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Reviews for Horny Soldier

By : PandoraMasters
  • From ANON - R. Dennis on January 05, 2007
    hehe sorry for that. It's all good. ;0
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  • From ANON - victoria on January 03, 2007
    i was wondering what all the fuss was about and i'm glad I read this.
    A short read but very good, i mean good in a way that it's so compacted with so much goodness that it leaves me wondering why you cut it short. ;_;
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  • From ANON - Word of Mouth on January 02, 2007
    I think this is just nit picking here, no? The story was well written and it seems that most, if not all, the readers enjoyed it. So what if the author used 'crass' terms? It's her choice and her right to use whatever words she wants.

    To the author, I say good on ya, and keep doing what you're doing! I love this story and wouldn't mind more of it. =)
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  • From ANON - Lady Ellora on January 02, 2007
    Great job but too short. It's so abrubt. it needs more.

    I agree with Jackal Mann's review. It just seems too short but well done though. Well done indeed. *salivates*
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  • From ANON - William B. on January 02, 2007
    I agree with R. Dennis. If the author wants to continue writing sex plots and sexual themes in the future and to be the better writer and more diverse, she should extend her vocabulary with more anatomical words. She's already a very good writer so therefore, she should quit being so consistent with these crass and smutty words and pursue a world of sexual language out there that will suit even the most jaded reader out there.
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  • From ANON - anon on January 02, 2007
    (rolls eyes)
    move on. move on.... I think the author and all the other authors can write pussy and clit and vagina, and cunt and all kinds of open orafices in their fics whenever they feel like it.
    or go to wikipedia and type in "vagina" and use of slang words for it to create an atmosphere of fucking like this:

    "Krauser moved with deliberate ease, inching his huge penis inside the woman's large orafice, wet and open. He screamed with pleasure as he slammed the rest of his monumental penis inside the woman, begging for her release as her vagina juices closed in with a tight grip hold"

    There. The use of Penis and Vagina is well used here. To replace the cock and pussy.
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  • From ANON - Sugar Plum on January 02, 2007
    MMmmokay, don't use pussy and clit next time. :P
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  • From ANON - Ytel on January 02, 2007
    Your profile says you are female, Pandora but R. Dennis doesn't like it that you wrote pussy and clit in this fic.
    And is condenscending and is angry that you get reviews for this fic by saying you need to learn female anatomy and go and use your slang words better. *puts nose in the air like a snooty person who is bent on hurting others as a new years resolution*
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  • From ANON - Reeva on January 02, 2007
    I agree with R. Dennis. Writing "pussy" isn't always nice. That's just our opinion and being nit picky.
    Story was fine though, a nice read I guess.
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  • From ANON - R. Dennis on December 29, 2006
    You really need to learn your female anatomy. Or maybe just double check your use of slang terms.
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  • From ANON - horny on December 26, 2006
    that was an incredible read, although honestly too short and abrupt, but still an incredible read.
    I agree with all the reviewers above. Great job
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  • From ANON - Deviant Marauder on December 20, 2006
    This is very awesome, especially the way you executed this pair. I take it you're the first to write it? It's well done.
    Rawwwr!
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  • From ANON - James on October 04, 2006
    Thought I'd go ahead and read your fics as well. I adored how you drove straight into the action and dropped all pleasantries. I was entertained right to the very (sudden) end.

    Don't get me wrong. The ending is actually perfect. Not only is it a set up for future chapters, but it left me with a feeling that I have to have more.

    ~James
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  • From ANON - smutluvers on October 04, 2006
    this is awesome. You write so good and flowing but like the others this needs closure!
    You will continue yes?
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  • From ANON - more smut? on October 04, 2006
    Detailed, fast paced, and totally hot. You cut off so suddenly though. It left me wanting more.
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