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Reviews for Lifeforce

By : tenamanda1988
  • From Ultima on October 02, 2006
    Hiya! ^_^

    You know, I haven't been checking AFF too often lately because the general slowness of additions to this section, but I'm glad I caught this one. Something about this story really hit me. I love the way it was written. I think it's because this is probably the best balance I've seen between "cocky bastard Dante" and "introspective Dante."

    Because this was done so well conceptually, though, I have to be really nitpicky about the technical side. There are some grammar (sentence fragments, mostly) and tense issues that I noticed mostly at the beginning of the story. You seemed to catch or correct them later on, though. It's just that little bit that takes away from a really well-written piece.

    Regardless, great job, and you definitely have my vote. ^_^


    - Jen
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