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Reviews for Sunset

By : SilverEmeraldDAS
  • From ANON - D.C on December 20, 2006
    great job with this story. I love all the detail. you have a talent.
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  • From ANON - bunnybubble on November 04, 2006
    awww
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  • From ANON - CannibalistiKitty on September 28, 2006
    That was very nice! It's quite sweet, actually. Thank you for sharing this with us!
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  • From ANON - Stephanie on September 09, 2006
    Wow... just wow.... I don't think I have ever read anything that good in my entire life. Your style and detail is breathtaking! You are an amazing writer and I so hope you make another story in Sora's POV.

    I am in complete awe.
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  • From NecroQueen on September 09, 2006
    I'm almost too shocked for words. I don't regulary read the Riku/Sora pairings because there are way too many and most are horrible, but I'm glad I stumbled upon this one. I love the fact that you made Sora's first reaction realistic instead of him just accepting Riku like most writers do.

    Also, I can't help but notice the wonderful writing skill you have. You were only 16 when you wrote this?! When I was 16, I wouldn't have even dreamed of being able to write like that. Hell, I can't even write that well now.

    Anyway, I'm not sure about anoter chapter. Although I love your writing and plot, the story goes very well with that ending. If you could find a way to tie in another chapter, without dragging the story, that would be great! Either way, I respect you immensely for your unquestionable talent.
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  • From ANON - Rai Kun on September 06, 2006
    Oh wow, that was... excellent... beautiful... so, SO romantic. The amount of detail and emotion put into this is astounding- it would be a waste of your excellent writing skills to not continue this fic. I implore you to write another chapter!
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  • From ANON - Fluffy. on September 03, 2006
    That was amazing. ;___;
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  • From ANON - Pepp on September 01, 2006
    lol I meant Sora, in the last review!

    lol Anyways, had to review again!!!! The game made my yaoi-mind ring so bad! Even if it was just me going "THEY"RE MEANT TO BE!!" or "SCREW SORA, RIKU! HURRY BEFORE KIARI GETS IT IN //HER// HEAD TO!!" lol

    I cant say enough times how this just grabs my heart and runs wildly away with it... lol Tho, to be truthful, I ain't chasing after it to get my heart back... lol And Sora was such a cute darling, I wanna hug 'em to death... lol But Riku would kill me, no? ^^lol Then he'd hug him and go off to make wild love to him! ^^ *drools* [daydream about the two starts to play in her mind] ^^ Well, enough of my rambling! Great story, again! (or did I not say it the last time? hmmm.... lol)
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  • From ANON - Pepp on September 01, 2006
    Aww!!! Its so sweet! And cute! And sad (for a while)!

    And best of all, it was HOTT!!!!!! ^^lol

    I really lilked it! It was the perfect balance of plot [sort of, lol] and smex! *purrs* And the smex was great! lol I really love Riku/Sora pairings, and this one is so adorable, its almost too much for my heart!

    In my opinion, you nailed the characters perfectly, though I haven't played Kingdom Hearts in such a long time, now... lol If only they had made it Riku/Spra in the game! Don't they hint at it so much it makes its yaoi fans go crazy tho? lol
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  • From ANON - witchofevilmagic on August 30, 2006
    If this was ever a manga or an anime, or some pictoral represenatation of this fic, I would buy a trillion copies of each and watch (or read) them over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over again, til either my eyes bleed from the strain of watching (or reading) them so long, or I die for lack of food and sleep because I've been watching (or reading) the manga (or anime).
    But it's okay! At least I'll die happy! Yay! :)
    I love your fic so much!

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  • From ANON - AmusedReader on August 30, 2006
    That was the most amusing fanfic I have read in a long time. Riku's lines were just...priceless. I never knew that Riku was such a poet-- really, I cracked up during this whole story. Good job. The smut was well written, but the dialouge was just off.
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  • From ANON - Bandicoot_Man on August 30, 2006
    I can't....I can't...words cannot devise how wonderful this story was. They just can't. I've read smut. I've read straight smut. I've read plotline smut. I've read yaoi smut. I've read Kairi-bashers. I know all the problems that plague fanfic artist. This story had none. Japanese was used eloquently, instead of being randomly shove in. Aside from one at the beginning of the smut, paragraphs were perfectly spaced. Sexual tension= PERFECT! I give! I surrender! I have found the messiah! *jumps on table* DO you HEAR, fangirls?! It is the sound of a WRITER!! *rabid fangirls scatter* Well, you have my major kudos. I do hope you have the grace to take a look at some of my writing over at FFN under my review name here. I just...wow........

    Score: 405/10
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  • From ANON - Miaka on August 29, 2006
    Mmkay. Good story, but...you should take out the Japanese. It's used incredibly incorrectly.

    And I can't imagine Riku ever calling Sora his angel.

    But otherwise, great fic, great smut.
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  • From ANON - Nekohime on August 29, 2006
    Goddamn it.. that was beautiful...

    At this point I am rendered speechless.. Thats how I know when a fic is really good.. when a mindless blabberer like me is actually at a loss for words. I could blame it on the late hor all I like.. but it's really cause I'm sitting in awe still reliving the favored moments of the story..

    How sweet how very very swee this was... a true pleasure to read....

    I'll probably leave another review thats less disjointed...

    Hopefully it won't be after I rereading of the story.. Else I'll be mushbrained again..

    Neko's Rate 5 Stars! (Can you say... Awesome?)

    Rating... just do it ...
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 29, 2006
    i do like this story. it's well-written.
    the only thing i frown on is the usage of japanese words in an otherwise fully english text, but that's a pet peeve of mine to start with. :)
    you did a great job with this. keep it up.
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