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Reviews for Suikoden V: Relations

By : Sialeeds
  • From flame13th on October 09, 2006
    Man.. Could you do a Faroush and Cathari scene?
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  • From ANON - Viki is my dream woman on October 09, 2006
    Man it's great your back love the new chapter.Love the overall feeling of the castle. As for a Girlfriend for the Prince I would have to say Viki just because it would make for alot of funny things that could happen also that one guys idea of Lucretia was good also I like the Lun too, the problem is that castle is full of great choices so it's hard to pick which is best
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  • From ANON - McDohl on October 08, 2006
    Hey it’s very good to see you writing again. It has been a bad weekend so far I had a friend that died Saturday around 10.am so I’ve been down a bit all day However reading your new chapter help cheer me up a bit. I did like the chapter a lot but you are right something was off about it most likely because of the sex being 1st.. You continue to do a great job of capturing the life of a bustling castle the castle really feels full of life. You have also done a great job of capturing the personality of the all characters except for Luserina however I did like that change as I could see her having a wild side. I also have to say you do a great job of painting a picture I can clearly picture everything in my head. You are very descriptive with every detail that it helps the story a lot.

    I had an idea where you was going with Lyon waking up Sialeeds and I love it although I would loved to see a Prince, Sialeeds & Lyon threesome but I understand if incest isn’t your thing and I‘m sure some of the other writers could indulge me on this here’s looking at you Jeanes ,however you did do a great job in chapter 3 so I’m sure if you wanted to you could do something great . As for the Prince getting steady girlfriend an obvious chose you be Lyon because of her feelings for the Prince and they make cute couple plus they have known each other for years However in the game their true feelings for each other don’t come out completely till the in of the game. An other Girl that would be good would be Lun from the moment I saw her I thought she was a great match for the Prince I could even seen them starting an relationship by taking baths together in the river and maybe skinny-dipping while the Prince was using Raftfleet as his base . Also she has tough personality but that all just melts away when she is with the Prince also you did a great job in chapter 1 Plus I could see a lot of funny scenes coming from them being together especially If Lun was to catch the Prince with someone else just picture if she found him with her mom Hell it would be real funny if Subala somehow was involved too. A 3rd. Girl/woman that would be a good girlfriend would be Lucretia the Prince with an older woman is a good idea plus she’s hot and she has an exotic thing going for her plus she could teach the Prince a few things and I’m not talking scholar things. Plus I could see her teasing the Prince a bit and it would create more drama between Sialeeds and Lucetia I mean Sialeeds already hates Lucretia just think how she would feel about her sharing a bed with the Prince. Plus I could see Lurcretia allowing the Prince to still have flings with other women and as I get an feeling Lurcretia is bi from the game I could see them sharing women. So I would love either Lun or Lucretia as the Prince’s girlfriend also I would be ok with Loreleli.

    Anyway great to see you back and I’m sure I could comment on more but can’t think any more I just hope you keep them coming I’m a huge fan and as I said your story help cheer me up on this otherwise sad weekend. Thanks again.
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  • From ANON - Jeanes on October 08, 2006
    Another excellent chapter....

    You continue to bring out the character's personalities wonderfully and your continued efforts at bringing the castle alive once again leave mine in the dust. Just the little details like the beavers working on the bridge and your very nice description of the Destiny Tablet room...

    I'm not sure I can critically review your style as I find it to be very descriptive and visual as you desire. I have no problem forming images of the action in my mind.

    The interactions between Zwieg, Lorelei, Zerase, and the Prince feel spot on. I like the idea of a relationship between Lorelei and the Prince though I wonder is there not some sexual tension between Lorelei and Zweig?

    I'm especially looking forward to the Prince and Kisara...it'll be interesting to see the differences as I'm planning on doing that as well eventually in my story.

    I'm glad we're going to see more of Lyon, however I wish she was around the Prince more. It seems from the game that she would never have left his side though I can see how within the castle you'd let them be apart.

    Anyway...good job and I hope you update more frequently from now on.

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  • From flame13th on October 07, 2006
    Your stories are good! Stop keeping us waiting.. (/T_T)/

    I want moar chapters!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 20, 2006
    This is pretty awesome. You do indeed capture the ambience of the bustling castle extremely well. You also managed the character's personalities spot on and I love the well done sex scenes. My suggestion would be for Kyle and the Prince to make a bet over each other's seductive abilities. Kyle bets the Prince can't seduce Isabel while Faroush bets Kyle can't get Catharai. Anyway...Update soon! Thanks
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  • From ANON - McDohl on September 12, 2006
    Hey good to hear that you still plan to write more to this story. Btw a Chrono Cross story is a great idea
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  • From ANON - Firebrand on September 11, 2006
    Hello gang.

    My apologies for not updating in...what...a month and a half now? SCANDELOUS! I'm sorry! I got caught up with my original story, Paradise City, and then real life snuck up on me. (lousy reality. Who needs it?)

    Anyway, since my plan to write a Chrono Cross fanfic fell through, I WILL be making new chapters to this baby, but only once I find time to replay Suikoden V, to get back in mood. Sorry to make you wait so long.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 24, 2006
    hey man, I miss your writing. I hope you start up again soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 19, 2006
    Hey love you stuff. Would love to see a Prince & Lyon & Sialeeds threesome.
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  • From ANON - Ferid on August 18, 2006
    Yaaaaaaaaaaoiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kage on August 14, 2006
    Oi, how about a Subulba/Lun bit, with them insulting eachother as they go at it roughly. Each causing as much pain to the other as possible mentally and physically while they have one another. The one who stays conscious after all the pain, and all the orgasms, will go to the prince and brag. The bragging will turn the prince on and...you can possibly leave with him having to do himself.

    I could write something like that myself, but there's one detail...I want to actually wonder who will win the fuck fight, and wonder if the prince will have to do himself, possibly seen by Sialeeds or Lyon as he becomes close to his finish. Really would be interesting to read.
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  • From McDohl on August 14, 2006
    Good to hear your back
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  • From Sialeeds on August 14, 2006
    Hey, problem solves.
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  • From on August 14, 2006
    Hey, guys, this is Firebrand.

    I apologize for my lack of updates, but several issues:

    My computer broke. (Now I have new comp, yay)

    AFF won't let me log in as Firebrand, and I don't know why, but the "Forget Password" doesn't send to my email, at least, so I have no way of logging in, despite the fact I thought my password does work.

    So, the email addy is still the same, and I'm gonna be posting new stories under my "Rikeskell" alias for awhile, just so you know

    New Suikoden stuff soon, but check out my new Story, Paradise City, in the Originals Erotica section.
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