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Reviews for The Sound of Music: Plagas orchestra

By : parodialviruses
  • From ANON - mysteryman on February 04, 2007
    Holy shit that was a long chapter, that could easily have been two seperate chapters. O_O

    When is this clone going to stop being abused? :p Either way, this was a nice chapter for moving the story on, I think we can begin to see the end way off in the distance now in maybe another 70 chapters or so. xD

    That was an evil cliffhanger to leave us at, hurry up and write the next chapter. :(
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  • From ANON - Carlos on February 04, 2007
    liked your story like always, and youre good use of spanish too!
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  • From ANON - The Tyrant Hamster on January 31, 2007
    Phew, I'm glad you stopped there, 6,000 words is plenty XD. Still, yaoi, hehe, should be interesting since I can't think of two males that like each other in this. Well, maybe one pairing, but we'll see XD.

    The last chapter was a bit shorter and lighter than usual, but this made up for it plenty in length and detail. A special mention to "It was as if the shadows were hired to enclose their identities", I absolutely loved that line, that kind of, abstract, observant style is what I love about this story 8). The first half or so with the businessmen, or whatever they are, was well-written, and good :D, but for some reason, it made me snicker, kind of like well, Austin Powers. Oh and someone's been on Wikipedia ;), hehe. But that was good and Leon's part was both amusing and dark, from not wanting to fuck dogs, to the medallions, to suspecting statues, it was good ^^.
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  • From ANON - The Tyrant Hamster on January 31, 2007
    OK, before I forget, you had a teeny error, about halfway down you've got "only surpassed only", just thought I'd let you know :D. Before I get to the review proper though, I'm sorry to hear you'be both been sick :o, that's really unfortunate, I mean people get sick now and then, but both of you, and so badly? I really hope you both recover ASAP :). OK, so the story. It felt a bit shorter than usual, although it's been a while so I might have forgotten. I find when reading these stories you kind of have to look past the fact that some of the participants in the sex are rotting monsters, it's, strange, cus it's revolting for me, if I focus on it, but if I look past it, it's fine. It kind of, encourages you to suspend belief, just something I thought worth noting. These thoughts aside, it was a bit quicker but otherwise just as good as previous chapters, nice grimy feel with hot, lusty sex, oh and hehe, I loved the ending, he didn't want none of that, so, stab 'em, haha XD.
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  • From ANON - jared on January 31, 2007
    ah pandora pandora. I loved it. The deatails were enoirmous and detailed. Great fun too and easy to read.
    I love details like this,however, I dont think I'll be around for the yaoi part. The beginning parts with the men in black deal was really enjoyable to read. Funny stuff.
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  • From ANON - jared on January 31, 2007
    That was really cool to read. The krauser and bella sisters interaction was fun and nasty, however great job.
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  • From ANON - antobalo on January 31, 2007
    Wonderfully descriptive...deliciously decadent.
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  • From Drowning on January 30, 2007
    That was so good! *Squeals* You both rule!

    Can't wait for the next chapter :D I am all aquiver with anticipation ^^.
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  • From ANON - Manny on January 30, 2007
    That was good and quite amusing to read, however, wow, the last parts were so detailed.
    Was that on purpose? hehe. funny and overkill.

    Thanks for the read chica.
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  • From ANON - James on January 30, 2007
    I got an account strictly to review the stories, but I'm feeling lazy and don't want to sign in. After putting in a solid 9 hours of work plus uni, I must say that coming home to read this was a bit of a treat, and drag. Sorry...it was just so long. The first half with the organization goons was amusing, while Leon's self love was a bit...well, it drug on. I found myself getting lost in all that description, wondering where the thesaurus ended and the story picked up. Not that that is bad mind you, but...was all that description really necessary? You don't need to flood the pages with detail. It's overkill.

    Sorry if I nagged a bit. My mom is a pretty well known published writer and editor, so I get professional tips from her. I really did enjoy it though. Between this chapter and Crimson's latest with the Bellas, I can't wait to see what the two of you have now that you are well and ready to write once more.

    Much love as always ladies.

    ~James
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  • From ANON - mysteryman on January 29, 2007
    Wow that was a long chapter! I loved the bit at the end. XD This is such a long chapter I don't even know where to begin saying stuff, I can say it was well worth the wait The game exerpt was a nice break too.

    You've definitely not lost your touch. :D
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  • From ANON - Sugarplum on January 29, 2007
    Whoa, you finally updated! The part with the men in shadows was hilarious. The premise of their sexretaries is a very nice touch! Of course your scene of Leon, umm, relieveing himself was masterfully done! A+ for this chapter! ;)
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  • From ANON - enrique on January 29, 2007
    to edit what i said:that was for the long chapter but its better if it was a girl masturbating. :)
    I missed you.
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  • From ANON - anon on January 29, 2007
    That was very good my friend, very good.
    Keep writing because that was very entertaining and very detailed. I laughed and there was a huge smile on my face. ^__^
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  • From ANON - Carlos on January 29, 2007
    I liked it a lot, please post the next chapter soon

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