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Reviews for Lusty Liaisons

By : Crya2Evans
  • From ANON - Dragon Kirby on January 13, 2007
    There were times that I got REALLY anrgy towards Sephiroth treating Xehanort the way that he did, especially at the end when he told him to leave. That was just a bitch.

    However, the whole story was wonderfully written -nodnod-
    *gives you the internet*
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 06, 2006
    that was wonderfulllllll. :D i loved the tension between them, as well as the snarkiness and that whole 'you're nothing more than a good fuck to me' thing going on as well. i'd say you did them both fair justice, considering neither really seem the type to have a whole.. lovey-dovey relationship. not together, at least. i love the way you portrayed it. and the violence -- 8D!! -- God, i was in HEAVEN reading that, lmao. two dominant men going at it together- one's gonna have to go down (in more ways than one.. ahaha).

    anyway... this was reaaaalllllyyyy REALLY awesome :D , and the mentionings of all the other characters was fun, too. you did a great job with this- and an EXCELLENT job at keeping them both in character!! wonderfully in character, i might add. i genuinely enjoyed every second of this. :D

    ... that part where sephiroth was fucking xehanort while pulling him by the hair..... so fucking hot.

    ahhhh hdsfijkshfklS dcdas, jeez. :p oh, and you accidentally wrote "Demyx" instead of "Meyd" somewhere around the middle of the fic.. I think. Not that it even matters or is distracting to the story or anything, lol, but, if you're a perfectionist like I am, I figured it might bug you.

    awesome job for your first PWP!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 06, 2006
    OMFG that was hot! *fans self*
    You did a lovely job with both characters and the scenario~ and I loved how Even and Meyd were in it...well mentioned.
    You should totally do more with the apprentices ...er...if you want to.
    Anyways good job and hot lemon!
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  • From ANON - Death on August 06, 2006
    I don't know why no one's reviewed this! It's basically one of the best smutfics I've ever read in the history of ever! I'm not too familiar with the KH universe, but this fic made that problem go away really well! It was delicious! My glasses are foggy! Very well-written, I must say.
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