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Reviews for Shadows Within

By : BrightShadow
  • From vivarose on February 10, 2007
    very interesting piece of work, you described the fight scenes quite nicely. I'm not entirely familiar with WoW, more of an EQ2 girl personally, but this fic seems to have very promising qualities to it and I shall keep a close eye on it.
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  • From ANON - Nova Alexandria on January 14, 2007
    Very well done and great structure. Easy to read, good continuation of the plot.
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  • From ANON - Ymir on January 13, 2007
    Great stuff! To be honest I thought your fights in the previous chapter was a little too long, but I gotta say I still like this story more and more by each chapter.

    Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - M.R.B. on January 10, 2007
    Well, for me the chapter is kinda short, but you did a good job.
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  • From ANON - Mike on January 08, 2007
    Awesome story, can't wait for an update :)
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  • From ANON - M.R.B. on December 08, 2006
    Yeah! I really enjoy the fight. I want more, damn it. MORE!

    Oh, I don't know you like this, but I'm agreed with Nova, each charater should have their own paragraph. So don't get this in a wrong way, I really enjoy your story, and hoping you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Nova Alexandria on December 07, 2006
    it wasn' much, you just have different people speaking in the same paragraph when each person should have their own. Another good chapter and you described the fight really well, I hate writing battles, they drive me insane.
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  • From ANON - Nova Alexandria on November 23, 2006
    Everything looked and sounded interesting except for the last paragraph, that needed to be divided up. Otherwise, interest has been aroused and i would like to read more.
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  • From ANON - Tim on November 17, 2006
    Great scaffolding for a great story!


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  • From ANON - Anon on November 14, 2006
    Very good, please continue!

    I laughed when The undead told him his grammar sucks.
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  • From ANON - Ymir on November 09, 2006
    Don't really know what to say, but please write the next part soon. I really want to continue reading.
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  • From ANON - Employee13 on November 06, 2006
    Yay!
    Well written! Interesting!
    I want to know more, please keep writing!
    [exclamation points are meant to inspire you]
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  • From ANON - M.R.B. on November 04, 2006
    Wow...This is very intersting.

    Update.
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  • From AzureBonds on November 04, 2006
    That was awesome. I loved your battle scenes. The pulling out of the rib and using it to stab the enemy that it was pulled from... what a great touch! :D Loved it! Keep up the good work. I would love to read more of this story. :D
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  • From ANON - Mistah Eleganza on November 04, 2006
    Hmmm, quite a promising beginning. Very "13th Warrior" with the whole language thing; I think its a great idea, a feat of observation and intellect. Your description of the battle with the satyrs was well crafted and entertaining. I do look forward to reading your next installment! (Add more trolls; my favorites; and you win!)

    Please keep on writing!
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