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Reviews for Violence Olympics: Battle for the Netherworld

By : PepperedJack
  • From jimfromtx on July 14, 2009
    Consider me interested in continuing this story, I liked it so far, and would enjoy seeing what you have cooked up. After all, I did like your other story, about Bowser, I'll bet you can do this story justice as well!
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  • From Amplify on August 10, 2008
    Just while I'm back here:

    "So, if anyone sent me email within the last, err, half year, you might want to send it again."

    Your E-mail is hidden, makes it rather hard to E-mail you =(
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  • From Amplify on August 10, 2008
    "PepperedJack's profile:
    -Violence Olympics: I had abandoned this WIP since no one seemed interested, and the plot had become partially cannibalized by another story at the time. It seemed everyone had been scared off, probably by the alphabet soup that is the warnings line. I’m not sure yet if I’ll continue it, but I’ll let everyone know for certain the next time I post anything. I apologize if any readers were upset by the lack of updates…all three of you."

    Oh, there's plenty more than three of us, most of us are just shocked into wonderous awe & silence from the greatness of it all, is all =)
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  • From ANON - kamehame on April 05, 2008
    good story wright more please I want Link Solid Snake Cloud Strife and Travis Touchdown to appear and Bomberman to
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  • From Amplify on June 15, 2007
    Love the story and can't wait for the next chapter. You've been my favourite author since after having read your first story for the first time, hell I went out and got Disgaea 1 & 2 after reading this fanfic just because of it.

    Only real error I spotted for this story (there are 5 or 6 minor errors in the first one, not bad for some 12 odd chapters) was the following as you get told in chapter 8, bad luck only playing to chapter 6/7 then writing the story:

    Dratti: I've been keeping this a secret...
    Dratti: I'm actually a female.

    A shame you picked the only second-string vassal hanging around the castle to actualy state thier gender as the male lead for the X-rated part of chapter one.

    Ah well, I eagerly await the next chapter. When can we expect it? :)
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