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Reviews for The Sound of Music: Plagas orchestra

By : parodialviruses
  • From ANON - James on October 04, 2006
    Ah...So this is the collab fic I've heard so much about. Ladies, wonderful job. Although the first chapter was a bit detailed, it was a fun read.

    The second chapter...I was a bit confused about the two Adas until I read further into it, and the a/n of the 4th chapter. It is a bit risky of an idea, but I think the two of you know what you are doing.

    ~James
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  • From ANON - Tango on October 04, 2006
    OoO!! Ahg!!! (fall down)
    >_< so hot!! hahaha
    I'm doin' my works now, you wanna make me mad?? HAHAHA!! >w
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  • From ANON - shocked! on October 04, 2006
    A sex scene where Krauser isn't a rapist?! Has that ever been done before?!?!?! I'm wowed!
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  • From ANON - cheko on October 02, 2006
    that was great ^^
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  • From ANON - Loren on October 02, 2006
    Just finished Chapter 3. I am pretty much only reading V's parts since I like her work. Nice transition from the sexual back to the action. Good stuff. Cannot wait for more.

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  • From ANON - Loren on October 02, 2006
    Very good read. I have just finished the first chapter and I can say I was getting a little "hot and bothered."
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  • From DarkCamala on October 02, 2006
    Maiafay, no one was really flaming you unless you count those off color remarks from that anon user. You stated your opinion, and others are speaking up to say theirs. If you want to talk about flames, I can bring up a lovely hate mail I received from someone telling me, in the simplest terms, that I sucked and shouldn't even be writing.

    Forgive Pandora and me for not clearly marking that this fic was a parody...However, to some degree, I think we are slowly evolving away from our original idea of having a parody fic and instead creating something a little more.
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  • From maiafay376 on October 02, 2006
    Writing this over again, since I deleted the last two reviews. I realize this is a parody now, so I will adjust my criticism accordingly. There was no warning for parody BTW...just to let you know. This is why I was a little harsh with my advice. I do like some descriptions, the music aspect was nice, as well as the scene settings and action--a little adverb heavy at times, but if thats the style you want, then don't change it. If you want to switch POV, then go ahead. However, doing it in the same "paragraph" or even seperating the paragraphs with no astradisk can get confusing.

    The issue with Dick was a preference...but the repetitive use is what I noticed the most. But hey, whatever floats your boat. You want to use Dick--then use dick. And while I'm on that subject...yes I realize this is adult fanfiction, but your genre states many other subjects besides the obvious--it gave me the impression that there was a bit more substance to the plot besides sex. I misunderstood that--so apologies for writing a critique that was not necessary. I assume sometimes authors write for the hopes to be published someday (I do) so this is why I try to give constructive criticism. I see it was unwanted...so I won't bother reviewing again.

    On a side note: I find it intriguing that everyone "suddenly" reviewed just to flame me. I'm wondering where you all came from actually. No one bothered to defend my work when people berated me( aside from "Rare")--I just find that...interesting.

    Oh, William birkin, the word hick was in an author note's--since one of the characters was very southeren. The person took it as I called all southeren people hicks. I know you really don't care, but figured I would let you know anyway.
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  • From ANON - Sugarplum on October 02, 2006
    Hey that was a nice fic! It's an awesome read that's easy to get through at the same time. XD I especially love your action scenes that totally kick ass! I hope to read more from you soon! *thumbs up*
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  • From ANON - stevie on October 02, 2006
    the story and pov changing wasnt really that difficult to understand, ive seen a heck of a lot worse in some stories to the point where it was almost impossible to read. T_T maybe if you read it over again it will become a bit clearer to recognise the pov changes :)
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  • From ANON - william birkin on October 02, 2006
    well using the word 'nigger' in a story is offensive unless one is writing a story between two black people joking with each other as they do in real life. I saw Maiafys review board as I was curoius and saw she was harassed for writing 'hick' so i understand why people got offended too. As for how she wrote 'hick' I'm not sure as I didnt bother. (shrug)

    Story so far very fun to read, I didnt have a problem with it or got lost anywhwere.
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  • From ANON - Iesha on October 01, 2006
    I'm too tired to write a proper review...but nice story so far, and good action scenes.
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  • From ANON - Maria on October 01, 2006
    Firstly, I'd like to start off by saying POV switching is neither amateur nor sloppy. If done correctly and neatly, it's an interesting twist to a story and can give the reader a wider view of the action. The "interesting twist" part is opinion, the "wider view" part is not.

    As long as a POV switch is clearly set up, it's perfectly OK and in no way means the author doesn't know what she's doing.

    And just to nitpick, as some of us seem to enjoy doing, reviewers hardly have the right to complain about not liking a word used, especially if it's not exactly a dirty or offensive one. I'd flip out if she'd used the word "nigger", because that's horribly offensive to me, even though I'm not black. But commenting on a word that's commonly used and widely accepted is just silly.
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  • From ANON - mysteryman on October 01, 2006
    Hehe, nice plot moving. Why did you have to leave it on a cliff hanger though? :P

    Can't wait to see how she gets recovered, bring on the next chapter. :D
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  • From ANON - anon on October 01, 2006
    Pretty interesting concept, and after reading the other reviews, I have to say I beg to differ with Maiafay.

    Being a student of literature, I have read a great many novels with different points of view. I'm not sure how broad your tastes, but any good story does not focus solely on one particular POV. I took a brief glance at your own fanatical story, and YOU change POV from Leon to Ada to Wesker, back to Leon, and then to oc's.

    Anyway...to the authors, kudos. Your story is good, and it shows that you are both talented and can respect one another's ideas and works.
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