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Reviews for Horny Soldier

By : PandoraMasters
  • From ANON - EnriqueVasquez on September 28, 2006
    VERONICA!!!! update this baby will you? It's SO damn HAWT!
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  • From ANON - Loren on September 13, 2006
    sorry I sound like a weird reviewer huh?
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  • From ANON - Loren on September 13, 2006
    I have read more than a few of this authors works. Their stories are well written and you can tell thought was put into what was wrote about. I also have the benefit of being friends with the author and being able to read and review their work is a pleasure. The stories are a bit outside of my normal reading but I have never read one of their stories that I have not liked.
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  • From ANON - The Tyrant Hamster on September 08, 2006
    First of all, the name is about as fitting as you can get, hehe XD. As for the story itself, it was your usual, lust-infused quality work, I think Ashley just got a large dose of every girl who ever had a rape or submission fantasy's deeper desires, and a fair few guys too. You made it really quite believable, the way he was stimulating her body and getting her excited even if it was rape, which isn't easy to write without seeming false or too brutal, but you did it well here 8). It was very hot in a extreme, rough way, which was the aim no doubt, so, in that respect, well done, ace story ^^!
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  • From ANON - BJ on September 03, 2006
    Veronica!! How come he didn't spill his load into her? You know he was going to, why'd you cut it short there? Seal the deal! Otherwise, that was hot hot hot!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 02, 2006
    thats the word I wanted to use for your writing. Gritty. Down right gritty and effective.
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  • From ANON - DarkCamala on September 02, 2006
    Oh yeah....You know K/A is zeh hawt. There needs to be more smut with them. Your writing is totally erotic, gritty and arousing.
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  • From ANON - Jackal Man on September 02, 2006
    I'm actually putting a Krauser/Ashley scene into RE4 Uncut. I hadn't seen the pairing on here yet, so I thought I was going to be the first (heh, yeah right, with the rate I'm going I may never get there). Looks like you beat me to it, grrr.

    As for the story itself... I thought you did a decent job depicting the emotions of Ashley roughly. You weren't intending it to be a deep, character driven story from what I gather, but in general, it was solid in that regard.

    However, your story just *ends*. It cuts off in the middle of the scene, and I have to admit, if you'd kept it going and continued writing another half, or at least some more sequences and paragraphs, it would've been much better in my book.

    Overall, nice pairing, decent portrayal, but too short and over too soon. Could've done to have more vivid descriptions and more drawn out actions, too.

    -jm
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  • From ANON - Iesha on September 01, 2006
    Loved this story right from the very first sentence - you went straight to the action! Very hot!
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  • From ANON - mysteryman on September 01, 2006
    Hehe, very nice. Not read a semi-rape story in a long time. Who says that stories need plots to be enjoyable? :P

    Very hot. ^_^
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  • From ANON - tboy on September 01, 2006
    *whew*

    Excuse me...I have to run to the bathroom...

    ;)

    wow.
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  • From ANON - Carlos on August 31, 2006
    loved it as always
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