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Reviews for Lustful Game

By : Merci
  • From Fuma on January 15, 2007
    Hey, you should probably update Chapter 0 with the other pairings you've done.

    Just thought I'd let you know.

    And yes, your story is fantastic. I patiently await more.
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  • From ANON - M. Mishima on November 14, 2006
    This is a fantastic story. I enjoy the way it has meandered from its beginning and look forward, one yaoi writer to another. Luck and blessings.
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  • From Merci on October 22, 2006
    Since AFF.net doesn't have any way to reply to reviews, I'm popping this one in here.

    Dr. Neverland - Thank you so much for pointing the 'lust' word out to me. I've fixed it up a bit so that it isn't as repetitive ^_^"
    The thesaurus is my best friend when I write (aside from the usual dictionary) but every now and then, I can't see the forest for the trees and can't see words that are being over-used >_
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  • From Neverland on October 22, 2006
    Wow, I never thought I would find Bryan/Steve to make me blush, but that did. My only critique is to *please* thesaurus a synonym for "lust." Use "lewd," "licentious," "bawdry," or even "horny." Seeing "lust" so much got a bit on the repetitive side for me, other wise, good characterizations... and a creepy thought of Bryan finishing sex with *that* laugh. XD
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  • From ANON - Incothe on October 19, 2006
    Wow this is great keep it up, I want more.
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  • From ANON - k-girl on August 29, 2006
    OK! One word comes to my mouth...LEE! I bet he's behind this.
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  • From ANON - Kairi Fighter on August 26, 2006
    I love this story so much. Words can't even describe how awesome you are at writing.

    Hwoarang/Jin = Love, Bryan/Steve = Love

    I'm excited to see your next chapter!
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  • From ANON - La Petite on August 14, 2006
    How did I miss this?

    This story is drool worthy. Now I'm wondering who set up the whole thing. Kazuya doesn't seem perverted enough and I somehow doubt it's Heihachi-seems like too much of a homophobe. Lee is a possiblity since he seems gay enough, but I still have no clue.

    I don't know, but I *do* know that I want to see more. Your characterization is spot-on. Hwoarang is his snarky, aggressive self and Jin is taciturn and mysterious. I think this story has turned me into a major Hwoarang/Jin shipper now. LOL
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  • From Yaoichi on July 23, 2006
    Generally don't post much in the way of reviews, but just have to say that you write really well! I hope you'll continue writing it in whatever way you've planned. I'd love to see the pairing reversed if you are so inclined, but I know personally I'd struggle so hard to write down a H/J as opposed to a J/H, so rest assured I have no expectations.

    Good job!
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  • From ANON - Jenny-fer on July 20, 2006
    Man, that was really good! ^o^ Very smexy~ and you captured the characters really well and managed to avoid any OOCness or sappyness. :3 I can't help thinking that it was Lee who was behind it all! XD
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  • From ANON - HollowSoul on June 12, 2006
    that was hot! please continue this!
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  • From ANON - rena on June 09, 2006
    YOU SUCK!!!! JIN DOES NOT LIKE HWRONANG!!!!!! IM SO DISTURBED!!!!
    GREAT STORY THOUGH!
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  • From ANON - Kairi Fighter on June 06, 2006
    Yes, I know I'm slow at reviewing this... again... *laughs*

    Thank you for writing this fic for me!

    I love it like so much potato chips... :P
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  • From ANON - MMishima on June 04, 2006
    Damn fine fic. Love the characterizations. Are you continuing it?
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  • From ANON - Ri on June 04, 2006
    That was hot and what an awesome way for smut! Great job! I still don't know who was behind it though. O_O Was it Heiche? ( i know i spelled his name wrong, due to being late. =P) Anywas great job loved it, best part when they couldn't turn off the television and it was stuck on gay porn. XD Anywas hope you write more like this one ^^
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