  • From ANON - warpwizard on June 14, 2006
    That was insane. In a good way. Thanks for writing. :)
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  • From ANON - Big Boss on June 13, 2006
    Fantastic that was the best story iv'e read on this I couldn't stop laughing from start to end. The jokes about metal gear are brillant. If you decide to do another story with snake I have an idea how about old snake trying to get some. Plenty of c omedic jokes about snakes wrinkly old snake would be very funny.
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  • From ANON - Mr. Pointy on June 13, 2006
    This wins. Flawless victory.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on June 09, 2006
    I'll give you a review just based on the "Hit the weak point for MASSIVE DAMAGE" you threw in there. /b/ much? on a serious note, I love your storys, I hope someday that you finish "Nector from Eden" (note completely sure on that title, been some time since I read it.
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