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Reviews for Moth To The Flame

By : xFlurryxOfxFlamesx
  • From z32 on May 08, 2007
    Aww dang! your story made me cry!! ;---; ...'tis was beautiful!! ToT you have great talent, and I like how you pictured Axel, Roxas and Demyx's characters, really well done!
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  • From ANON - alicia on October 02, 2006
    so sad, but so beautiful. you are a wonderful writer. and it's a shame that no one has taken the time to review you. i'm kinda suprised that this is only your second fic? but you did so well. really wonderful. and i love the Axel Roxas pairing to pieces. so thanks for writing a fic about them.
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  • From ANON - MaddiChan on September 30, 2006
    I'm depressed. Thanks for making me like, sob cause I really wanted a happy ending. DAMN YOU AND YOUR GOOD BUT DEPRESSING STORY!! ::sobs::
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  • From ANON - white sugar on September 25, 2006
    Waaaahh.. This story makes me cry.. Please update!!!
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  • From ANON - MaddiChan on September 22, 2006
    ::sobs:: Man I want Roxas and Axel together! That chapter was depressing! But your story is badass, you should update more often.
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  • From ANON - MaddiChan on September 13, 2006
    Poor Axel. Bring Roxas back! :Sobs:
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  • From ANON - MaddiChan on September 11, 2006
    I got a little misty eyed, since you're slightly following the game. I felt so bad for Axel in the game but now I feel worse for him. Esp. since we know that Roxas did forget. ::sobs:: If you carry this story on, even to when Roxas merges with Sora, please--please make Sora remember or something. I hate unhappy endings, lmao.
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  • From ANON - FlurryxOfxFlames on September 11, 2006
    Re: elizabeth

    Haha yea I noticed that as well. :P I'm working on it. ^_^ Thanx 4 your review
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  • From ANON - elizabeth on September 11, 2006
    I love this chapter :) Smuttastic. Yay~ The only thing I'd mention is that you go back and forth between past and present tense. I do it too XD Just be careful! Great story, please keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Hiyotoko on September 09, 2006
    OOoooh great story! Must continue! Seriously. You HAVE too. ^o^
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  • From NecroQueen on September 06, 2006
    I really like this story so far. Keep up the good work and update soon, please! By the way, I like the screen name too. Axel fan much?
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  • From ANON - maria on September 02, 2006
    hey this story is getting interesting. keep it up. update next chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - queenadreena on September 02, 2006
    This is quite entertaining. Good characterisations and use of words.
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  • From ANON - Okita (I'm not logged on) on August 31, 2006
    Wow, you have a really good start here. I love your attention to emotion and use of detail, wonderful job. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to find out what happens next ^-^
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