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Reviews for Punishing the Superior

By : Nurexla
  • From ANON - anon on March 18, 2014
    Hey I liked how in depth you were with Xemnas' pov. It almost sounded like what Xemnas would say or at least how say things in very descriptive way. Also the last part, very funny, I was wondering when you would get to Xigbar. I hope the story will focus less on Xemnas' relationship with Saix and more on his new love relationship with Xigbar. Whether you plan to put Xigbar on top or bottom is fine with me. (Though I would prefer if you had Xigbar as the uke. X3)
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  • From yaoihentai69 on June 25, 2009
    I must say, this is nicely written. A bit different from what I normally see, and I like it. ^.^ You're doing a great job; I can't wait to read more. Keep it up!
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  • From Hotnspicyfox on December 02, 2007
    Somehow I get the feeling I'm going to look over my shoulder and see Xemnas. This was superb, spot on characterization of the man, from the language to his fondness for his own body. And the speaking to Kingdom Hearts. Just 10/10 material.
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  • From Kuronue on September 15, 2007
    >.> Damn that was hot. XD; Especially amazingly done for first person... It's such a hard perspective to write in, and especially, for me at least, to keep in proper character doing. When I end up in first person, I always want to write with my own personality... Anyway
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  • From QueenAdreena on September 02, 2007
    Really liked this. It's very hard to write Xemnas in character, but I think you did it perfectly. Lovely description and flow, I'll look out for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Dragon Kirby on January 13, 2007
    Awwwww XP
    The only complaint I have is that it stopped just when Xemnas found out it was Xigbar XD It was gettin' good
    other than that, LOVELY piece of work ^.^
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  • From ANON - xXLxDXx on January 07, 2007
    You have to update! The suspense is killing me!
    Please? Please?
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  • From ANON - And Interested Reader on September 04, 2006
    This story sounds pretty good. So, this is sort of like a journal Xemnas is writing? Pretty cool, and I must say, you use excellent detail and vocabulary. I hope you get the feedback you need and you update soon. I'll be waiting.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 29, 2006
    hey, uhh...are you still writing this? because i reaalllllyyy really really want to see where it's going (you're, like, the only person to ever do a xig/xemnas fic. ever). and it's really good so far, and just...yeah. i hope you continue. :p
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2006
    AHHH THAT'S SO TWISTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD XD XD I can't really think of anythng constructively helpful to say about it, it was that good. Seriously. I want more!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2006
    really awesome i love it nd like dark light said u have no reason to be nervous!!! your writings really good!!! anyway continue please i'm really looking foward to reading more. :)
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  • From ANON - anonymous on August 03, 2006
    This was really excellently written. The attraction (I would call it -feelings-, but those are reserved for beings with hearts, right? ;p ) Xemnas has for Saix is palpable. I could -feel- it. Looking forward to more of this!
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  • From ANON - heartlessx3nobody on August 03, 2006
    AWWWW I really love it, and I love how you wrote it, but the little notes to Saix randomly thrown in were my favorite part!!! That was so sweet! I really really hate Xemnas, but this story had me able to stand him so I hope that you update soon?! x3 Please!! Aww it was so cute, and sounded like everything else Xemnas wrote so it was great x3
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  • From ANON - A on August 02, 2006
    AGSHJDHJK!!!~! i can't believe it ended there!! lmao, srsly- i was so into it and then XIGBAR and i was about to have a mini joygasm and then BAM, that's it. D: God do I need you to continue this. This is the first time that I have EVER seen xemnas in a ukeish position and I LOVE IT. I'm a sucker for those.. role reversal type of things. Anyhow, this was written really well and I'm DYING TO READ MORE OF IT!!! *implodes* 8D Thank you for the wonderful fic!
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  • From ANON - Crimson_Enigma on August 02, 2006
    Damn, are you sure that you're not actually Xemnas or something? Your characterization of him is so awesome, I've definitely gotta say. XD Amazingly written story thus far and I look forward to more chapters! :3
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