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By : maiafay376
  • From ANON - Mel on September 21, 2006
    This was one creepy chapter. I never really cared for dolls... they were okay, but damn, I'll never be able to look at Ragedy Anne the same way anymore. O_O

    I really enjoyed the interaction between Melanie and Daniel. I love the girl's boldness... yet her shy reactions each time. She's very endearing... and Daniel's reaction is as well. Would really love to see something between them... we'll see. *laughs*

    Despite the fact that I hate Andre's guts, I would seriously do the same thing if I saw Daniel standing outside my door... no matter who it was I would've been pissed. But damn Walter for setting that up... the kiss over the shoulder was totally cool. ^_^

    This was definitely an intense chapter... the history, that friggin' doll, Walter's games and Melanie's apartment. Loved it all. Thanks again for sharing with us another wonderful read... and so fast!!
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  • From ANON - lady_jewel on September 21, 2006
    Ahhhh... So good and creepy. Let me just say that the game scares the crap out of me, and you do a great job of bringing that to this story. I really don't want to be Daniel right now.

    The whole doll thing... Urgh!

    Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Chaosdreamer on September 21, 2006
    Oh!

    Creey and dark.

    That doll is really scary. *shivers*

    So Daniel is ready to fight. Go Daniel!

    Uh oh. I think Walter is planning something for the occupants of room 207. I find myself torn between wanting to adore Walter and his evil self, or wanting to loath him and run far, far away. *laughs*

    I like how you tied in the history of Silent Hill. Pieces are beginning to fall together, even if, for me, they're coming together pretty slowly.

    Great job and keep up the excellent work!

    -Chaosdreamer
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  • From ANON - sephykoi on September 21, 2006
    OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH NOOOOOOOOOO~

    O.O;;;

    That scared the living CRAP/DAYLIGHTS outta me! I HATE dolls in horror stuff!!!! O_O;;;; I'll have to review later. I feel uneasy. I'll review on your LJ. It makes me feel safer.

    >_> _> *looks around the room, contemplating if how fast she can get to her bedroom from the computer room*

    ....

    ~the seph
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  • From ANON - Bitter Wormwood on September 21, 2006
    Brilliant, as usual...Daniel is really growing on me. I loved Walter blowing kisses over his shoulder; for some reason I found this very sexy.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2006
    I've never played any of the Silent Hill games, but I had to read this since you're the one writing it. You have this amazing talent of creating such vivid imagery, and I have no problem visualizing everything even though I've no knowledge of this fandom. Have you ever considered writing professionally? I really think you have the talent for it.
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  • From Chaosdreamer on September 15, 2006
    Ahhhh!!!

    It's getting TOO good!

    I'm getting excited. Daniel seems to be getting closer and closer. And Henry was mentioned.

    I can't wait. Keep up the fantastic work.

    -dreamerchaos
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  • From ANON - Red on September 15, 2006
    Oh my God! How heart wrenching (the last bit of the chapter)! It was wonderful, though. A little more depth and angst from Daniel. I like that a lot. Poor, poor guy... you just get this urge to hug him and then slap him silly to convince him to MOVE OUT of that apartment. Jesus, he is crazy to stay there. O_O

    The plunger part was hilarious!! Definitely did not expect that! ^_^

    Great chapter, lovie. The tension, the anger... so many emotions running rampant. So delicious! Thanks for sharing!

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  • From ANON - sephykoi on September 15, 2006
    For Chp. 4:

    WOOOOOO! First off... I love Frank even more! He's a very interesting character, and love how you portray him! I kinda felt sorry, but also irritated that Daniel put his foot in his mouth. Poor Frank... Rather interested about Henry now, though. Hehehe...

    Andre. Can I kick him? In the balls? :D That would just make my day! And I love the way Frank made everything stop by just being there! Hehe! :3

    ... Little Walter's appearing now O_O Damn, it must be hard on Daniel--people think he's hallucinating due to drugs. x.x;; Gladys is... both endearing and annoying ^^; She seems rather interesting, like... why is she such a recluse? But annoying 'cause she *does* sound rude from time to time. >_
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  • From ANON - lady_jewel on September 15, 2006
    Wow... That's really all I can say at the moment. Wow.

    So creepily good. I'm so glad that I keep checking to see if you've updated. Now I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - ix-tab on September 12, 2006
    Wheee! More fic for me to read over and over! :)

    I really like this chapter, a lot. Wlater is such menacing, smooth character with a lot of darkness behind him. And even though I'm not normally as interested in female OC's (Yes, I am a slashaholic) I really liked 'Stutter Bunny'. She's super cute.

    Keep it up! I'll be awaiting the next installment with eagerness.
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  • From ANON - Winterinmyheart (notloggedin) on September 12, 2006
    Beautiful, just as most of your work. Can't wait to read more. =)
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  • From ANON - Bedsidespider on September 11, 2006
    Incredible, you truely are a talented writer, I'm really looking foreward to reading more of this. Please update soon I cant hardly wait to see what happens next =}
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  • From ANON - Fiestyred on September 10, 2006
    So far, Ch. 3 is my favorite. The creepiness has really begun... lovely. :) The way Daniel handles everything is very realistic. Well, considering that's how I can imagine someone reacting to what he sees/experiences. I really like the scene when Walter is standing in front of Daniel's door, and then what proceeds after that. Very, very creepy and I love the imagery you orchestrated into that bit. Good job. :)

    Lucia... yeah, I want to slap her. But in a way I really pity her. Hmm.

    I like Melanie. It's interesting that you are making her a strong-willed person, yet she doesn't really convey it. I like that... I like how Lucia is really the one that is not strong.

    Good job with this chapter. I definitely can't wait to find out what happens next. I love the interaction between Walter and Daniel of course. ;)

    Thanks for sharing another great chapter/piece of work! Until next time. *waves*

    Mel
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  • From ANON - Justme on September 10, 2006
    So good.
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