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Reviews for Heart and Soul

By : wickedorin
  • From ANON - WrenDex on September 23, 2011
    I read through all of the notes at the end of the epilogue, and ENJOYED them. -___- (Actually, I did. A lot. I always liked this subject in the whole Kingdom Hearts fandom; I like your approach).

    The story was very good. Well-written. The characterization was very sensitive and realistic. So yeah. I loved it.
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  • From ANON - x13xlovesx8x on July 02, 2008
    Atch... Angsty, but really good. Stupid deaths... I nearly cried when Roxas disappeared and when Demyx died... Actually cried when Axel died, because by that point, all the deaths of good characters had just built up... Ugh... rambling, sorry. DX

    Anyway, certainly a great piece of fiction. I really feel like you got inside their heads and saw what was really there, if you know what I mean. XD; It was really heart wrenching at times, just seeing what Demyx had to go through, all that mental agony, for lack of better words. The phrase "the closer you get to light, the longer the shadow cast becomes" really seems to fit with this story, and with Demyx in general most of the time. He's so cheerful and warm, that it's easy to forget/ignore what must be lurking just under the surface.

    ...I ramble... @_@
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  • From ANON - Emiphiste on January 08, 2007
    I have such a huge thing for Dark!Demyx; you have NO idea how happy this fic made me. xD
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  • From ANON - Katsuya on October 22, 2006
    Oh god damn you >_
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  • From ANON - Katsuya on October 22, 2006
    ...This is one fucking incredible fiction, I'll tell you that much.

    Touching, painfully honest, and brutally raw in places. Easily the best AkuDem (DemAku? Who knows...) I've ever come across, but there isn't nearly enough to make such a title sound impressive.

    I feel bad for not having anything important to say for each chapter.

    But /fuck/, I like this.
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  • From ANON - FlurryxOfxFlames on October 02, 2006
    Wonderful fiction!! I loved it!
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  • From ANON - dracoqueen22 (toolazytoosignin) on August 06, 2006
    I have to say that was one of the most well written fanfictions I have read in quite some time. It was emotionally evocative... and innovative as well. You had my attention grasped from the first line and I rather enjoyed the darker take on a character like Demyx. (I also must admit that when I played the game on easy... he kicked my ass several times. So much for being an 'easy' fight. Sigh) His questioning of the general oxymoronic nature of their existence/nonexistence has a great ring of truth. The emotion that you portrayed these characters as having is truly inspiring and I look forward to any future works. Congrats on writing a story worth reading.
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  • From ANON - Crimson_Enigma on July 18, 2006
    Wow...your epilogue just...wow... I can't really think of how to say what I mean right now regarding how much it touched me, particularly the author's note at the end, but damn...you made me cry, but it wasn't entirely out of sadness. Gotta love that hope.
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  • From ANON - Crimson_Enigma on July 13, 2006
    Wow, that was a lot of angst. And insanity. Lots. XD But I've gotta hand it to ya, this is an amazing fic. :3 I love how you portrayed Demyx's character and you did an awesome job with Axel's too. Again, such a great story. I look forward to the epilogue!
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  • From yellowturtle on July 12, 2006
    ... ... ... T_T Thas's so sad... And so not sad... How do you do it? You're.. an amasing writer. It's a beautiful story. It will be bittersweet when the ending comes.
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  • From ANON - Heartlessx3Nobody on June 29, 2006
    Oh my freakin' goodness... You made me cry.. More than once... I'm such a baby, but it was so sad and so cute at the same time awww... I'm so sad for them now, but I still love the story, I thought you should know.. It's one of my favorites.. I can't wait for the next chapter hope you update soon.. Aww...... So sad... ;_;
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  • From yellowturtle on June 28, 2006
    You keep saying the story is bad, that you're crazy and nothing is normal, but you're wrong. The story is wonderful, if you're crazy with mad writing skills, and there's nothing unnormal with angst. YOu should be proud of your story, it's... indescrible beyond the simple word, good.
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  • From ANON - Anon. on June 24, 2006
    T_T It's so sad... But really well done. Whatever you set out to do with this story originaly, it turned out great in the end. Please continue writing.
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