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Reviews for Prisoner

By : RayneFan
  • From beautifulblue on May 14, 2008
    Hey! I love this story so far you can't cut me off here... I have so many ideas flood my mind as to where you could go with this but it kills me you won't continue... Do I have to beg?
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  • From redsneaker on March 20, 2008
    this is brilliantly written! i love the close attention to detail, and clever words, i would love to read the next chapter :)
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  • From ForlornVampMistress on July 15, 2007
    You've got a good story here! I can't wait to read more! I'm a huge BloodRayne fan, and it's good to see someone writing a good fic about her. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Lukas on January 08, 2007
    YES! keep going! I loves it!
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  • From ANON - anon on December 24, 2006
    great story you've written but the suspense of waitng for the next part of the series is killing me. You MUST update this, it looks to be interesting for the experiments with Dr Bathory.
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  • From ANON - d.a.m on November 13, 2006
    Please update this excellent story, don't make me beg!
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  • From ANON - Rin on November 09, 2006
    Write more? Please? =)
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  • From ANON - d.a.m on October 21, 2006
    Seriously, this is a great story it would be a shame if it never updates, Bloodrayne is one of the hottest femme fatales in video games and this is a great concept.
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  • From ANON - d.a.m on October 10, 2006
    Please, please, update this unusual story, it has great potential.
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  • From ANON - DAM on September 29, 2006
    This is a piece of fanfiction that must be continued, is Rayne gonna get raped or not?
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  • From ANON - Meep on September 29, 2006
    this is soooo awsome, keep writing, I love it!
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  • From ANON - CrazyIvan(notloggedin) on September 28, 2006
    Well this is interesting, I look foreward to the next chapter.
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  • From RayneFan on August 01, 2006
    Sorry for the lateness between chapters.

    I like reviewers who tell me where I screw up (the rope is tying her legs together. Remember, she kicks hard).

    Now, as far as becoming a whimpering slut or getting out of the situation, well, while I don't know where I am going completely I do have several stages planned out for the next three chapters. Just wait and see.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 22, 2006
    Interesting opening, if a bit short. So far, there's not really a whole lot to go on to make any kind of statement about this fic. It's decently written I suppose, yet somehow it lacks true impact somehow. More chapters should hopefully change that. There's also insufficient description of just how Rayne is suspended with rope. She *is* suspended with rope, right? And if she is suspended by rope, why would there be a need for additional rope to keep her legs from moving? You'd think the whole '(presumably) suspended in the air' thing would've taken care of that in the first place.

    Also, I think the previous two reviewers are jumping to conclusions here, if based solely of this rather sparse first chapter. After all, while there was some torture, Rayne is far from being a 'broken and whimpering slut'. Chances are, she'll be able to turn the tables on the good doctor. Especially if the only thing keeping her is some rope.
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  • From ANON - jubilee on July 20, 2006
    Please write more soon! Seeing someone as hot and powerfull as Rayne tortured and broken into a whimpering slut is a series i'd love to read. Fantasy's like this are always the best to me, I guess because we'd never do it ourselves. Looking forward to more !
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