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Reviews for The Sound of Music: Plagas orchestra

By : parodialviruses

From ANON - Carlos on October 29, 2006
Really liked it! keep up the good work
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From ANON - Tammi on October 28, 2006
All I have to say is...the Ada clone is a slut. I think you all will make her fuck everyone before the fic is done. She loves Ashley's lovin'....that part made me laugh, but at the same time was pretty damn hot.
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From ANON - mysteryman on October 28, 2006
Oooh nice. Loved the first scene, but also loving how the story has moved on a bit with more plans folding, that makes the other scenes better when it's not just mindless fucking and nothing else. :D
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From ANON - James on October 27, 2006
My dear heavens. I wasn't expecting that at all! The whole panty gag thing...that's totally a rapist move, but Ada (erm, your clone) was totally loving it. The details were pretty nice without going over the top, but I think the real Ada should have had more to do. Ladies, you've given us lovers of erotic fiction a very kind treat, and just in time for Halloween too!

~James
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From ANON - Pirate Bob on October 18, 2006
Yarr...that Ada be a scurvy wench! And Salazar's breast milk fetis is more disturbing than barnacles on me wang! Yo ho me lassies! Tis a fine tale ya got! Ya best hurry it up with the wenches though....me and the crew love good wench on wench action!
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From ANON - mysteryman on October 18, 2006
Nice chapter, gotta love the insult that was dished out. XD Nice continuation of the story too inbetween the fucking, can't wait to see the next chapter. :)
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From ANON - The Tyrant Hamster on October 17, 2006
Is there a button somewhere to let you look at the reviews without submitting one? I think I've reviewed chapter 5 but I won't know until I send this, oh well. Also, I said the flaming would only get worse, not here but I said it, people should listen to dubious rodents giving advice more, especially when it's me XD.

OK OK, review. This was obviously a more, exotic breed of sex, and I have to say while a little cock growth can be exciting, the idea of foul mutant dicks isn't exactly a regular on my menu. That said though, I tried to push that gag reflex from my mind, and looking past the context, it was pretty damn hot, I thought :D. Clone Ada is really, well, I wouldn't say this about a real person, but she's a bit cock hungry isn't she XD? Hehe, anyway, no this was good, not my personal favourite, flavour, but in terms of writing, I found it high quality.
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From ANON - James on October 17, 2006
Move over Jill...its time for an Ada sandwich! Sorry...I felt that it needed to be said. I was almost hoping that you were going to have her get reamed in every hole, but there's always next time. I can't wait for the Ada-Ashley smut.
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From ANON - jared on October 17, 2006
this was a funny chapter. I thought it needed more into the Ashley and Ada though but nice job.
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From ANON - jared on October 17, 2006
Well done chapter Pandora. I enjoy the way you write.
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From maiafay376 on October 14, 2006
Thank you for stating all that in your author's notes, and replying here. I really don't understand why that chibi girl pounced on me, but I will drop it.

As for the lastest chapter...I really like where you're going with that. Leon/Mendez is one of my more freaky pairings, and one I like to read more of. This category is sadly lacking in those two (and Sera) so I look forward to that chapter whenever you post it. Nice job on the flow and POV--had no problems following it whatsoever.
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From parodialviruses on October 14, 2006
Maiafay,

thank you for clearing everything up.

I really really appreciate that.

I am fine that you copied/pasted the email from what was awhile back when this whole thing started. I won't copy paste our entire email conversation as it's over and done. Yes, I've told Crimson Belladonna that it was a bit snide, but she's only defending herself. She's already stated to me that that it's more of a quick reaction.

And I meant what I said earlier, I am very happy you commented; some people disagreed, which is fine too. (as long as no one is slandering anyone) I am making changes each time I re-read and make new installments, so CC is always welcome, encouraged, and yes, it'll make the story flow better.

Like I said in my long authors notes, for anyone else reading this: no more slandering other people's stories, or inciting a flame war. I don't mind the defense posts as long as it doesn't hurt anyone else. Thank you for them. Ok, I don't want to keep repeating myself, so I'll just leave it and hopefully *crosses fingers* No more DRAMA!

