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Reviews for Desperate Reflections

By : Crya2Evans
  • From ANON - Axel'sworhsiper! on March 28, 2007
    PLEASE! you MUST update this soon, or I'll die ;o;! I love Vincent and Axel! and this is too perfect! a great writer! got yourself a new fan, so please continue it
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  • From ANON - Tawni Phoenix on March 25, 2007
    I've been having trouble finding quality KH fanfics that use the same universe as the actual game. This fanfic has been a real treat to read, mainly because I absolutely love Axel and and thrilled to see version of "what happens next". Keep up the great work! Can't wait for more of it!
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  • From z32 on March 22, 2007
    AWESOMENESS!!!me hearts it xD, though i just read chapter 3 xD
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  • From ANON - Redbowlingball on March 21, 2007
    Me again! This was another awesome chapter. Want proof? You're converting me to Axel/Vincent >.< That's not something I would have considered before, that's for sure. But really, the whole thing is so good you could probably feed me Cloud/Red XII and I'd eat it up happily X3 Ok, maybe that's a bit of a stretch, but you get the idea!

    Loved the inclusion of Quistis. I thought it was a nice touch that she didn't make it through the Cleansing. And I also thought Vincent's box of mementos was lovely and very sad. Hmm, what else did I paticulary like? Oh yes, the Axel/Roxas flashbacks. I love how you're taking the time to flesh out what they had. It makes me pine for them, it really does :( I hope for more of them!

    Hmm, I'm thinking of fanart-ing Vincent in his apron, possibly threatening Axel with a spatula. Totally can't get the image out of my mind.

    Update soon! *Encourages with gestures*
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  • From ANON - Samma on March 10, 2007
    If you still need a beta for this, I'm game. Can't say how good I'll be, but what the heck, I'll give it a shot.
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  • From ANON - Scribblesama on March 05, 2007
    Vexen's eyes are actually green. Poor Quistis. I was actually hoping it was Larxene when you started to describe her, but then realized it couldn't have been. Are you going to include any more of Organization XIII? It was a great chapter. Hope to see more of Roxas next one though, ne? Oh! And I don't know if you've seen this yet, but this is the trailer to the Kingdom Hearts II: Final Mix and the PS2 Version of Chain of Memories: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lgjpwqJ6TEU Enjoy!
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  • From ANON - Liebchen on February 25, 2007
    *O* *just drools for a while* This is really awesome. Vincent and Axel are two of my favorite characters, along with some other and seeing them together like this makes me happy. My inner-fangirl will squeal when a new chapter gets on from now on. ^__^ The Xemnas/Saix part made me happy too~... *drools some more* Now, only Zex and Dem need to really show up together and then I'll be one happy fangirl.

    And poor Quistie. I hoped it was Selphie for a sec but Quistis works just as well ^.^
    Your stories often make me think about... life, you know? XD; Sorry if that sounded random but they really do. It's fictions like these that make my days.

    Oh and Vexens eyes are green, like poison. I just thought that you'd like to know.^^

    Keep up the good work please!^^
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  • From ANON - Saffron on February 24, 2007
    It has been so long since I have read a good piece of fanfic!!!!!! If I didn't know better, I would swear that Gaia's Grotto is actually real:D That's just how good your writing is!!! lol Anywho, I really like how you have set all the characters, plot and I especially love the little chapters where we get to see into the other characters' thinking process!!!! Keep up the awesome work, I shall eagerly be waiting for your next update...

    Ciao for Now (^_~)
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  • From Azshalade on February 24, 2007
    Lets have some VincentxAxel lovin! lol
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  • From Azshalade on February 23, 2007
    I loved it! I really can't wait long for more, I hope you have more written! I'm sorry you didn't get many responses but it doesn't mean no one likes it. Keep going please.
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  • From ANON - Guzophela on February 23, 2007
    Probably one of the best KH stories I've read in a long while. Unlike most, the plot is engaging and is actually moving somewhere. Usually I'm way too lazy to review, or even keep up to date with fanfiction, but I've stayed up until 3:18am (which is huge for me) but this story deserves it. As an Axel fan, I'm particularly thrilled with the character development. OOC? Don't think so. Maybe it's the lack of sleep speaking, but given the situations he's in, I think Axel would respond in the same ways. And I love the thought of Vincent in an apron. Over all, I've been looking for good writing and found it (seriously, I would totally buy this as a novel. and not like, a 10 cent book from goodwill or a 3 dollar book from ebay. I'm talking full-price-15-dollars-band-new-in-the-stores novel.), so it goes without saying that I'm pretty psyched about it.
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  • From Cave on February 22, 2007
    The story continues to go really well! yeahy~ Quistis was a nice addition, but I'm sad she didn't survive the cleansing. D: aww.

    The two weeks thing? I'm going to say 'definitely not'. XD CoM takes place... maybe at the least a few days and the most a few months after the first game. Then the 2nd game is at least a year later (since Sora is 14 in the first game and 16 in the second). Just FYI. O:

    You go! I get excited every time I see this story updated. ^^
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  • From ANON - Samma on February 02, 2007
    Okay, you've done it again! I'm hooked, and on a fandom I generally don't read. A mysteriously corrupted Utopia, a reluctant savior, a dissatisfied nonentitiy, and! plausible explanations for it all.

    I promise I'll leave a better review after coffe is obtained. It's too early in the afternoon for a third-shifter to be thinking in polysyllables. But needless to say, I'm addicted again.
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  • From ANON - redbowlingball on January 29, 2007
    So much love for this story. Just so much love.

    The story is very original and moving, the characters are accurate and likable, and the whole thing just flows perfectly :)

    And just to throw in my opinion on the relationships - Love the Axel/Roxas and the Axel/Vincent hints. But what I REALLY like is the interaction Axel and Reno have, though that's because I'm a Reno whore and am therefore biased :D So even if you don't let them have even a little sex, maybe you could include more banter between them? You do it so well. *is trying so hard not to beg for Axel/Reno, as begging is demeaning*

    So yes, really really great fanfic :D




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  • From mistresskass on January 26, 2007
    Bluhhhhh. I screwed up my email address and only just realised; there should be a '.au' on the end. xD Probably lucky I was surfing and discovered your fic during my journey.

    Ignoring my general stupidity, I adored this chapter. Reading through it I didn't see any spelling/grammar mistakes, which is excellent considering your beta is so far behind. Vincent can sometimes be so mysterious that he gives me the chills, Reno is entertaining, and Axel always manages to dredge up emotion with his endless search for Rox. His thoughts before the flashback were awesome, also adding a new dimension to the cutscenes themselves.

    Clearly I liked it, and of course you're still doing good. ^__^ Yay!
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