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Reviews for Valentine's heat

By : PandoraMasters
  • From maiafay376 on February 08, 2007
    You know, I could nit-pick the pairing, the dialog, and any aspect of this story if I wanted too. However, that one little note in the beginning that states quite simply: "Written for someone special" pretty much exempts you from most crits I might have. Even if you just slapped it all together, (which I can see, you did not.) it would still exempt you in my book. This is the joy of gift fics. Regardless of pairing, or the fact it makes you want to vomit, or cringe, or spit pea soup--or roll over and just DIE--there is always the option of clicking the back button, or simply closing the browser. OR, in most cases, if the pairing isn't to your liking, don't read at all.

    I can tell this is in a different style than your usual work, more gritty and yes, hardcore. Not a fan of that myself, but the descriptions weren't really for me or anyone else. They were for the intended recipient...and whoever may like this particular pairing. I DO wish to say that it's well-written and interesting, and unlike most lemons out there. While others may disagree, again, I come back to the first point. This story was not intended for them.

    I see this fic as a painting you hang in your living room. While guests may visit; flop on your couch, join you for dinner, or use the bathroom--this piece is something they may like or dislike. While it's perfectly fine to comment in either manner, telling you they hate it and they wish to vomit is a little rude. It would be information a guest should keep to themselves. Especially since said "painting" is something personal that you and another share. Are you going to change it or take it down? No, probably not. And you shouldn't. As long as you and the one you made this for is happy with the prose. Then it's a special gift.
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  • From ANON - Meryl on December 19, 2006
    *fapfapfap* *notices people watching* O_O *stops fapping*
    Uh, anyway... yeah, I don't care for Jill/Wesker that much. But this is still fap worthy :3
    What would be really hot is Claire and Wesker. Yeah. A good ol' bodice ripper with Claire would be awesome. But that's just my fantasy :p *reads until she can fap no longer*
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  • From ANON - Jared on December 15, 2006
    Nice descriptions and very fast paced yet exciting to read; keep up the good work and more story between these two.
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  • From ANON - Heather on December 04, 2006
    Elitist I am but good very good. You have a way of drawing in your audience. Very nice, and I'm not into the fandom very much but I still enjoyed it.
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  • From ANON - Boo on December 04, 2006
    Definitely your hottest fic yet. Good job even though I have no idea who those characters are!
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  • From ANON - anon on December 04, 2006
    wow damn good.
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  • From ANON - sapphirexkat2 on November 28, 2006
    that was so fuckin' hot. great job!! I love a good Wesker fic. well-written to boot, too!
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  • From ANON - Bhreee on November 19, 2006
    Gah!XD I hate the pairing, but you wrote it so hot! ^^ I applaud you again;
    Great job.
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on November 17, 2006
    Me so horny.
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  • From ANON - koyukitori on November 13, 2006
    OMG! This is hot!
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  • From ANON - The Tyrant Hamster on November 13, 2006
    Mmmm, that was good, slim on the surrounding plot, with just enough to stop people feeling like they were fucking in a void, but then again, there's little point denying the focus of the story, hehe. These damn review boxes always make my text feel so inadaquate, all thick and long like they are XD. Anyway, there wasn't quite as much dialogue as there usually is, often there's a bit more, even if it's just lustful cursing. That's not a bad thing mind, but it gave the story a slightly fast-fuck feel, you know? If that was the idea, good job, it's not the biggest or best smut I've seen, but it's to the point, easy to read and well-written in the right ways. The pinning, molesting, fucking and doggy style parts were all well done, although it felt like they could have used just a little more description in places. Like for example, there was about as much description of Jill's boots as there was of Wesker screwing her against the wall. Those tiny things aside, it was a good, quick screw.
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  • From ANON - Diabolique on November 12, 2006
    Wow that was super hot! LOL loved how you described Wesker like a 'piston'. XD I hope I get to read more from you soon!
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  • From ANON - Carlos on November 12, 2006
    its HOT, like always
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  • From ANON - tboy on November 12, 2006
    I think you've topped yourself here. And I'm SO jealous of that special someone that inspired this. ;)
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  • From ANON - Iesha on November 11, 2006
    Wow, very hot, descriptive stuff!
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