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Reviews for Suikoden V - Alpha Prince

By : Fire37
  • From Gta01 on March 25, 2007
    Hey just got done reading the update. And I hope the next chapter will stay focus on the Gate Rune war however going back to Roy would be cool also.By the way if you don't care I would like to read somthing with Lucretia and Cathari sometime maybe Cathari could help relieve Lucetia of some stress that has build up from trying to keep the castle running without the Prince.
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  • From Crono on March 24, 2007
    Of all the people to choose from I would never have guess that Hix would be the guy to open up a chapter with. Don't get me wrong I love it's cool to see Hix get some respect, Him and Tengaar are two of my favs. The opening with Hix, Viktor, and their unit was intense That's is how a battle chapter should open up. Viktor the bear was in full force and cool to see him fussing with star dragon sword.

    As for the boat part of the battle I like how the ice was move by the water rune and had they were also used to make fog to hide the boats.

    Tir was done well I like that so far, every single character has different type of personality and are unique Just look at the Tenkai stars they are very unique from each other and so are their runes. Tir shuns those closed to him in fear of his rune's hunger and you can see that he does care for his duty by feels as he's losing his self in it.

    As where the Prince seems to be very confident in himself and his duty as an royal perhaps because even though he was seen as a worthless male royal His mom and Dad still encourage him to get into politics and to become adapt in martal arts as where Tir was mostly raised by Gremio and kept out of the public however he also train in martal arts, And The Dawn Rune seems to Add to his Confidence and makes him even more apealing to those around him. Also so far The Dawn rune seems to be the only main rune that has no negative side effects yet This could be because it's a healing Rune with few attacks spells. also it seems to have no define will or personatily yet. although the Dawn Rune's brother/Sister The Tilight Rune has shown a very passionate personatily willing its already passionate user to take even more bedmates and even shows that it likes to entertain it self by influencing its user to push his/her will onto others.
    We didn't get to see Riou all that much so I can't said much about him other than he seem to the one woman type.

    And then there's Lazlo who is so far the most torture soul in this story. Although born an Prince he was raised as Noble's servent but prove to be more brave and skill than said noble however he lost his father figure and got the cursed rune and was betrayed by the one most close to him and left for dead making him lose all selfConfidence. then add ROP and you have a mix for a dark path. The ROP is a very over powering it breaks the will of it's user as can be seen on Lazol it then trys to make it's users personalty more like it's own and then thur him it's goes on to make others into it's slaves.

    Sorry I know that really didn't have much to do with the chapter but I just wanted point out how well and unique the Tenkai stars and their runes are you have done a great with them.

    I don't if you have a complete plot or even an ending plan or for matter know how long you plan to do this story. maybe you'll keep updating as long you're getting reviews and have time to do it. but anyway I Think you should stay with Tir for a couple of chapters if you don't mind since you have made some great elements to it also I would love to see what happens with Tir & Kasumi.
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  • From McDohl on March 24, 2007
    The battle is being done really cool. I like that it was not the same as the game. The game didn't seem to show how massive and important the Shasarazade battle was. In the it game it made it seem as if Tir's navy had just sail to the fort unopose then had a small land battle then a Small gourp snuck in. But your version is more true to real life tactics by haveing 2 fronts going, one by land and one on the sea well 3 fronts if you count the airforce of the dragon knights. It just makes more sence this way because you would want a land force to keep the enemy distracted while you sneak your small navy force around back and then have them attack the base while the small team takes out the defenses inside. All in all you are making the battle a lot better than the game did and I'm not just ass kissing I really think that.

    There's alot about the chapter I like,but as this already a little long winded I'll just touch
    on Tir and The Rune of Life and Death aka The Souleater. The only reason I mention the real name is because I've always wonder about it We know the rune thirst for souls and how it devours souls but could it also have the power to restore souls. Anyway back to the story I felt that the way you depicted the Souleater's personality and it's effect on Tir was dead on. I even think the fact that Tir gets hard and climaxes from battle and death is nice touch. As for Tir's personality it's dead on just the fact he's pushing the ones he cares for away makes it almost perfect. It's great to see that you touch on the Tir & Kasumi relationship since it was even mention in suiko 2 plus novels and on of the Suikogadens I even think she tells Tir that she wouldn't care if the souleater took her soul as she would be a part of him forever since the souls that the souleater eats become part of his being and that he's able feel them inside hiself. So I hope that if you stay with Suiko 1 era for a bit that you would build the Tir & Kasumi thing a bit.

    As for Tir sex life I like that Cleo and him have been with each other. One thing It seem to be hinted at but I wanted to make sure But is your Tir bisexual or atlest bisexual with Ted and maybe Gremio. It's no big deal in fact I got the same feeling from the game.
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  • From Fire37 on March 23, 2007
    What you've been doing is fine... Mcdohl. I just like to hear what parts of the chapter specifically liked, why they liked it, what they want to see more of...what they don't want to see more of....just that sort of thing.
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  • From McDohl on March 23, 2007
    Hey I haven't read the full chapter yet but I was wondering what specific things of the chapter you would like our feedback on?
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  • From Gta01 on March 22, 2007
    Great fic. It's great to see a focus on many different characters you have done great job of making not just a livly castle but also a world full of different characters. and I hope that you will continue to add people from the game. If I could sugest something? I would like to see a chapter focus on the Godwin's side of the war. Also I hope Lyon doesn't do anything with Roy. it just doesn't seem right
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  • From Crono on March 20, 2007
    I Like the part with Jeane she's just so unique and the illusion part was cool and the way she said it work is good also The only thing with Jeane is that later I would like for to show a side of herself that's just a little more human like even if it's something small. Good job with Roy also.
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  • From McDohl on March 20, 2007
    You did a great job of givng Lyon and Miakis very different personalties. And it help with giving a lot of humor to how they treat Roy. The Magic class part was great also. I do'nt what more to really say other that it's great to see this story updated
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  • From McDohl on March 20, 2007
    Holy crap it's great to see you back. Havn't had a chance to read all of the new chapter I like it so far. I'll leave a more in depht review later.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2007
    Hey I miss this story I hope you start writing soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 01, 2007
    I would like to see Roy with Lu
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 22, 2006
    how about Roy and Lorelai
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 17, 2006
    What happen to the update?
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 16, 2006
    Can't wait to see what Roy will do
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  • From ANON - franz on December 14, 2006
    Excellent story so far!Can we have some lactation in kisara's case and make her choose roy or prince or something along those lines.Maybe even introduce toma or the beavers to her XD
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