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Reviews for Fire Emblem PoR: The aftermath

By : darkwave390
  • From ANON - Shabaz on December 09, 2006
    sorry im late, exams are coming so i had to study alot. Anways nice chapter overall and i can't wait till those lemons, and i wonder who he ends up with. Can you add some ike/titinia because i like the pairing and want to see some of it? I love how there are already lots of triangles.

    Hey can you submit the censored version into fanfiction.net? i have a lil cousin of 15 who might show interest of this.

    UPDATE SOON!
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  • From NightEye on December 05, 2006
    Definitely one of the better ones that I have read. really good writing style, and you certainly have a good balance between humour and serious. Anxiously waiting for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - magebear7 on December 03, 2006
    definitely improving.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 03, 2006
    Alright, again a good chapter with no immediate spelling errors, nicely done, thumbs up to you.

    A Sacred stones crossover eh? Hmmm, this should up the ante on this fic nicely, hope to read what happens next soon, and i cannot wait for the Ike/Lethe lemon... finally, something i've longed to see is happening, finally... thank you.

    Oh yes, i do hope you will not spell 'Greil' as 'Geril' again, i doubt you will make that mistake again, but i'm just making sure.
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  • From ANON - Emblem of Radiance on December 03, 2006
    Hmmm, i must say that the quality of your fic has improved in this chapter, i can't put my finger on it, but something has changed... and its for the better. This fic now has some TRULY good promise to it, so keep up this quality, and it will become something amazing. looking forward to that Ike/lethe lemon at long last, this is something i've been WAITING for... so please, update again soon.

    Personally, i've never played Sacred Stones... so i can't say what i feel about the crossover, but one thing is certain: It made this all the more interesting.
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  • From ANON - Chva on December 02, 2006
    I loved how you got a little of SS in the story. I hope you write the next chapter soon!
    looking foward to a Lethe/Ike lemon!
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  • From ANON - Satyrion on December 02, 2006
    Shaping up nicely. Can't say I've played too much of the game, but I'd love to see something with Mordecai or Ranulf. And thank you for making the choice to not do any yuri or yaoi. I am severely tired of people making pairings where there cannot possibly be any. Oh, and could Mia be pregnant? Ike didn't pull out... Just pointing out that might be a possible twist (though potentially a pairing wrecking one).
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on November 28, 2006
    Ike/Lethe please. We need one.

    Awesome work.
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  • From ANON - 4202 on November 27, 2006
    I couldn't decide on just one. All of them sound good, but these are the three that I like the most:Ike/Lethe, Ike/Mia, Mia/gangbang.

    Ciao!,4202
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  • From ANON - Shabaz on November 26, 2006
    Woah nice chapter and i agree ike/mist lemon is kind of creepy. I understand Nepehenee's accent it's hard and stuff to do. I get why you didn't do it. I like how things are turning for Ike and Lethe, and they are my favorite pairing. However, for my vote i want ike/mai for the next chapter even if ike/lethe are my favorite pairing.
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  • From ANON - Anonelbe on November 21, 2006
    Mia/Gangbang, it'd be interesting to see how you make it work.....

    the idea is interesting, although I'd like a bit more backstory, plus Stefan needs an appearence or five, either killing an entire army of foes, or screwing Mia in a later scene, dunno


    Keep up the work
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 20, 2006
    Hmmm, good, i didn't spot any immediate spelling errors with names in this chapter, so good job on that. The lemon, hmmm, it still felt sort of 'crude' to me, it didn't flow... or maybe it's just me, i don't know. Anyways, i'm interested on what happens next, and as for pairings... yes, that Soren/Lucia/Oscar would be something interesting to see indeed.
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  • From ANON - Emblem of Radiance on November 20, 2006
    Hmmmm, the lemon was certainly more improved than the previous one, add a bit more length and you'll have something good there!

    Can't wait to see the Ike/Lethe lemon, i have searched and searched but never found one before, so please, i'm counting on you now. Also, for my vote, i would LOVE to see Mia/Ranulf lemon, when you mentioned it, it immediately caught my interest as well.

    All in all, this chapter was worth the wait, and i hope the next one will be as well, so update when you can again!
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  • From ANON - Chva on November 19, 2006
    Awsome story so far! I'm intrested in seeing a Lethe/Ike Lemon nwxt, since thereis definatly not alot of Ike/Lethe-ness!
    Looking foward to next Chap.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 10, 2006
    Hmmm... this chapter was alright, but you kept writing 'Geril', that was not his name, it was 'Greil', please fix that, it makes just reading this chapter rather stupid.
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