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Reviews for Organization 101

By : RangerPrincess
  • From ANON - Udyjay on September 01, 2006
    ;w;!!! HOMAIGAWD!! I absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVE this! XD *dies* I giggled and squealed so many times. xD I would have reviewed the other chapters, but my computer was being ghay. D: But yeah. I love how you explain Axel and Roxas's little moments! ;w; Your secks scenes were secksy. Tee hee. x3 sdjkfasdfjkls. Update! ;A; I'm keeping an eye on this.
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  • From ANON - nastyscarythingunderthebed on August 26, 2006
    hmmmm....this is cute so far. I like it ^^ Please udate it soon, yes?
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  • From ANON - Cave on August 24, 2006
    I'm enjoying the story so far. You have some really fun ideas and it's enjoyable to read. Good job with the smexy scenes so far!

    You have to work on grammar though. Before putting the new chapter up, just run it through spellcheck and re-read it(or have a proofreader do it for you). Sometimes there's words missing. Try and make sure you use the same verb tense throughout.

    But it's a good story! Can't wait for the next update. :D
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  • From ANON - kyuubi lover on August 24, 2006
    YAY XD plz more more more more more more
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  • From ANON - KyRB on August 23, 2006
    PLEASE keep writing! You write the most awesome fics I've ever read! The whole love/hate relationship is great, especially with teasing. I have a suggestion: Instead of going to have a cold shower, Axel goes to masturbate. And in the middle of it, Roxas walks in. Have fun with that idea.
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  • From ANON - Okita (I'm not logged on) on August 22, 2006
    My dick hurts worse!!! That's the greatest line EVAR! Keep up the great work, I can't wait for your next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anony-mouse on August 21, 2006
    Great AkuRoku smex! *melts from smexy* And you aren't the only one who starts school early. In my county, we started July 31.
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  • From ANON - Lumiere on August 15, 2006
    Man, that was hawt! ^_^ I'm addicted to this story. Please update soon. I wanna see Axel beg for a change. *evil grin*
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  • From ANON - Demoo on August 13, 2006

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  • From ANON - Okita on August 11, 2006
    w00t!!!! Awesome chapter, I love the "I'm an evil bastard. Thank you." You're so kewel. Great lime!! Lovens the lime, so keep the chapters coming, I can't wait fo rthe next one ^-^
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  • From ANON - Crimson_Enigma on August 11, 2006
    That...was...hot. @__@ Gotta say that I'm a tad disappointed that they didn't go further, but then again, I don't think it would've fit the story if they had at this point in time so it's all okies! :3 I look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - oliversgurl on August 09, 2006
    *Falls out of chair*

    Oh my god...I cannot wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - louis on August 08, 2006
    baby fat lol.....
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  • From ANON - Okita on August 07, 2006
    w00t!! Keep going with the chapters, I love this one, love in in the face with much sexiness ... ::ehem:: anywho ::whistles:: Great chapter, especially the part where "and then he just walked out, like he hadn't just given me a hard on..." I love it!! Axel's such a cruel bastard, but I love him anyhow. Keep up the great work, I look forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on August 07, 2006
    Well this does sound fun. I can't wait for more!
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