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Reviews for Shadows Within

By : BrightShadow
  • From Fawnheart on December 11, 2007
    Shit!~ I can't believe I did it again! my stupid touch pad clicked the remove review button! Fark! They should have a little box pop up that says,, are you sure you want to delete this review or something like that for idiots like me who can't control their clicky things!!

    I can't even remember what it said, but it no doubt would have said how brilliant this story is...deadset, I can't believe I did that again! Dammit!
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  • From Fawnheart on December 08, 2007
    Ah...brilliant! I love your fight scenes...and your humour, too cool shads, me fav net bloke!

    And...you tell your crew to stop raiding southshore, especially when I need to finish a quest, and I'll never help in a raid on Cross roads again! lol...nah only joking, it's all too much fun :P

    But that was great, seriously, it's exciting (and bloody good for us who hang for your story!) to see you update twice so quickly, but are you taking mind altering drugs or sommat? o.0

    Good job, it was a great read :D
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  • From Fawnheart on November 24, 2007
    I love it! Brilliant brilliant brilliant as usual, I can't wait to see what the rogue in hiding is up to. I think you underestimate how well you portray your characters, in one chapter you were able to show us a cocky, control-freak Night Elf warrior who is all about glory, a malicious rogue who looks like she is gonna cause a crap load of trouble and laugh gleefully all the while (which is just too cool!), established Adonai as a reluctant hero and leader who only takes the reins so that no-one gets killed (the best kind!), and a dwarf who is obviously an engineer and an eager brawler...I love your writing style, it rolls along, builds excitement, and you just know it's going to lead up to a massive bang but you can't see it coming or guess what it will be...and then to make everyone's nerves SCREAM (ya sadist!) you leave us with a cliff hanger! Lol, I really, really enjoyed this! And I don't know about being everyone's favourite, I think I send most to sleep before they get to the juicy parts, whereas you just keep the interest going the entire time. don't underestimate how enjoyable your writing and your story is :P
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  • From Fawnheart on October 30, 2007
    "Shyla felt like she'd been struck in the face with a very fat kodo. No specific part, just like one had fallen from the sky and landed on her with all the grace of a suicidal zepplin passenger."

    THAT would have to be the single, most bestest line on this entire site! I love it, and I love this chapter and this entire story. It's deep,has well timed snatches of humour, it flows, I love all the characters, especially Rajas the cranky bustard! it's just magic and well worth the wait. Even the title, "in case of chaos break human" lol hahaha I love it! You bring WoW to life.

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  • From Fawnheart on October 13, 2007
    Man I love this story! I love how you use so many different ways to tell it, through Journal entries, dreams, visions and etc. There is never a dull moment and it's just too bloody creative! This is the second time I've read it, and the second time is as good as the first, if not better...which is a rare, rare thing. I'm taking it slower this time though, so I can pay attention to every word and I'm stoked that it's still WIP, which means you HAVE TO GIVE US MORE!!!! hehehe, but as usual, shit-hot fight scenes and a variety of em...different lurve/smut scenes which are just as exciting as the fighting, and probably more importantly, a brilliant, original story-line. And as usual, I'm left gushing over this story.

    (my turn!) DAMN YOU! lol

    *moves fingers away from touch pad so said fingers don't delete the wrong things*

    P.S. hehe, my big fat ranting authors notes are bigger than your big fat ones heh! ...only not as interesting and entertaining...doh!
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  • From vivarose on July 24, 2007
    Oh so much love going around. So much so much. I am slightly amazed though, last chapter no one died, however it wouldn't be a WoW story with constant epic battles now would it? :)

    I am loving the way the story is progressing, you let out little tidbits and cookies here and there....Mmmm cookies.
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  • From vivarose on July 23, 2007
    yay this is hte month that everyone is updating! We should all have a update party XD
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  • From ANON - Ymir on July 18, 2007
    Seems like you've finally picked up the wonder of cliffhangers. :D
    As I've come to expect from you, great content - also, glad that you cut down a little on the fights and focusing more on the story, makes it alot more worthwhile.

    Keep up the great work, and make the next chapter quickly!
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  • From AzureBonds on May 09, 2007
    Great Chapter. ^_^ Can't wait for the next. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - M.R.B. on March 15, 2007
    Ah man.....I don't know how long I've been away from the computer, but at least I'm here, right?

    Great chapters by the way, looking forward for the next update.

    And I will read your other story right now.
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  • From vivarose on February 25, 2007
    Heh. One word for this chapter: HOT! And of course kinda kinky with all the little voyeuristic spirits joining the party. ^_~ Yay for multiple personality disorder and generalized creepyness taking over the smexy Rogue! Now I shall prescribe some Lithium for the dear boy :-D
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  • From ANON - Kraken265 on February 20, 2007
    I am enjoying this story very much so far. You do a good job detailing the action sequences very vividly, and the characters are quite interesting.
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  • From ANON - Ymir on February 18, 2007
    Wooo! Interest rekindled.

    I really liked that this chapter was less combat-based (got that feeling anyway), and that it created some more loose ends.
    I feel that every chapter doesn't have to include combat - nothing wrong to focus on the story itself.
    As always, you've left me eagerly awaiting the next chapter. :D
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  • From vivarose on February 15, 2007
    Again, very descriptive fight scenes. Very well done, there were a few odd capitalizations that threw me off but aside from that near very good. Some of the scene switches were a bit confusing, although that could be due to the way the format shows up online, and took a re-read or two before I got them. You've expanded a bit on some characters, giving little tidbits here and there that spark the reader's interest in them. I look forward to the next chapter and to going deeper in to the WoW universe. :-)
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  • From vivarose on February 13, 2007
    Ohh you've definitely got me hooked now! Again, wonderful fight scenes, I always seem to have trouble conveying them, and the plot is thickening in a very nice manner, I look forward to your next update!
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