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Reviews for Suikoden V - Alpha Prince

By : Fire37
  • From ANON - NeoSeether on October 27, 2006
    There's only one thing that can be said for two Faroush Falena's both at the same point in time...

    TIME PARADOX'D

    Not sure if it applies to Viki, though.

    Gotta be an alternate future.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 26, 2006
    Man that bar scene is getting hott
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  • From ANON - McDohl on October 26, 2006
    Hey, he just did something that all great writers do he left us begging for more. And I'm sure he'll give a great deal more latter
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  • From ANON - Cam on October 26, 2006
    You ended it there?...I think I just died a little inside...
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  • From ANON - Viki is my dream woman on October 26, 2006
    Don't worry it's all good. the pages you did add are great I mean what's better than a inprov to striptease
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  • From ANON - Cam on October 25, 2006
    I knew you wouldn't hold out on me. (Hey I go by central time Woot)
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 25, 2006
    The last few chapters have seem a little short but are really great
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  • From ANON - McDohl on October 25, 2006
    A nice little chapter it help build the relationship of the Prince and Oulan that is growing very fast. I like that you gave some detail into what they did all day it was nice to see the Prince get a weapon in case her get into fight. I'm glad that a cookoff was mention there for a sec I thought that the Prince might see the future Resto. The lively taven scene was great and Anita passing was just to perfect
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  • From ANON - Cam on October 25, 2006
    Oh and feedback so you will post another tonight...

    Um, I liked the dialogue, and the enviroment you put the characters in. I think they should still be in the Tavern next chapter. Also I think another sex scene is in order, definitly more than a twosome too (maybe Princes Dawn rune affects the bar and it explodes in a giant orgy or something)
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  • From ANON - Viki is my Dream women on October 25, 2006
    I'm not sure but I think he might want a little more feed back than that.

    That was a nice discussion between Valeria and the others and nice to see Valeria loosen up a bit. I like that Viktor made it in the chapter and thats just like him to be shirtless with two women in is arms.
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  • From ANON - Cam on October 25, 2006
    More...I need more. It sustains me.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 25, 2006
    I also love the bond between The Prince and Oulan. I would love to see What Lyon would think about it if she ever found out.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 25, 2006
    holy crap I didn't think we you get a update till the weekend thanks. As for things I like, I must say like Anita that was funny. and I like that thr Prince was sort of recognize although I find it weird that paintings of the Prince & Arshtat would have been painted. Good job of giving life to the castle and it was good to see Nina pop up for a second time>
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  • From ANON - Will on October 25, 2006
    Good work one the 20:th chapter.. such great build up!
    My vote goes to a Leona... I would love to see
    her getting screwed at her own tavern.
    I really like the bond between Oulan and Faroush
    so I wouldn't mind seeing another scene with them.
    Else, how about having Lo-wen or Hanna join the party?
    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 25, 2006
    This story is very creative I hope you keep writing it for a long time.
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