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Reviews for Summer Solstice

By : KarmaKrazy
  • From TehAmeh on October 21, 2006
    Ho'shitz man, that was good! I didn't know what to expect from it, but :3 I liked it A LOT. So please, I urge you to continue.
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  • From ANON - K.H.O.A. on October 19, 2006
    You're so mean to Riku! >o< Why must you be so mean!
    lol good stuff so far, can't wait to see the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Momo_Mochi on October 19, 2006
    I always thought Roxas was a little less reserved than Sora...
    I like it! Keep it up
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  • From ANON - LBA on October 15, 2006
    For your first fanfic you are doing well. You might want to watch your grammar though.
    For example "I'll do that," he said. Instead of "I'll do that" he said. And remember start a new paragraph each time someone new speaks. Just common mistakes that alot of people make.

    I like the ending of the chapter, good cliffhanger there. I look forward to the next chapter.

    One last thing, have fun with writing it.
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