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Reviews for The Marriage of Heaven and Hell

By : siffen09
  • From maiafay376 on October 06, 2006
    I feel the need to review again, mostly to refute what that person said about disrespecting women. One, this is a Adult site, you're going to have questionable themes. That should be a given. Two, this story isn't real, it's fantasy. This is a place where people can write snuff, bestiality, slash, het, threesomes, and not have to worry about some little idiot writing stupid inane shit on their review board. Why are you even here if you have issues with women being disrespected? Not to mention, you write something nice about the story, then critique--not just some one liner that doesn't pretain to the story whatsoever.

    But I do want to say something about the comment from the author above me. Sorry if everyone is "overflowing" this category with stories on James, Walter, Henry, etc. I took slight offense to that. Two of the authors have nicely written stories, and when I hear the phrase "over-running" I immediately think of Mary sues or bad fics. These authors wrote no stories that can be categorized as such. At least this section is getting more story flow finally...since I remember checking here last year and noticed hardly any new fiction published. Which is the reason why I made my own tale.

    I pointed Chaos Dreamer here to post actually, since I thought this area needed a bit of stirring and new voices. But never mind, I guess we're now "overrunning" everything.

    maiafay376@comcast.net...if anyone wants to discuss further....
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  • From ANON - Anthony aka PyramidHead316 on October 04, 2006
    To the person above, I feel compelled to point out that the author of this story is a woman. In fact, most of the non-con fics I've seen have been written by women. So before you accuse anyone of "disrespecting women", do yourself a favor and research some of the facts. If you're not convinced, email the author of the story and see for yourself she's a woman. Trust me, you may be surprised to find out the kind of fics she enjoys.

    Furthermore, these are fictional characters, not real people. In this case, they're not even human characters. These are gods, and one of them is a monstrous god to boot. Not only that, but this is the Silent Hill category. Silent Hill, as in a series that deals with the worst possible human experiences. This is a series that had Pyramid Head molest other demons on screen. Not everything is going to be peachy all the time. Frankly, I don't like fluffy Walter fics, since I see Walter as being a psychotic beast. That's why I wrote Incubus, even though I'm actually a big fan of Alessa/Heather.

    I think this story is well written. It's not quite my cup of tea, since I'm more into stories with Alessa/Heather, but I can appreciate it for what it is. It's also something different in a category that's starting to overflow with fics about Henry, James and Walter. It's not my favorite of the pieces this author has done, but I think it's a fine one. I'm glad she posted it.
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  • From ANON - ffff on October 03, 2006
    I wish people would stop disrespecting women just to shock others.
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  • From ANON - The Black Shirt on October 01, 2006
    Awesome! Party, Bonus... freaky bonus.
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  • From maiafay376 on October 01, 2006
    This is interesting, well written and nice little kink session. Uique take on how Alessa came to be.

    Only advice I would give is watch the excess adverbs (descriptions) too many in a sentence is over-kill. Also, try to use a thesaurous as well...some terms a a tad repeditive. Plus some commas need to be placed in many areas--it required a few read overs for some sentence's to make sense.

    Will you be adding to this fic? Or was this a one-shot chapter?
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