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Reviews for A Birthday Gift

By : tree007
  • From Pat4pat on January 31, 2013
    Absolutely loved your story :)
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  • From ANON - Kevin on October 18, 2006
    Awsome. The story was amazing over all, but the thing I love most about this story is the fact that you depicted Vaati as a human as opposed to a giant floating eyeball. Keep up the good work, and you should definatly continue. It would be interesting to see what would happen after Zelda returned to Hyrule Castle from where she was taken(Vaati's Palace).
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  • From ANON - GarnetStar on August 06, 2006
    Wow! This was an awesome read. There are quite a few errors, I think... Things like Zelda's first line of dialogue where there should be a comma before Vaati's name, and here: '"Vaati," She said, with a hint of desperately in her voice' when desperation is probably a better word to use... But this world lacks good Vaati fic, I think, and good Vaati sex is even better. You said this was just the bare bones of it? I'd like to see it fleshed out a bit! More along this vein would be really, really appreciated from this corner. ^.~

    Regards,
    GarnetStar
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  • From ANON - aflrerd on July 27, 2006
    very good
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  • From ANON - Creamios Demos on July 26, 2006
    Creamios Demos Agio comprehende no?
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  • From on July 14, 2006
    This is pretty good...
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  • From ANON - elton john on July 12, 2006
    thia was really good! please continue
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  • From ANON - uh on July 10, 2006
    what?
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  • From ANON - gerald on July 10, 2006
    This was really good! You should continue!
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  • From ANON - Nny11 on July 08, 2006
    And the angels came down to praise Tree007. That's about how I describe this story. It was great, and I would love to see more.
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