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From maiafay376 on October 14, 2006
No, I won't shut up.

I emailed V privately and we squared things off. As for Crimson--I've had no contact. The one review I DID leave, was not that bad. I don't care what you all say about the POV--I have my own opinion, one that stemmed from a review of Rare about POV switching within the same chapter and without clear dividers. I was just trying to pass along the advice. I'm negative? How so? I said I liked the idea of the music, and most descriptions were well done. At the time I reviewed--no, it wasn't labeled a parody, and NO, I did not "assume" that it was supposed to be humorous. As I stated above, I would have stayed away from it had I known that it was a parody. Why are you coming on here and screaming at me for? Why are any of Crimson and V friends jumping on my ass because of some Anon review? I never left that. It's not even how I write. Whomever it was, obviously had issues with your fic. What does that have to do with me?

Anyway, the only time I paid attention to what was going on here is when someone flamed me about "bleeding eyes". So, I come over on this board, and gosh, there's a anon review that says the same thing. Wow, what a coincedence.

Here is the email that V responded to me with, so all the little friends popping in to give their "two cents" really need to find something else to do. I left a constructive critique, yeah, it was a little punchy, but as V herself even said--her friends came on here and had an attitude about what I critiqued. There was no reason to defend anything. If you don't want the advice--then don't take it. Simple.

Email: "'m sorry that you're angry :( I re-read her review and I admit it was a bit snide and it's not the first time she's done it as we've had problems on an ff.net forum just recently - between ada/leon fans against ada/wesker - yes,its immature, but some people will be adamant about silly ship wars, even in a small fandom such as ours) I would like to say you'll have to forgive her, because it's hard for some people to express themselves, especially on the internet. It would have been more appropriate if she emailed you instead as you've stated on one of your deleted reviews; i didnt think it was necessary to keep discussing back and forth on a review board. As for the other reviewers, I know most of them are my friends, and I usually email them a story i've recently written. I don't know a few of them; the ones that were directing their review at you. But my friends, as loyal as they are, they try to be sweet about it by putting in their 2 cents that they understand the story. I know they're only being supportive. I don't like to make friends with people who flame others; i don't approve of that behavior or encourage it. Again, thank you for taking your time to peek into the story and obviously it did pique your interest. That made me happy :)

Apologies to V for posting that, but you all need to knock it off, and the authors need to fight their own battles. This is high school shit.

Email me privatly please.
maiafay376@comcast.net
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From ANON - chibiteer on October 14, 2006
First of all Maiafay, kindly shut up. If you would have read the damn story first instead of jumping to conclusions, then you would have noticed that it was a parody. Even though some reviewers do not label their fics as parodies, it only takes but one glimpse at the fic to have the common sense to realize that it's possibly a parody. Oh, and before you go jumping down my throat about who I am-I am a friend of the writer. I am disgusted by your actions, as well as the other who continue to flame and demorilize the writer. I have never been here before, but based on the actions I witnessed here, I don't think I would even write a story here. All of you need to grow up, and learn about something called constructive criticism. Criticism is meant to help the writer, not put them down. If they see that it's criticism, it would encourage them to continue the fic and to make those improvements. It doesn't work for everybody, but I'm sure this writer would have appreciated it.

If you're going to be nasty, rude, and simply annoying, then all of you, including Maiafay should leave this board and find something else to bitch about.

Your behavior was ridiculous and uncalled for.
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From ANON - anon2 on October 14, 2006
What I do not understand is why do people have to go and COMPARE other authors to others? And start dripping words like, "Oh this style is so much better and professional than THOSE people who write as children." ::::droool:::: Please STOP with the comparison!
If the story is FINE for those who like to read it; I just want to say to those people who love certain stories, please STOP comparing.
It's childish, ridiculous and downright stupid. Not only does it show how spiteful and jealous it is, it's cruel!!! Maybe these people love to hurt other people, but this started in this thread, where people placed an 'anon' review to flame.

No one has done this to Maiafay in this post. No one has GONE over there to her story to attack her or done anything of the kind, and if anyone starts going over there to post nasty words, they will get the administrater of this site to stop it.
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